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Sehar Shahzad
Sehar Shahzad
Divisional Public School Model Town Lahore
Published On Dec 18th 2012
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"That’s totally unfair" said Ammara in a dim voice. Ammara's parents weren’t celebrating her birthday this year because her birthday was two days before Eid. Ammara didn't celebrate her birthday last year also because her grandfather died. Her parents also said that they were not even giving her a gift this year. This made her feel more sad but her parents had made a decision; a final decision. She told this to her friends."We can write them a letter maybe they'll agree this way!" said Aleeha, one of her friends. Everyone smiled at this amazing idea. Some friends decided to write them a letter and some thought about an email. Ammara still had hope but lost all when she got a big NO from her parents. "They’ll never let me celebrate my birthday this year thank you all for trying to help me out" Ammara smiled being more upset but showing she wasn't and left. The days went fast and it was one day before her birthday. Early at 6 in the morning, Ammara's mom woke her up. "get ready dear, we have to leave early" said her mom."Leave for what mom?" she asked."You'll know soon but now just get up and put on some warm clothes". And her mom left her room leaving her in confusion! Ammara got ready, putting on warm clothes and as she went downstairs she heard a high voice " happy birthday, dear". Ammara's voice shuttered " birthday is..." Ammara was trying to say something."We know your birthday is tomorrow we are going to Murree today and will have a birthday party tomorrow" said her father putting her arms around her. So they set off to Murree, the Kashmir point, the snow ball fight at the Mall road and the snow man; they enjoyed a lot. Now it was time to go but unfortunately their coaster went out of order but Ammara was happy. "Dad, we will go now tomorrow so we have to stay a night in hotel again, right?" asked Ammara. "Right !" said her dad."So can we go for camping instead of hotel? please dad " "hmm idea is good but..." said her mom." but what mom?" asked Ammara . "But I am afraid of grass hoppers" said her mom. Then they all laughed and her father called the camping agency. It was a great experience for Ammara. Next day when they went back she told everything to her friends. At last she just said that" Life is full of surprises...!" I was her best birthday ever....
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Comments 51
Safa Vvvvvvvvveeeeeerrrrrrryyyyyy gggooooooooooooooooood really like it!!!!!!! Safa
Jul 14th 2017
Aiza Nice Aiza
Jul 5th 2017
Minahil A good story Minahil
Mar 11th 2016
Sehar Thankyou so much mubashara... sure,.. I'll remember you all in my prayers Sehar
Nov 7th 2014
Jul 6th 2014
zubeera Very nice ,awesome Zubeera
Jun 19th 2014
Nimra Np its ok.. :) i dnt mind.. ;) :) same here yr ws very busy in studies.. :( :/ long time no tlk wth friendx... :( pata hai 1 year past i dnt use vshine.. :( :/ Nimra
Feb 18th 2014
Sehar I'm so sorry nimra I couldn't reply earlier because my account wasn't working ! I don't know why but It just wasn't .... hope u don't mind :) Sehar
Nov 16th 2013
Sehar Thanks anam Sehar
Nov 16th 2013
Anam Nyc Anam
Nov 2nd 2013
Amna Dear accept request Amna
Oct 5th 2013
Nimra My eid was nice dear hws urs.. <3 :)) em gud how r u? wtz going on in these days??? hws ur studies going?? :) by the way sehar r u on skype?? Nimra
Sep 20th 2013
Sehar Thankyou all .... & nimra I'm good, u tell ? how are u ? Eid Mubarak to you to :) how was ur Eid dear ? Sehar
Aug 20th 2013
Kainat Gr8 story keep it up Kainat
Aug 16th 2013
Nimra Heyya sehar wtz going on..?? :)) how r u dear..?? :) happy eid mubarak 2 u in advanced.. :D :P :)))) Nimra
Aug 8th 2013
Marwa Nyc :P :P : P: P : P Marwa
Aug 2nd 2013
Sehar Thankyou so much for appreciating :) Sehar
Jul 25th 2013
syyeda Amna Very nice story.The character Ammara seems very cute. Gr8 job! Syyeda Amna
Jul 24th 2013
Uswah :)nno prob dear Uswah
Jul 23rd 2013
Sehar Thanku so much :) Sehar
Jul 18th 2013
Uswah Sehar u have great story writing potential skills hso please send more good and awesome stories and keep it up! Uswah
Jul 13th 2013
mubashra Realyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy it Mubashra
Jun 19th 2013
Sehar Thanks soha :) Sehar
May 28th 2013
Soha You are right.. life is full of SURPRISES!!!!!!! Soha
May 11th 2013
Soha That's really nice! Soha
May 11th 2013
Nimra Yaar sehar apni dost eisha ajmal ko bolo k khuda k liye meri request accept karle!!!!! mai nai us ko friend request kab ki bheji hui hai usko bolo accept krle!!!! Nimra
Feb 24th 2013
Nimra Yaa i know by the way say to ur friend eisha ajmal that except my friend request and be my friend :) Nimra
Feb 12th 2013
Sehar We're in the same skoOl thats why :) Sehar
Feb 10th 2013
Nimra Oooohhhh.... :) Nimra
Feb 7th 2013
Sehar No we are not cousins just friends :) Sehar
Feb 6th 2013
Nimra Ooohhhh sorry :( tuba and sehar not amna!!! i know that u both study in division public school Nimra
Feb 5th 2013
Nimra Hey sehar and amna r u both cousins?????? Nimra
Feb 5th 2013
Sehar Is maida in your class ? Sehar
Jan 18th 2013
Sehar Hehe ... me too :) Sehar
Jan 17th 2013
Tooba Ya sure v can also meet in break in exams mmmm...............on first paper wait for me ur class in 7-g i'll b there in break to meet u i m sooooooooo curious to meet u Tooba
Jan 15th 2013
Sehar Hehe :P Very well known !!! I'm sorry I had an internet problem but now when its fixed I'll reply early :) I will only come now on MONDAY on the exam day ! Can we meet after exams ? Its the only way left ! Sehar
Jan 15th 2013
Tooba Mines is D 8-d vry known class for doing bad n wrong things :P r u coming on monday? i hav a request you reply so late Tooba
Jan 12th 2013
Sehar Thanks tooba and my section is G ... 7th - G...whats urs ? Sehar
Jan 11th 2013
Tooba PRETY GGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRR888888888 (GR8)! ! ! wats ur section sehar? n ur story waz owsome! ! ! Tooba
Jan 7th 2013
Sehar Thanks Sehar
Jan 6th 2013
samayya Wow ! Samayya
Jan 5th 2013
Itachi Gr8 but a slight mistake in the last line.It should be IT not I. well done keep up the gud work. Itachi
Jan 3rd 2013
Sehar Thanks amna <3 Sehar
Dec 31st 2013
Amna Cooooooooooooolllllllllllllll Amna
Dec 30th 2012
Sehar Thanku :) Sehar
Dec 22nd 2012
Sehar WOw ! u should be the winner ! Sehar
Dec 22nd 2012
arifa Awesome!! Arifa
Dec 22nd 2012
Duaa Gr8888 <3 it Duaa
Dec 22nd 2012
Sehar Thanks momina and pretty <3 Sehar
Dec 22nd 2012
Momina Totally agree with pretty !!!!!!!!!! gr8 Momina
Dec 21st 2012
samayya Gr8 creativity ! Samayya
Dec 19th 2012

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