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Saad Salman
Saad Salman
Beacon House School System
Haunted House
Published On Feb 2nd 2013
Total Comments : 11
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Every day in the middle of the night my door bell would ring. When I would open the door, a hand would come in and go out by itself. One day I decided to follow the hand. So when it came the next day I followed it and it took me to a haunted house. I went inside and saw that it was full of different kinds of hands and they were all working. I saw an orange button and pressed it. The room changed into a computerised room and I saw two people who were controlling the hands. I took a hammer and hit them with it and took them to the police. I have always wanted to be a detective and the police told me that I would make a good one. When I went home and told my parents about the adventure, they were proud of me.
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Comments 11
Gullasht AOA nyc imaginations BETA!........ Gullasht
May 14th 2013
manal Where do you get all these cool stories from? Manal
Mar 24th 2013
manal Nice imagination saad Manal
Mar 24th 2013
Aliza Cool n awesom Aliza
Feb 10th 2013
Saad Thankyou Saad
Feb 7th 2013
Zuhaa Nice detective Saad Zuhaa
Feb 6th 2013
arifa Short but imaginative :) Arifa
Feb 6th 2013
Saad Thankyou everyone for commenting Saad
Feb 4th 2013
Soha Keep it up:) Soha
Feb 4th 2013
salman Such a wonderful story Salman
Feb 3rd 2013
Saad Intresting Saad
Feb 3rd 2013

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