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Mishal Mazhar
Mishal Mazhar
Salamat Girls Icas
The Lost Kid
Published On Jan 13th 2011
Total Comments : 21
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One day I was eating ice-cream on the side of a road. I was alone as my home was near. When I turned, I saw a small kid who was standing in the middle of the street and was about to be hit by a bus. I rushed towards him with tremendous speed and took him to the other side of the road. He was about seven to eight years old. I asked him that whom he was with and he answered that he came to eat ice-cream with his father and when they were crossing the road, he was left behind but his father crossed, not realizing that his son was left behind. I asked him his name and he said seven. I asked him the ptcl number of his home or any other but unluckily he did not know. He told me that he was hungry so I took him to the nearest restaurant and gave him something to eat. When he finished his meal, I asked him where his house was but he did not remember the way and started crying. I made him stop crying by making him trust me that I would take him to his home, but how? Having a bit of hope, I asked him that do you know the area you are from and he answered,’ Near Main Market. If you take me there I might be able to lead the way to my home.'' I was so thankful to Allah. I took him to main market and he took me to his home. His parents thanked me and gave me an award of Rs.500 for bringing him home. Finally, I went to my home without any tension and worry.
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Comments 21
Berha Really?..... So unrealistic.. Good though but what kind of father does that! Again unrealistic..... Berha
Sep 3rd 2016
Berha I see a mistake that you asked what was the boys name and he said seven! Is it supposed to be like that? Overall good story Berha
Jun 29th 2016
Irza V.nice...I was like OMG what?! his father left him in the middle of the road and hardly looked back until he went back home??? lovely story though Irza
Sep 30th 2015
eman Lovely Eman
May 13th 2014
Tooba Great job well done Tooba
May 3rd 2014
Nimra Hey guys if anyone of u like to be my friend so u can... mishal its a nice story :P Nimra
Jan 23rd 2013
Soha Hmmmmmmm.... Interesting...)) Keep it up!! Waiting for your another story! Soha
Jan 22nd 2013
Mishal Thanx guys for ur support. Mishal
Mar 30th 2012
Kumail Good story Kumail
Mar 21st 2012
xerac Hmmmm.............interesting;) Xerac
Jan 4th 2012
iman Mishal ur story is gr8.......keep up the gud work!!!!!!! Iman
Dec 11th 2011
gorgeous Nice Gorgeous
Nov 17th 2011
Ayeza Hmm.............. interesting story! Ayeza
Nov 11th 2011
Mishal Thanx everyone but I am sorry this is not real. :) Mishal
Oct 10th 2011
Aaliyah Cool story Aaliyah
Sep 30th 2011
Humaira Mujeeb This is such a sweet story. Humaira Mujeeb
Sep 17th 2011
sapphire Nice story is it real ??? Sapphire
Aug 17th 2011
Itachi Is this a real one???? Itachi
Jul 10th 2011
Mishal Thanks guys i will soon write more stories and hope you'll like them Mishal
Feb 10th 2011
Bint waseem Nyc story Bint Waseem
Feb 4th 2011
Itachi Nice story it's interesting Itachi
Feb 1st 2011

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