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Fatimah Latif
Fatimah Latif
Pakistan International School (pisj)
The Haunted Island (part 3)
Published On Jan 19th 2013
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I ran for my life and saw a cave it was almost hidden so I thought of hiding in there till the coast was clear. I went in there and stood in the dark smelly cave. What on earth were those creatures? It did not at all made any sense, this island, that girl in my dream, these horrifying things…ahhh; I just wanted to get away from here as far as possible. I was so petrified that I thought of going further into the cave. My leg was sour and was swelling but I was totally helpless. As I went deeper into the cave it became darker and darker until I could not see a single thing. But I kept walking and something wet and squashy came under my foot. The smell in this part of the cave was really gross and unbearable. But I just kept moving because I would rather live in a smelly, gross and really stinky cave rather then get eaten by those horrible things waiting for me outside. further and further, deeper and deeper I went until I started choking and started running towards the cave opening .maybe those things would have gone because if they knew that I was in this cave they would have followed me but I guess they lost their lunch .on my way back once again I stepped into a thick puddle. A mud puddle perhaps. So I moved on and stepped into another. It was enough for me .i started running and came towards the opening. On reaching out I felt the sunlight on my face and it really felt good rather than that dark cave. I caught a sight of my foot and to my revulsion saw that the puddle I had stepped in was BLOOD. Real blood covered my feet. I felt sick and almost puked. My mind was all tangled up like a woollen ball. I ran towards the shore but I was not sure that was I going in the right direction. I reached it but was on a different part. This part of the island was not sandy; this one had rocky cliffs and CAVES. Lots of caves. First I hesitated to go into the caves because what if it was full of blood and meat and stuff of that sort, but I had no choice because it was getting darker. Whether be a dinner of those creatures or find a safer place. So I went into that far off cave near the shore. The tides were a bit low and it was easy to get there. As I entered the cave an electric shock stroked me. My mouth fell open and I started trembling.

What did Sarah saw/found in that cave…….? Coming in part 4
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Comments 31
Berha Soooo good Berha
Apr 11th 2016
Fatima Really this story is the best one. Fatima
Oct 1st 2015
amna Nice :) Amna
Aug 6th 2015
amna Nice :) Amna
Aug 6th 2015
Soha NICE :) Soha
Aug 12th 2013
Marwa <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Marwa
Jul 25th 2013
fatimah And i love u, Marwa for liking all these stories <3 <3 <3 Fatimah
Jul 20th 2013
Marwa Fatima Love u for putting up these types of stories love them going for the next part Marwa
Jul 17th 2013
fatimah Unaiza...wat should i say.....i seriously wanna open my dictonary for praising word cuz i am totally out of them........;) Fatimah
Jul 16th 2013
unaiza Well all I can say is that Ayesha is right. Fatima! your stories are just like R.L.STINES FEAR STREET! Unaiza
Jul 15th 2013
fatimah ThaXXXXXXXX yar. Fatimah
Jul 9th 2013
Irum I really do mean it, yar!! Irum
Jul 9th 2013
fatimah Rly...i am shocked...cant be his books are just AMAZINGGGGGGGG and mine r......well "ok" if thats the correct word. thank u Fatimah
Jul 4th 2013
Irum Your stories are just like R.L.Stine's Fear Street books!!!!! Irum
Jul 3rd 2013
fatimah Ik right? Fatimah
Mar 16th 2013
aasiya O.m.g!v.shine takes alot of time in publishing da stories.........! Aasiya
Mar 14th 2013
fatimah Thankx alot Aasiya <3 Fatimah
Mar 13th 2013
fatimah VSHINE is not publishing my next part :( Fatimah
Mar 10th 2013
aasiya Really nyc.........!ur writing quqlities make meh impressed! plz publish da 4th part soon........!plz Aasiya
Mar 9th 2013
fatimah Thank u :D Fatimah
Mar 1st 2013
Sana AWeSoMe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!send the next part soon Sana
Mar 1st 2013
Abdullah That's like the story of king kong Abdullah
Feb 16th 2013
Soha Great work!!!!!!!!!! Soha
Feb 15th 2013
Ali Hey I'm not scared because I was hiding under the Duvet!!!! Ali
Feb 9th 2013
mishaal Reallly great!!it made me tremble and the comments that say horrible(u guys mean it in a good way ,right?) Mishaal
Feb 1st 2013
zahra Horrible Zahra
Jan 30th 2013
fatimah U mean disgusting or was my story bad? Fatimah
Jan 25th 2013
Izza A0A.........! Your writing skills impressed me from up to d0wn...!!! keep rocking fati...!!! Izza
Jan 25th 2013
Minahil Really horrible Minahil
Jan 24th 2013
fatimah Yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss Fatimah
Jan 22nd 2013
Khadijah NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khadijah
Jan 19th 2013

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