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Arouba Malik
Arouba Malik
The City School(ravi Campus)
Answerless Surprise
Published On Dec 8th 2012
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December 2012

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“Look there!” shouted Hadia, “it’s the palace where once lived a wealthy man with lots of servants, people say that the man was being killed by his enemies and then his servants lived there,” she said.
 “But what happened to them?”Asked Ahmad, her friend, “as far as I know no one lives there now,” he said.
 “well, they once lived but now only their skeletons are there” she explained, “and now only jinn and witches live there!” she said with an horrid expression on her face, it made Ahmad more scared.
 “Don’t talk childish things, we all know that witches and are just in stories but not in reality!” Muaz said looking braver than he really was, “and by the way, you all know I am the bravest!”
 “Stop that! We know your bravery so please don’t show off!” Hadia said, teasing him, “and if you are that much brave, you’ll have to show us,” she added.
 “What will I’ve to do to show you that I’m very brave?” Muaz asked, “Well, you’ll inside the palace at midnight for 1 or 2 hours and we will agree that you are really brave!” Ahmad suggested, thinking that Muaz will regret it but he got a shock when he heard that Muaz replied ‘OK!’ and said that he will give an answerless surprise to them when he’ll fulfil his promise.
The next day, Muaz was got very busy and forgot about his promise so at 8’o clock at night, his friends arrived and found Muaz fast asleep in bed. They woke him and began planning for night tour.
At midnight they reached at palace but they got very afraid and decided to go back but Muaz was already inside the palace and Hadia got very scared and nervous, suddenly the light of the torch went out and darkness fell everywhere and Ahmad began to cry loudly. Then in the middle of darkness a woman appeared with a torch and was horrified to see children. The woman was the caretaker of the palace and she got worried when she heard that a child went in. They three were conversing when shout came from inside.        

 “It’s him,” shouted Hadia, “it’s Muaz, I recognized his voice! Oh no, he’s in danger! We should hurry go and help him.”
They three went in and were startled to see Muaz’s horrid face. There was a skeleton in front of them, “a skeleton” shouted woman, “but how it is here, it should be…” but  she couldn’t said anything more because the skeleton moved his hand and Hadia pointed “look a note!” she said, “see what it says” said Ahmad frightfully. Hadia picked up the note and everyone leaned forward to see but something was wrong, Muaz isn’t looking shocked or surprised instead he looked calm.
“Ha ha …..” Hadia read and saw Muaz standing at a corner laughing, at first she couldn’t make the head or tail out of it but later when she saw a rope in Muaz’s hand, she understood everything that Muaz played a trick with them and this was his ‘ANSWERLESS SURPRISE’.

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Comments 31
Arouba Sure Nazish i would luv to :) Arouba
Feb 10th 2014
Arouba Sure Nazish i would luv to :) Arouba
Feb 10th 2014
nazish 1st it seems horrible but at last it was funny.very gud efforts dear.n plzzzzzzz comment on my stuff 2 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. Nazish
Dec 16th 2013
nazish 1st it seems horrible but at last it was funny.very gud efforts dear.n plzzzzzzz comment on my stuff 2 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. Nazish
Dec 16th 2013
Bushra Hafeez :) :) :) Bushra Hafeez
Jul 13th 2013
Arouba That's good bushra :) Arouba
Jul 12th 2013
Bushra Hafeez Gr8 story & in my gift hamper also were the school's things Bushra Hafeez
Jul 6th 2013
Arouba Well, it was all stationary things;geometry pencil case, pens,pointers, ink erasers, etc! Arouba
Apr 14th 2013
Gullasht Plz tell me what was in the gift hamper? Gullasht
Apr 12th 2013
Hiba Nyc 1 Hiba
Apr 4th 2013
Elsa Wow it's very nice :) Elsa
Mar 12th 2013
muniza Nice names Muniza
Mar 11th 2013
muniza Nice names Muniza
Mar 9th 2013
muniza I like it Muniza
Mar 8th 2013
muniza Hi arouba love your story Muniza
Mar 8th 2013
Arouba Thnx muniza, i knew you would like it..!! Arouba
Mar 8th 2013
muniza Awesome..!! Muniza
Mar 7th 2013
Arouba Thanks everybody for liking my story . . and what do u mean by cheated fatima? i didn't cheated, I wrote it myself,it's all my idea n i don't get what are u talking about! Arouba
Feb 17th 2013
mishaal I like it..but could be improved,, Mishaal
Jan 23rd 2013
Abdullah Nice. Abdullah
Jan 21st 2013
haniya Great story Haniya
Jan 17th 2013
eisha I like it very much Eisha
Jan 5th 2013
Soha Nice and happy new year!! Soha
Jan 4th 2013
Emaan Wow it's very nice :) Emaan
Jan 3rd 2013
Fatima Nice!! happy new year everyone Fatima
Jan 2nd 2013
eiraj fatima Couldnt understand it Eiraj Fatima
Dec 28th 2012
Duaa Hahahahaha niceee Duaa
Dec 16th 2012
Momina Good :) Momina
Dec 14th 2012
rabia Nice Rabia
Dec 10th 2012
Tooba Cheated Tooba
Dec 10th 2012
Urwa Nice! Urwa
Dec 10th 2012

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