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Mohomad Mahad
Mohomad Mahad
Friends Who Help
Published On Feb 2nd 2013
Total Comments : 9
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Rank 8 Out of 10
Once there were two hippos they were friends. One name Mino other Tino. They were only best friend in all forest. One day Mino and Tino were going three tiger comes and attack on Tino, Mino take a stone and threw on tiger. Tiger ran. Once there is a party on Tino’s home he call Mino after few time he come and they enjoy party after in they went for a walk and some more friend with them they were singing a song some foxes came and attacked on then all other friends ran butt Tino doesn’t, foxes attack on Mino then Tino help him. Then they became best friend.
Moral: Help your friends if they help you.

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Comments 9
Hiba xtra marks 4 making it short and simple Hiba
Mar 13th 2013
hurriya This story is awesome. keep it up! :) Hurriya
Feb 13th 2013
Aliza Nyc...try to focus on utilizing your imagination Aliza
Feb 10th 2013
muhammad saad Every one should be friends like this.Keep writing stories like this Muhammad Saad
Feb 9th 2013
Duaa Gr8888888 story but..... many vocabulary mistakes!!! Duaa
Feb 6th 2013
tehmina Interesting.. Tehmina
Feb 5th 2013
tehmina Tehmina ,Good story I am new reader of V shine Please tell me the method Who I send story like this .Please tell me the whole method. Thanks Tehmina
Feb 5th 2013
Soha Wow! Great story! We should help eachother. Soha
Feb 4th 2013
Momina Cute story wit a gr8 moral Momina
Feb 4th 2013

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