Nice poem. i saw u hav commented on my stuff that im so polite. well, like all newbies on vshine, i was also always commenting on everybody's work "copied" "not good" or something else but then i learnt that people on vshine hav to be friendly towards each other. in school im really polite so it wasn't hard for me to become polite. but still, thx 4 ur gr8 comments!!!!!
Ooooooooooooooooooo!Tumharay bachara ammi abbu,because jab bhi tum sheesha mai dakhti ho gi to sheesha tooth jata ho ga or tumharay ammi abbu ko new sheesha lana paray ga or as u know ka bohat mehgai ho gai hai to bohat pase waist hota hoon ga.Acha bus tumhari bohat bazati ho gai.agar meri achi dost ho to maff kar deina,parhnay ja rahi hoon.BYE BYE