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Fatima Tariq

Fatima Tariq

@fatimast 

Bloomfield Hall School , Faisalabad

I am Fatima. My school name is Bloomfield hall school.I live in Faislabad,Pakistan.I love sport like skating badminton etc.I love...

Stories

Fatima Tariq

Revenge

Nov 22nd 120 Views
I was about to cry. Every student in the classroom was laughing. Look at yourself! cried Rebbeca. How did you get it? I cried. Anne, replied... read more
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Fatima Tariq

The fairy and the...

2015 Jun 25th 418 Views
The next day Bella went to the longest mountain. But one man came after Bella.When Laina came out the man shouted fairy!.Bella and Liana saw... read more
4 People Like this! - Wania TauqeerShayan HasnainLola LolaFatima Tariq

Shayan - I love your story    Sep 14th
Wania - I also wrote nice it also means that you are a good writer Fatima    2015 Oct 4th
Fatima - Mahrukh you think I am a good writer. No one said it to me expect you and my...    2015 Oct 1st
6 Comments
Fatima Tariq

A trip to island (part 2)

2015 May 24th 405 Views
The next day,I was with Mark and Susan.We saw a girl.You......you are the girl I saw when I climbed up the tree said Mark.She is the girl I saw said... read more
2 People Like this! - Princess AlexaYumna Mujeeb

Fatima - Guys I have no more idea for it so I have stoped writting my stories. The fairy...    2015 Oct 1st
Wania - Amazing story    2015 Sep 24th
Princess - thanks for bieng my friend and your story is very nice    2015 Jun 5th
6 Comments
Fatima Tariq

The strange forest (part...

2015 Apr 23rd 411 Views
I closed my eyes when I open my eyes,I saw Luna.What are you doing here? asked Luna.I told her that someone said me that lets go out.Now lets sleep... read more
Wania - Lol    2015 Sep 22nd
Aliza Aamir - leave it    2015 Aug 28th
Dania - loooooooooooooooooove it    2015 Jun 19th
7 Comments
Fatima Tariq

A trip to island

2015 Apr 20th 355 Views
It was out trip to a island when we reached our teacher said some kids will go to take food,some to take woods and some to take water.I went to take... read more
Wania - Spelling mistakes.........but pretty nice    2015 Nov 13th
Rihab - its a gud story but there are spelling mistakes    2015 Jun 24th
Admin - Check the My Page winners here https://www.facebook.com/vshineworld    2015 May 29th
4 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Never be jealous and...

2015 Apr 20th 374 Views
The next  Nila came back from the school.She started thinking something.Her mother came.Nila,Maria told me everything said her mother.But mother... read more
Berha - just improve and upgrade your stories a little bit and I think you're stories...    Apr 27th
Wania - Thank u    2015 Nov 13th
Wania - Amna please accept my friend request plzz    2015 Oct 4th
5 Comments
Fatima Tariq

The strange forest

2015 Apr 20th 493 Views
Our school had a trip to a forest.All chidren were playing.But I went near the river.I heard a voice of a girl she was crying.I asked the what... read more
Shehram - its at my back and not back here. story is aoook    2015 Apr 21st
1 Comment
Fatima Tariq

The golden flower

2015 Apr 20th 421 Views
Once there lived two best friends,Lia and Mary.Near thier home was a hill on which stood a giant castle.Nobody lived in that beautiful castle.One... read more
Aiza - nice one    Sep 21st
Wania - Gud story Aden    2015 Sep 24th
Fatima - Arij you are right this is a great story    2015 Jun 8th
10 Comments
Fatima Tariq

The fairy and the...

2015 Apr 20th 326 Views
A long time ago there was a door in the longest mountain of the kingdom.The poeple tried to open the door but they cannot. The king had one daughter... read more
3 People Like this! - Wania TauqeerPrincess AlexaGhania Mustaqeem

Phoenix - Nice:)    Nov 6th
Wania - Well....good but can be much more better    2015 Nov 13th
MARYAM - Okay, good start but you can improve it..    2015 Apr 23rd
3 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Never be jealous and...

2015 Mar 30th 365 Views
Maria said to Nila that Nila do not lie to all the girls. I know that I am the most intelligent girl in the all school. But do not be jealous from... read more
3 People Like this! - Princess AlexaAyesha KianiGhania Mustaqeem

Wania - Great!    2015 Oct 4th
Admin - Check the My Page winners here https://www.facebook.com/vshineworld    2015 May 29th
Ayesha - part 3????    2015 Apr 9th
5 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Step sisters can stay...

2015 Mar 18th 423 Views
But Lily feels sad for them. Step mother and Kate! Please do not go say Lily. Mother I cannot live with a bad step sister said Kate. Mother and Kate... read more
3 People Like this! - Princess AlexaAyesha KianiGhania Mustaqeem

Wania - Nice and Amazing story Keep it up    2015 Sep 24th
Admin - Check the My Page winners here https://www.facebook.com/vshineworld    2015 May 29th
Ghania - yourwelcomefatima    2015 Apr 29th
7 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Never be jealous and...

2015 Mar 4th 368 Views
Once there was a girl named Maria. She read in a school named girls high school. She was the most intelligent girl in the high school. The all school... read more
3 People Like this! - Princess AlexaGhania MustaqeemJasmine Bilal

Berha - I'm very sorry I was trying to find this story just to say sorry Very nice...    Apr 27th
Fatima - Nice story Fatima. @Berha I think it would be better to encourage her, I think...    2015 Apr 1st
Fatima - What does it mean Jasmine    2015 Mar 25th
6 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Step sisters can stay...

2015 Feb 24th 376 Views
Lia why did you give Lily your rice? asked her mother. Because Lily is not my step sister she is my sister that i why I gave her my rice said Lia... read more
2 People Like this! - Princess AlexaGhania Mustaqeem

Jasmine - what about next part?    2015 Mar 3rd
Fatima - I will    2015 Mar 2nd
Berha - please improve grammar please improve grammar    2015 Mar 1st
4 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Haunted house (part 4 )...

2015 Feb 18th 397 Views
Please don’t kill my friends said Emma. Never ever said the girl. The girl throw knife on Emma leg. Emma! shouted Bella. Emma was dead. Bella... read more
2 People Like this! - Princess AlexaGhania Mustaqeem

Fatima - i liked it really much    2015 Apr 8th
Manahil - NYC! Keep writing    2015 Mar 22nd
Aeman - You could've made it a bit better ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️    2015 Feb 25th
4 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Step sisters can stay...

2015 Feb 9th 554 Views
Once there was a girl named Lily she lived with her father and her step mother and her two step sisters named Lia and kate. Lily father was died... read more
Tooba - nice for ur age    2015 Feb 23rd
Fatima - I will write next part Jasmine    2015 Feb 18th
Shaheer - Great othr thn errors    2015 Feb 17th
5 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Haunted house (part 3 )

2015 Feb 5th 330 Views
Emma, Bella and Max went to the bedroom. They saw Jim dead body. Oh my god said Max. They saw back the girl was standing there. You cannot escape... read more
2 People Like this! - Princess AlexaGhania Mustaqeem

Umair - next part pls    2015 Feb 5th
1 Comment
Fatima Tariq

Best friends sometimes...

2015 Feb 4th 351 Views
Mariam came too. How dare you Khadija slapped my best friend said Mariam. I said Mariam you are not a true friend. And all our friends are with me... read more
2 People Like this! - Princess AlexaGhania Mustaqeem

Fatima - Thanks    2015 Dec 21st
Jasmine - anyway great story Fatima keep it up;)    2015 Feb 21st
Shaheer - But wasnt good with Mariam . Lol    2015 Feb 17th
3 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Haunted house (part 2)

2015 Jan 26th 379 Views
They saw the girl she did his hand forward and Bella fall down. Bella are you ok? asked Emma. I am ok said Bella. The girl she is not there said Max... read more
2 People Like this! - Princess AlexaGhania Mustaqeem

Shaheer - Noorul plz will you explain    2015 Feb 17th
Mahrukh - good but some grammer mistakes......    2015 Jan 30th
Noorul - but i can ........    2015 Jan 28th
5 Comments
Fatima Tariq

The haunted house (part...

2015 Jan 19th 404 Views
Once there was a Hunted house no one lives in the house. One day there were four friends’ two girls and two boys named Emma, Bella, Jim and Max... read more
Manahil - wrong english! you should do a little more practice .Any how,it is good.    2015 Feb 8th
Noorul - nice.......    2015 Jan 28th
Berha - so scary Plz write next part and quick    2015 Jan 21st
3 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Best friends sometimes...

2015 Jan 18th 371 Views
The next day Khadija said to Ayesha that you can come to my home today. Ok said Ayesha. Ayesha came. Ayesha and Khadija went up. I saw everything... read more
2 People Like this! - Princess AlexaGhania Mustaqeem

Raveeha - u r a gud writer but instead of 5-6 small parts,plz write 1-2 bigger parts.i...    2015 May 8th
Fatima - I will write part 5    2015 Feb 2nd
Berha - You still have not written fifth part    2015 Feb 2nd
5 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Best friends sometimes...

2015 Jan 17th 352 Views
You are right. She has also steal my best friend said Khadija. I said Mariam was not a true best friend they all call me jerk. You are not a jerk. I... read more
3 People Like this! - Princess AlexaGhania MustaqeemHabibah Rehman

Jasmine - write part 4 please    2015 Jan 18th
Habibah - it is great.    2015 Jan 18th
2 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Best friends some times...

2015 Jan 13th 382 Views
I cried Mariam. Mariam looked back. Hi meet my new best friend Ayesha Mariam. Mariam you are my best friend I said. Shut up you jerk Ayesha said. All... read more
Haifa - I'm sorry but u have loads of grammar mistakes plus u need to learn how to...    2015 May 11th
Berha - why are you making such small parts...    2015 Jan 18th
Habibah - please write the next of the story    2015 Jan 17th
5 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Best friends sometimes...

2015 Jan 11th 426 Views
Once I had a best friend named Mariam.I said Mariam Do you know that there is a new girl in the town .And she is looking for a best. Her name is... read more
Berha - pace is very fast    2015 Jan 18th
Aden - exiting!!!! Grammer and pace is poor    2015 Jan 15th
Berha - lots of grammar mistatakes but very good    2015 Jan 14th
5 Comments

Poems

Fatima Tariq

Friends are best

2015 Jan 14th 319 Views
Never say GoodbyeSo ever be happyWe will play togetherEven the hen willlay eggsMy best friendYou pass every testYou are lostI will find youBecauseYou... read more
1 Person like this! - Princess Alexa

Fatima - Thank you Umair,Ayesha and Mubashra.Aden said that Not good confusing and...    2015 Mar 1st
Mubashra - nice    2015 Feb 9th
Ayesha - It's a very good poem.    2015 Feb 5th
5 Comments

Jokes

Fatima Tariq

Riddles

2015 Apr 20th 540 Views
Q1:What is the thing that poors have and riches need?Q2:A male fish has to give eggs how would the male fish give eggs?Q3:I do not cry but I make you... read more
Wajeeha Masood - 3.onion    2015 Jul 19th
Ayma - i do not get the second one    2015 Jun 25th
Aneesa - 1. nothing 2. Male fish doesn't gives eggs 3. Onion    2015 May 24th
6 Comments

Drawings

Fatima Tariq

Kite flying

2015 Apr 20th 360 Views
Kite flying
2 People Like this! - Princess AlexaFatima Tariq

MUSFIRAH - nice.    Feb 6th
Rihab - LOL means"laugh out loud    2015 Jun 25th
Aden - Aroona what does LOL mean?I dont know    2015 Jun 18th
5 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Dress

2015 Mar 25th 396 Views
Dress
3 People Like this! - Princess AlexaFatima TariqDuaa Amer

Fatima - My talent is not art    2015 Nov 11th
Admin - Check the My Page winners here https://www.facebook.com/vshineworld    2015 May 29th
Fatima - guys how can i show you my ones    2015 Apr 15th
7 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Skirts

2015 Mar 25th 410 Views
skirts
4 People Like this! - Jasmine BilalFatima TariqDuaa AmerAlishba Shahzad

Aliza Aamir - sorry for my rude comment    May 24th
Jasmine - nice but very simple but skirts don't have i love my mom written on them or...    2015 Aug 15th
Admin - Check the My Page winners here https://www.facebook.com/vshineworld    2015 May 29th
8 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Book shelf

2015 Mar 18th 421 Views
Book shelf
2 People Like this! - Duaa AmerAlishba Shahzad

Admin - Check the My Page winners here https://www.facebook.com/vshineworld    2015 May 29th
Dua - it's good    2015 Mar 31st
Fatima - Thank you Dua and Hamna    2015 Mar 24th
5 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Allah gives us what ever...

2015 Mar 18th 450 Views
Allah gives us what ever we want
3 People Like this! - Amna AhmedDuaa AmerHiba Khan

Irza - but i don't think drawing is suitable.    2015 Sep 14th
Irza - quite nice    2015 Aug 24th
Admin - Check the My Page winners here https://www.facebook.com/vshineworld    2015 May 29th
6 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Houses

2015 Mar 18th 412 Views
houses
3 People Like this! - Fatima TariqDuaa AmerAlishba Shahzad

Admin - Check the My Page winners here https://www.facebook.com/vshineworld    2015 May 29th
Fizzah Asim - You made the houses using arrows???????????????????    2015 Apr 2nd
Duaa - nice try    2015 Mar 29th
6 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Swim

2015 Feb 20th 419 Views
swim
1 Person like this! - Tooba Fatima

Hamna - great drawing    2015 Mar 13th
Fatima - Thanks    2015 Feb 24th
Tooba - nice matches with ur age    2015 Feb 23rd
4 Comments
Fatima Tariq

Mountains

2015 Dec 31st 362 Views
mountains
2 People Like this! - Mubashra AyubFatima Tariq

Fatima - Thanks a lot Mubshra.After 2 years I have got a great friend.My.best left the...    Apr 19th
Fatima - No they are not    Mar 10th
Mubashra - oh Fatima thanks but your drawings are beautiful than mine really ....... :)...    2015 Feb 9th
11 Comments

Articles

Fatima Tariq

Our erath

2015 Mar 30th 322 Views
Our earth is our home. If there is no Erath. Then what will we do. We cannot go other planets. In some pleats there is no water or it is too much hot... read more
Pretty - nice object    Oct 3rd
Wania - Awesome    Sep 23rd
Berha - Is it Erath or Earth but very very good    May 15th
8 Comments
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Full Name
 
Fatima Tariq
 
Location
 
Pakistan, punjab, Faisalabad
 
School
 
Bloomfield Hall School
 
Class
 
4

I am Fatima. My school name is Bloomfield hall school.I live in Faislabad,Pakistan.I love sport like skating badminton etc.I love making friend

Hobbies
Travelling
Swimming
Skating
Badminton
Board games
Indoor games
Friendship
Writing stories
Cricket
Reading
Video games
The Human Heart Annie was a 15 year old girl. She belonged to a middle class family.She was the only... read more
Ilsa Ahmed
Peshawar Attack Pakistan has experienced many dreadful and terrifying attacks in history but the worst of... read more
The love of the bird and the rose Once upon a time a bird falls in love with white rose. On day he proposed her but the... read more
The fairy and the princess (part 2) The next day Bella went to the longest mountain. But one man came after Bella.When Laina... read more
The golden flower Once there lived two best friends,Lia and Mary.Near thier home was a hill on which stood... read more
just like mom a girl came and ask her mother"mom i am looking fat"mom:"no you are so smart"ok " then my... read more
who is most lazy? Teacher (to class): I will give 50 rs to him who is the laziest student of the class. Now... read more
Destiny..........and fate Although, I knew what I wanted to say, at the important moment I could not open my mouth... read more
Getting lost in a new city I used to live in the country. We had a farm house. My job was to take care of the female... read more
The family tree Elaine was writing bad about her family in her diary! "I have such a weird family they... read more
Armughan Bin Atiq
A real story of ghost It was 9:00 clock I was alone at home and was watching t.v , there was a knock on the... read more
teacher I see the world in different lightI can discriminate between wrong and rightI perceive... read more
Drinking milk... Suggested by Sehar Shahzad
A number of children do not drink milk. How can they be motivated to drink... read more
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What we can do in these summer vacations?  read more
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A healthy breakfast is really important for us. It gives energy for whole... read more
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Today, majority of people like to eat at hotels almost every day. They... read more
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