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Aden Seerat

Aden Seerat

@aden 

Bloomfield Hall School , Faisalabad

My name is Aden.I am 11 years old.I study in BLOOMFIELD-HALL school, grade 6. I love writing ficiton.

Stories

Aden Seerat

Dark beauty

2016 Nov 22nd 228 Views
I stood outside the school gate, in the school grounds. The entrance was in front of me. I took a deep breath. I saw students sitting on the benches... read more
2 People Like this! - Fatima TariqWania Tauqeer

Ayesha - Very nice.    May 15th
Fatima - Come on publish the next part    May 12th
Syeda - Awesome Should continue    Feb 22nd
9 Comments
Aden Seerat

Memories

2016 Mar 7th 482 Views
Where am I? asked the little girl looking at the doctor. You are at the hospital, do you remember anything? No! she replied. You had a car accident... read more
3 People Like this! - Wania TauqeerNabiha TariqManail Syeda

Fatima - Okay I will try to spread it but before publish the next part    May 12th
Ifsah - next part plzz..its quite pointless    2016 Nov 6th
Musfira - next part?    2016 Jul 22nd
12 Comments
Aden Seerat

Something in the room

2015 Sep 3rd 580 Views
I followed them inside. There is something in my room! Shouted the girl. A noise from the balcony came.The girl stepped back.The teacher went forward... read more
3 People Like this! - Fatima TariqWania TauqeerSaqifa Maryam

Ayesha - Nice.    May 15th
Fatima - Aden have u stopped writing it    May 13th
Fatima - Nice sis    May 13th
9 Comments
Aden Seerat

Some thing in in the...

2015 Apr 20th 422 Views
I wanted to scream.I closed my eyes.When I opened them I was near my room.I saw another room I knew it was of the girl I met in the ground.The door... read more
1 Person like this! - Wania Tauqeer

Fatima - Intersting    May 13th
Wania - Good    2015 Sep 22nd
Saqifa - what mean of ''in in'' in your story title?    2015 Sep 20th
5 Comments
Aden Seerat

Some thing in in the...

2015 Apr 20th 457 Views
I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. When I opened them I was near my room.I saw the girls room who I met in the playground.I heard somebody... read more
1 Person like this! - Wania Tauqeer

Fatima - What will happen next cant wait    May 13th
Wania - Very nice    2015 Nov 13th
2 Comments
Aden Seerat

Something in in the room...

2015 Feb 7th 468 Views
Who are you? I asked. I am lily. I live in this hostel near your room she said. You mean next room, but I thought it was empty I told. No, I have... read more
3 People Like this! - Aureen AfzalTooba FatimaAyesha Rizwan

Fatima - Aureen why are you not coming to school?    2015 Apr 10th
Aureen - really nice aden. please publish the next part. thxxxxxxxxxxxx.:)    2015 Apr 9th
Tooba - gud1    2015 Feb 23rd
6 Comments
Aden Seerat

Lia My mermaid friend

2015 Jan 30th 665 Views
It was my first day at a new school. We had gone in a field near a lake. All kids were playing except me because I had no friends. I was sitting the... read more
1 Person like this! - Fatima Tariq

Aiza - Well your story is like an episode of Sofia the first,"the floating palace" but...    2016 Dec 30th
Minahil - Nice story but make it suspense!    2016 Mar 28th
Aden - Thank you all!Your cheerful comments are lovely and an inspiration for me!    2015 Jul 23rd
10 Comments
Aden Seerat

Something in in the room...

2015 Jan 18th 453 Views
I breathed in horror. Oh my god I thought. Someone help!!!Help!! I shouted. Ever one came running. what happened asked the teacher. The girl I said... read more
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Fatima - You do it aswell!!    May 13th
Shehram - its not at morning its in morning , nice story though, and everyone can't come...    2015 Apr 21st
Shehram - its not at morning its in morning , nice story though, and everyone can't come...    2015 Apr 21st
5 Comments
Aden Seerat

Something in the room

2015 Jan 17th 458 Views
I was going to my new boarding school. When I reached it I asked the girl in reception where is my room? It’s the only room top floor she told... read more
1 Person like this! - Fatima Tariq

Fatima - Just fine    May 13th
Berha - nicely written    2015 Jan 21st
Fatima - Great Please write next part    2015 Jan 17th
3 Comments
Aden Seerat

Fairy 2

2014 Sep 23rd 545 Views
A month after fairy’s visit the girl was standing in the garden. She was looking very sad. I wish fairy was here she said to herself. Suddenly... read more
Minahil - Cute    2016 Mar 28th
Ayma - How sweet I it is also very true ;-)    2015 Dec 29th
Ali - Nice    2014 Dec 24th
11 Comments
Aden Seerat

Fairy

2014 Aug 22nd 485 Views
Once upon a time there lived a little girl in a small cottage with her parents. One day as she was playing outside she saw an injured pigeon. This... read more
4 People Like this! - Fatima TariqAshra AmeenAyesha AamirAden Seerat

Jasmine - Please accept my request too Aden.Here it comes    2015 Aug 27th
Aden - i love this story    2014 Dec 1st
Aden - part two is coming soon    2014 Sep 21st
6 Comments

Poems

Aden Seerat

Betrayed

Mar 21st 125 Views
Were all the things you said,not true but instead,A lie!Was all the time we spent together,All those promises that will last forever,A lie?Why do I... read more
1 Person like this! - Wania Tauqeer

Nisha - Deep    Apr 10th
Wania - Keep it up    Apr 7th
2 Comments
Aden Seerat

Funny bunny

2014 Sep 23rd 518 Views
I have a bunnyIt’s very funnyIt sleeps when it’s sunnyIt does not like honeyIt has a red noseAnd small toesHop hop it goesAll over the... read more
2 People Like this! - Fatima TariqCocoaberry Terry

Abeera - aauuuuuu......socute    2015 Mar 17th
FR NO.1 - very nice    2015 Feb 21st
Fatima - good    2014 Dec 19th
6 Comments
Aden Seerat

Worksheet

2014 Aug 22nd 451 Views
I have to solve a worksheet.In it are question1,2,3Teacher has told us not to cheat.The worksheet is very hard indeed. read more
3 People Like this! - Fatima TariqAyesha AamirAden Seerat

Fatima - Good 1 ADEN    2014 Dec 9th
Fatima - good    2014 Dec 9th
Fatima - Good 1 ADEN    2014 Dec 9th
3 Comments
Aden Seerat

My toy car

January 2015 2014 Aug 21st 489 Views
Where is my toy car?Where can it go?It’s not in my room.And it’s not near the broom.I am so sad.My mother will be so mad.Where is my toy... read more
4 People Like this! - Aiza IqbalAmn HassanAyesha AamirAden Seerat

Aden - I am so surprised that this poem I have written and its the winner!    2015 Jun 2nd
Fatima - A wonderful poem!!    2014 Dec 9th
Amn - No I don't    2014 Sep 8th
3 Comments

Drawings

Aden Seerat

Earth

2015 Mar 18th 509 Views
Earth
2 People Like this! - Fatima TariqDuaa Amer

Admin - Check the My Page winners here https://www.facebook.com/vshineworld    2015 May 29th
Fatima - Great    2015 Mar 24th
Hamna - People say that earth is round but the one I am seeing is oval :D anyway lovely    2015 Mar 18th
3 Comments
Aden Seerat

Cat

2015 Mar 18th 471 Views
cat
2 People Like this! - Duaa AmerMaryam Shahab

Fatima - 😍😍😍    May 13th
Admin - Check the My Page winners here https://www.facebook.com/vshineworld    2015 May 29th
Hamna - Aden i said sorry to hiba and him but he was in a mood to fight . And i can't...    2015 Apr 4th
11 Comments
Aden Seerat

Uncle shine

2015 Jan 30th 519 Views
Uncle shine
2 People Like this! - Tooba FatimaAyesha Rizwan

Duaa - cute :p    2015 Mar 20th
Abeera - cute    2015 Feb 25th
Tooba - :) nice    2015 Feb 23rd
7 Comments
Aden Seerat

Save earth

2015 Jan 14th 487 Views
save earth
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Ayesha - Saving environment is a good habbit and you tryed nice!    2015 Feb 19th
Bushra - True. We all should try to save r Earth.    2015 Jan 18th
Fatima - Yes we must save our Earth and we must save our environment.Great My sister    2015 Jan 16th
4 Comments
Aden Seerat

Castle

2014 Aug 22nd 491 Views
castle
1 Person like this! - Munnazzar Shahzad

Fatima - GR8    2016 Feb 25th
Aden - You mean old girl shut up.THIS IS FOR YOU fARISTA    2014 Dec 8th
Farishta - HAHAHAHA !now which type of drawing is that?    2014 Dec 4th
8 Comments
Aden Seerat

Ufo

2014 Aug 22nd 474 Views
ufo
1 Person like this! - Munnazzar Shahzad

Duaa - it is AWSOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE    2016 Apr 5th
Maida - SOSO GOOD    2016 Mar 31st
Laiba - Nice    2014 Dec 2nd
7 Comments

Articles

Aden Seerat

Save animals

2015 Jan 9th 428 Views
Why the killers are are killing the animals. I like animals. My favourite animal is Elephant. But when I heard that Elephant are finishing. I like... read more
2 People Like this! - Jasmine BilalUmair Umair

Fatima - Hibibah please trust me.I have write this article.    2015 Mar 1st
Habibah - Exellent    2015 Jan 18th
Fatima - I have write this article    2015 Jan 13th
4 Comments


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Full Name
 
Aden Seerat
 
Location
 
Pakistan, Punjab, Faisalabad
 
School
 
Bloomfield Hall School
 
Class
 
5

My name is Aden.I am 11 years old.I study in BLOOMFIELD-HALL school, grade 6. I love writing ficiton.

Hobbies
Swimming
Skating
Badminton
Friendship
Football
Reading
Travelling
Tv watching
Someone Somewhere
Revenge “DING DONG” the doorbell rang. I was drinking lemonade, eating chips and... read more
Seasons  Seasons, seasons I love seasonsSummer winter spring & autumnIn summer you go to... read more
Notorious Room part 1 I was having my exams after two months. For good preparation I thought in solitude I... read more
fairy Once upon a time there lived a little girl in a small cottage with her parents. One day... read more
worksheet I have to solve a worksheet.In it are question1,2,3Teacher has told us not to cheat.The... read more
my toy car Where is my toy car?Where can it go?It’s not in my room.And it’s not near the... read more
The Elephant Why did the elephant paint him in different colors?Because he wanted to hide himself in... read more
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Blood I had been running for what seemed like hours. But no matter how much I ran, the echoing... read more
Dark beauty I stood outside the school gate, in the school grounds. The entrance was in front of me... read more
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Sea Diary  It was a regular day and I was late again. As I entered the school premises, I... read more
Destiny..........and fate Although, I knew what I wanted to say, at the important moment I could not open my mouth... read more
Expect The Unexpected Roy always loved his grandpa’s house. He visited this place in his vacations. He... read more
Someone Somewhere
Revenge “DING DONG” the doorbell rang. I was drinking lemonade, eating chips and... read more
Getting lost in a new city I used to live in the country. We had a farm house. My job was to take care of the female... read more
Boy and lottery ticket There was a poor boy named Asif.One day he was just walking and he just buy Rs 100... read more
Dex Ell
My Kitttens Love is a very complicated word. No one can explain it. The reason behind it is that this... read more
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