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Syed Abdullah

Syed Abdullah

@satshine 

Pakarab Public School , Multan

I am Syed Abdullah

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Syed Abdullah

Old age

2014 Apr 3rd 444 Views
The old men remember their pastand their past was very fast.The body is weak and leanIt’s a sorrowful sceneThe childhood is gone,the happiness... read more
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Sulaima - I like your poem very much.    2014 Apr 7th
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Syed Abdullah

Phoenix

March 2014 2014 Mar 8th 800 Views
Burning the forestburning the skyborn from ash to burn the world.With the speed of lightwith the power of sunit flies through the worldlike a burning... read more
Fatimah - its not necessary to end each line with rhyming words , these rhyming poems r...    2014 May 10th
Sarah - nice but please try to end each line with the same sounding words.    2014 May 3rd
Aleena - awesome keep it up i agree with all comments welldone    2014 Apr 23rd
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Full Name
 
Syed Abdullah
 
Location
 
Pakistan, Punjab, Multan
 
School
 
Pakarab Public School
 
Class
 
8

I am Syed Abdullah

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Friendship is not always True! Once best friends, Hira and Maha got separated because of one of their jealous friend... read more
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