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Aisha Abdul Quddus
Aisha Abdul Quddus
Bright Future Pakistani International School
Lights
Published On Jan 17th 2011
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Light                              

Those beautiful lights

made by Allah Almight

The bright sun and the shiny moon

I watch them while sitting in my room

they give us light

day and night

with them the stars also shine

Oh, Mr Sun, the night is yours, the day is mine
They help us in the night

by giving us light

Thanks Allah Almight

day and night

We must thanks Allah Almight

For giving us such lightsSmile
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iman A.O.A Aisha!!! Nice poem!!...try again and u will improve more...but gud try...anyways plz reply on ur poem "The Dog Gave Me A Bite".I have commented on it...we can talk their plz do see!!...see u there(Inshaallah) Iman
Aug 20th 2011
 
 
Wafa IZZA IN WHICH CLASS DO YOU STUDY?HOW OLD ARE YOU? I WANT TO BE YOUR FRIEND Wafa
Feb 11th 2011
 
 
Izza Maryam! what is your age & in which class do you study??? I want to be your friend... Izza
Jan 24th 2011
 
 
maryam Awesome!!!!!VERY NICE THIS IS THE WAY TO THANK ALLAH MASHALLAH Maryam
Jan 23rd 2011
 
 
Izza Aisha! nice try! try to read more poems & in this way,you'll be able to write good poems...I appreciate your efforts. Izza
Jan 19th 2011
 
 

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