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    Aisha Abdul Quddus
    Aisha Abdul Quddus
    Bright Future Pakistani International School
    Lights
    Published On Jan 17th 2011
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    Light                              

    Those beautiful lights

    made by Allah Almight

    The bright sun and the shiny moon

    I watch them while sitting in my room

    they give us light

    day and night

    with them the stars also shine

    Oh, Mr Sun, the night is yours, the day is mine
    They help us in the night

    by giving us light

    Thanks Allah Almight

    day and night

    We must thanks Allah Almight

    For giving us such lightsSmile
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    Comments 5
    iman A.O.A Aisha!!! Nice poem!!...try again and u will improve more...but gud try...anyways plz reply on ur poem "The Dog Gave Me A Bite".I have commented on it...we can talk their plz do see!!...see u there(Inshaallah) Iman
    Aug 20th 2011
     
     
    Wafa IZZA IN WHICH CLASS DO YOU STUDY?HOW OLD ARE YOU? I WANT TO BE YOUR FRIEND Wafa
    Feb 11th 2011
     
     
    Izza Maryam! what is your age & in which class do you study??? I want to be your friend... Izza
    Jan 24th 2011
     
     
    maryam Awesome!!!!!VERY NICE THIS IS THE WAY TO THANK ALLAH MASHALLAH Maryam
    Jan 23rd 2011
     
     
    Izza Aisha! nice try! try to read more poems & in this way,you'll be able to write good poems...I appreciate your efforts. Izza
    Jan 19th 2011
     
     

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