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Rabia Ahmed
Rabia Ahmed
Usman Public School
Old House Of Barbie
Published On Dec 10th 2012
Total Comments : 83
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Once there was an old house of a Barbie. It was so small that no one comes to visit it. One day Barbie was crying very badly that she got ill and goes to sleep. When she was sleeping suddenly her bell rang. When she goes to open she saw that it was a beautiful garden where beautiful dresses were hanged on the tree trunks. Delicious foods were placed on a bench and there was chocolate streams and everything she wants. When she got out of her house to step in that imaginary world she saw that her house suddenly disappeared and she was alone there so she got frightened and start finding any person to accompany her but she saw no one there. She started praying and suddenly a prince comes and takes her with him to a big beautiful palace but she doesn’t know that he was a vampire................
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Comments 83
mubashra ASSLAM U ALIKUM rabia kese ho or rafia kese hy Mubashra
Jul 24th 2014
Tooba Barbie?????? wow amazing story Tooba
Jun 5th 2014
Soha OMG! Really Rabia? BTW, where are u now a days?? Soha
Mar 31st 2014
mubashra Hey rabia how r u Mubashra
Feb 21st 2014
Bismah Kya haal hai? Bismah
Feb 18th 2014
 Shiza Its wonderful!!!! Shiza
Jan 22nd 2014
mubashra Thnx rafia i think that its just a miss understanding well i can again snd her a request Mubashra
Nov 1st 2013
Rafia Mubashra dear .. rabia api ne ap ko remove nahi kiya .. actually she also thought that u have removed her! I DONT KNOW WHATS HAPPENING ... nd Afifah nd Hafsa .. thnx alot my frnds ... i love u both very very much ... nd afifah i am not using my mail much .. so i cannot mail u honey .. SoRRRRrrry :( i missed u too dear ... as far as ur mail is concerned so OFCOURSE a phone number can't break our outstanding relation :)) nd ur brother is elder .. he knows better than me :))))) LOVE U SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH :))) thnx again my frnds :) Rafia
Oct 27th 2013
hafsa Rabia baji app ko pata hai kay rafia ka account hack ho gaya hai . fatima is the bad she hacked her account plzz rafia hai kahan . plz ossai batayai Hafsa
Oct 26th 2013
afifah Rabia please see all the comments on rafia's story(part-2) please please and tell Rafia and also tell her that I miss her very much and please answer my emails.please.... Afifah
Oct 25th 2013
Oct 16th 2013
mubashra Rabia plz tell me why u remove me from ur frnd list em really sad :') Mubashra
Oct 5th 2013
Nimra Hey guyss plzz pray for me my exams r very very very near.. :( Nimra
Sep 26th 2013
Arwa Yar is ma bhut bhut pain hota ha jo bardasht he nahi hota:( :( or vomiting be bhut hoti hen :( :( mera be apndx ka operation hoa tha 2 years pehlay :( :( :( Arwa
Sep 24th 2013
rabia Soha it was appendix operation.............and i got 8 stiches........... well thnxxxxxxxxxxxxx alottttttttttttttttt :))))))) Rabia
Sep 18th 2013
rabia Ur always welcome dear............. Rabia
Sep 18th 2013
Arwa Rabia tmharai apndx surgery hoi ha??? :( :( Arwa
Sep 18th 2013
Bushra Hafeez Oh rabia em empressed 2 read ur profile nd thnx 2 b my best frnd dear........ :) Bushra Hafeez
Sep 12th 2013
Irum Huh? Quick and not understandable Irum
Sep 10th 2013
Rafia AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! Maarij dear .... same here my frnd :) Rafia
Sep 9th 2013
Rabia He! guyzzz Rabia
Sep 7th 2013
Rabia He! guyzzz Rabia
Sep 7th 2013
Rabia He! guyzzz Rabia
Sep 7th 2013
Arooba Welcome my sweet friend Arooba
Sep 7th 2013
Maarij Maqsood I have a dream to meet shahid afridi and hafeez Maarij Maqsood
Sep 6th 2013
Soha Btw what happened to you? Any disease? Soha
Sep 3rd 2013
Soha Love u 2:) I was very worried and I prayed for your health too! Allhamdulillah you're fine! Em happy:) Soha
Sep 3rd 2013
rabia Assalam 0 Alaikum everyone ..... i am absoluetly fine now .... that was really gr8 to see that u all were too worried for me .. thnx alot my frnds :):):):) LOVE U ALL :D Rabia
Sep 2nd 2013
Rafia Me too Maarij ........ i loveeeeee cricket nd my favourie player is Muhammad Hafeez :) Rafia
Sep 1st 2013
Maarij Maqsood Rabia me too love cricket and i am die heart fan of shahid afridi and hafeez Maarij Maqsood
Aug 31st 2013
Soha AOA... Rabia, I heard about your health. I hope you get well soon :) I am praying for you. May Allah give you health Insha'Allah! Soha
Aug 25th 2013
Arwa Assalam u Alaikum:) Rabia!! how r u? Arwa
Aug 23rd 2013
rabia Sure rafia .....................i will love to be your frnd............we are best buddies now..............guess sis name is also rafia:):):) Rabia
Aug 19th 2013
RAFIA I want to be your friend . the story is great. Rafia
Aug 18th 2013
Soha In friendship no thanks...! Soha
Aug 16th 2013
hafsa Welcome Hafsa
Aug 16th 2013
hafsa Welcome but in friendship no thanks no sorry ok Hafsa
Aug 15th 2013
rabia Soha, arooba and hafsa thanx alot my frnds Rabia
Aug 15th 2013
Rafia Oh right Hafsa dear............... thnx for replying my commnet dear :) Rafia
Aug 14th 2013
hafsa Rabia baji app ke storie bohot achi hai Hafsa
Aug 14th 2013
Arooba Lovely story I love it rabia Arooba
Aug 13th 2013
Soha Ur welcome :) Soha
Aug 13th 2013
rabia Thnxxxxx alot :) Rabia
Aug 13th 2013
hafsa main to aysay he pouch rahi thi kyoun k inn ka last name ahmed hia na iss liyay. aur allhamdulliah main bilkul thik hon. Hafsa
Aug 13th 2013
Soha Great one Soha
Aug 13th 2013
rabia Walaikum assalam ........... hafsa allah ka shukr mein bilkul khariyat say kaisi hain???????????? Rabia
Aug 12th 2013
Rafia O00ooooooooo!!!!!!!! right.......... pehle to Walaikum Assalam... main bilkul theek hoon aur ap?????????? :) nd hum 3 sisters hain Rabia api sab se barein, phir main, and atlast Bushar sab se choti....... is k ilawa mera seven years ka bhai bhi hai!!!!! :) but Hiba Ahmed nd Areeba Ahmed r not my sisters dear :) thnx for ur comment.......... reply soon :) Rafia
Aug 12th 2013
hafsa Mujay app sey pounchna tha kay ap kitni bahnay ho aur kia hiba ahmed aur areeba ahmed ap ki behnay hain Hafsa
Aug 12th 2013
hafsa Dono bahna ko send kiya hia Hafsa
Aug 12th 2013
Rafia G Hafsa................................. ap ne yeh comment mujhe send kiya hai ya api ki??????????? :) Rafia
Aug 12th 2013
rabia Hafsa ap ne yeh Ria se poocha hai ya mujh se???????? plz clear the misunderstanding dear..... btw walaikum assalam my frnd :) Rabia
Aug 12th 2013
hafsa Salam kaisy hian app Hafsa
Aug 11th 2013
Rafia Welcome api :) Rafia
Aug 11th 2013
rabia Thnx my sis :) Rabia
Aug 10th 2013
Rafia LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!! LOLZZ :) Rafia
Aug 10th 2013
Ajwa Weird but nice... Ajwa
Aug 6th 2013
malaika Ha ha ha so funny Malaika
Jul 22nd 2013
rabia Ramadan Mubarak to you too fatima and to all frnds Rabia
Jul 16th 2013
rabia Same 2 u dear!!!!!!:) Rabia
Jul 15th 2013
Arwa Ramadan Mubarak Arwa
Jul 14th 2013
rabia No.....I'm not this girl....!!!!!! Rabia
Jul 3rd 2013
Arwa Is it u rabia ?? i mean at ur dp? Arwa
Jul 3rd 2013
Arwa Ok:) Arwa
Jun 26th 2013
rabia Thnx fatimah and maine mind nhe kiya aur is topic per sab kay alag opinions hotay hain so please close this topic dear.........:) Rabia
Jun 25th 2013
Arwa And nice story :) :) Arwa
Jun 25th 2013
Arwa Yar champions trophy ma be us ne kuch nhe kia :( :( becuz misbah ki captaincy thi is liay warna wo araam say acha perform kr skta tha becuz wo aik acha player ha but srif apney liay khelta ha mulk k liay nhe khelta :( :( mind nhe krna yar rabia Arwa
Jun 25th 2013
rabia Syeda Fatima Muhammad Hafeez har situation main acha kheltey hain dear... He always gives his best my frnd:) Rabia
Jun 24th 2013
rabia Ifrah, Fatima and Momina thanx 4 having my story in ur like corner Rabia
Jun 24th 2013
rabia THNX sAAD..... Rabia
Jun 24th 2013
Arwa Yar hafeez country ki khatir nhe khelta srif apney liay khelta ha :( Arwa
Jun 24th 2013
Arwa Oh! my friends i m also biggggg fan of cricket but yar champions trophy ma Pakistani cricketers ne dill tore dia :( :( and friends yar hafeez kuch karta kha ha srif apni captaincy ma acha perform krta ha warna misbah ki captaincy ma itna bekar perform krta Arwa
Jun 24th 2013
saad Super story Saad
Jun 24th 2013
rabia Thnx Rabia 4 ur comment!!!........:) Rabia
Jun 24th 2013
rabia That's nice Saad...Well thnx u didn't commeted bad as everyone did but it was not written by me..It was my youngest cousin.. By the way I am a bigggg fan of cricket & Muhammad Hafeez is my favourite player by the way have u seen his little son (Roshan) he is cutee. Isn't he??? Rabia
Jun 22nd 2013
saad Hey rabia i am also a big fan of cricket Saad
Jun 22nd 2013
Rabia Nicy :) Rabia
Apr 27th 2013
eiraj fatima Are u going to continue it if not than incomplete Eiraj Fatima
Dec 28th 2012
Khadijah Yup it sounds weird. Continue please Khadijah
Dec 16th 2012
Duaa Weirrrdddd!! I mean totally weeiirrdddd what happened then? I know what u r trying to depict but this only happens in movies Duaa
Dec 16th 2012
Momina Is it gonna have a continuation? kinda weird Momina
Dec 14th 2012
hira Why? Hira
Dec 12th 2012
Tooba Wierd Tooba
Dec 11th 2012
hira Oh well is it continued??? Hira
Dec 11th 2012

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