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Mohomad Mahad
Mohomad Mahad
D.a.qkhan
Friends Who Help
Published On Feb 2nd 2013
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Once there were two hippos they were friends. One name Mino other Tino. They were only best friend in all forest. One day Mino and Tino were going three tiger comes and attack on Tino, Mino take a stone and threw on tiger. Tiger ran. Once there is a party on Tino’s home he call Mino after few time he come and they enjoy party after in they went for a walk and some more friend with them they were singing a song some foxes came and attacked on then all other friends ran butt Tino doesn’t, foxes attack on Mino then Tino help him. Then they became best friend.
Moral: Help your friends if they help you.

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Comments 9
Hiba Good1...plus xtra marks 4 making it short and simple Hiba
Mar 13th 2013
 
 
hurriya This story is awesome. keep it up! :) Hurriya
Feb 13th 2013
 
 
Aliza Nyc...try to focus on utilizing your imagination Aliza
Feb 10th 2013
 
 
muhammad saad Every one should be friends like this.Keep writing stories like this Muhammad Saad
Feb 9th 2013
 
 
Duaa Gr8888888 story but..... many vocabulary mistakes!!! Duaa
Feb 6th 2013
 
 
tehmina Interesting.. Tehmina
Feb 5th 2013
 
 
tehmina Tehmina ,Good story I am new reader of V shine Please tell me the method Who I send story like this .Please tell me the whole method. Thanks Tehmina
Feb 5th 2013
 
 
Soha Wow! Great story! We should help eachother. Soha
Feb 4th 2013
 
 
Momina Cute story wit a gr8 moral Momina
Feb 4th 2013
 
 

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