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Rameen Mushtaq
Rameen Mushtaq
Head Start School System
Cool Pool
Published On Feb 5th 2013
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In my school
There is a pool
Which is very cool
Only the ones which are fool
Can jump in that cool pool
There is a rule that we have to follow the schedule
If we are not fools
We must go from a stool
In that cool pool
There is no other tool
Other than a mule
To walk to that cool pool.
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Comments 30
Bushra Rameen i am also a directioner Bushra
Jan 16th 2016
 
 
eman Hi rameen chalo abb batein karlo Eman
Apr 8th 2015
 
 
Laibah I cant believe your a fourth grader cause your poems are sweet and your comments are too! ;) Laibah
Jan 14th 2015
 
 
AINA Advance Eid Mubarak Aina
Oct 4th 2014
 
 
rameen Sorry jawab late ho gaya but we are calm and we love you so plz do not WORRY! Rameen
Sep 13th 2014
 
 
Nimra Aww thankyouu rameen :) ;) so how r u? :) wtz goingg on these dayys?? :) how r ur summer vacations goingg??? :) Nimra
Jul 19th 2014
 
 
rameen Zahra, abeeha of grade 3,raveeha of grade 6 and eman zadi of grade 4 is also on vshine.do u know them? Rameen
May 12th 2014
 
 
rameen Zahra i am in class three, in HSS gulshan junior and my claas teacher is Ms.Sehrish OK..................!:P Rameen
Mar 12th 2014
 
 
zahra Rameen im zahra please tell me in which class are you Zahra
Mar 8th 2014
 
 
rameen ZAHRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! WHERE R U. Rameen
Dec 5th 2013
 
 
rameen Zahra are you online at v shine these days? because of our tests. just tell me who is your class teacher? Rameen
Nov 10th 2013
 
 
rameen Nimra your profile pic is very CUTE! Rameen
Sep 15th 2013
 
 
rameen Thanks guys! zahra your answer? Rameen
Sep 15th 2013
 
 
rameen Zahra who is your class teacher Rameen
Aug 20th 2013
 
 
rameen Is your name zahra or zara Rameen
Aug 11th 2013
 
 
zahra Im in also in gulshan junior/branch Zahra
Aug 7th 2013
 
 
rameen Sukaina i miss u alot Rameen
Jul 11th 2013
 
 
zahra Please tell me your phone number Zahra
Jul 7th 2013
 
 
sukaina Good try.Keep it up! Sukaina
Jul 5th 2013
 
 
rameen To dear zahra in which branch/campous do u study? I study in Gulshun Junior. Rameen
May 26th 2013
 
 
zahra I have send you afriend requst annd i hope you will accept it.i also study in head start Zahra
May 17th 2013
 
 
Nimra Now its looking a good profile pic :) Nimra
May 12th 2013
 
 
Nimra Hi rameen tumne konsi 2 girls ki photo lagai hai apni profile pic pai? koi achi photo to lagao!!! Nimra
Apr 27th 2013
 
 
Elsa Nice :) Elsa
Mar 13th 2013
 
 
Rabita Nice rhyming Rabita
Mar 3rd 2013
 
 
Nimra Good one rameen :) Nimra
Feb 28th 2013
 
 
haniya Good poem Haniya
Feb 26th 2013
 
 
rameen Plz coment Rameen
Feb 19th 2013
 
 
rameen I have Rameen
Feb 19th 2013
 
 
Elsa Hey....Please add me as your friends............ Elsa
Feb 17th 2013
 
 

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