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Eraj Javed
Eraj Javed
St. Gregory's High School
Last Night In That Room
Published On Jan 25th 2013
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I had a terrible day last night. I promised my mother that I will sleep with my cousin in a room where my aunt used to sleep but she left 2years later, so the room was empty. I peeked inside the room, to see how clean it was but it was a mess .we all clear the things in the room and prepared ourselves to bed. First we play Monopoly. Then we play pillow fight. Soon my cousins were asleep and I was reading a book. After I finished the book it was at least two o'clock when I heard many voices of someone saying something. I wanted to get Up but I was so much afraid that I couldn't. Finally I got up and woke up my cousin."What happened?" my cousin said. "I am scared and couldn't go to sleep" I told her. So she told me to recite ayaat-ul-kursi and close my eyes and recite many kalmas also. So I did what she told me. But still I was hearing noises from the cupboard and fridge. But I didn’t mind and i was reciting my kalma again and again. And I was also wishing for the morning to come. At last I woke up and morning was at the room at last. I was so happy and jump out of the bed to tell my mom that what a terrible thing I did. I was wrong to sleep in there. But I will never sleep in that room again.
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Comments 17
Irza V good but it would've been better if you detailed it a little bit more Irza
Nov 5th 2015
 
 
shehram Well nyc but have some grammar and tense mistakes -_- Shehram
Jun 1st 2015
 
 
FIZZA Ooh My God!!!scary..... Fizza
Sep 8th 2013
 
 
Marwa Ohhhh I totally agree with Minahil Marwa
Aug 1st 2013
 
 
Minahil Clever girl ,You really left us in suspence:) Minahil
Jun 9th 2013
 
 
Eraj I know Eraj
Mar 23rd 2013
 
 
zahra Scary Zahra
Feb 10th 2013
 
 
Eraj Yes this all thing is true Eraj
Feb 9th 2013
 
 
zahra Hey Zahra
Feb 6th 2013
 
 
Khadijah Scary.. Khadijah
Jan 31st 2013
 
 
isbah Scary.....true? Isbah
Jan 29th 2013
 
 
eiraj fatima What was the thing? Eiraj Fatima
Jan 28th 2013
 
 
Soha Is this true Eraj?? Soha
Jan 27th 2013
 
 
Soha Scary!!! Soha
Jan 27th 2013
 
 
Souson I have written stories but they did not came yet iwrote it last week Souson
Jan 27th 2013
 
 
Souson Which room Souson
Jan 26th 2013
 
 
tehreem Oooh..scary.. Tehreem
Jan 26th 2013
 
 

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