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Duaa Hassan
Duaa Hassan
Becon House School System
The Enchanted Tree Part 7
Published On Nov 19th 2012
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.....“You are noble, gentle, adorable and honest. You have to go to our ruler. He will ask you some questions and you will have to answer him the truth. Then he will play a game with you. He will ask you to go to a place but instead of going there; one of you will have to creep behind his chair and take out the stone from his chair. The stone would be a large, Red, Garnet, stone. You just have to take care that he does not know about this. Only we know about this thing, nobody else knows.” “Yes we are on it.” “Just take us to the king,” said Susan. “So they went off to the king. The king was amazed to see such tall people and questioned them. Susan and Shaggy replied all the questions true. Then the king played the same game and Susan and Shaggy went away as if to find the place they were told. When they were out of sight, they stopped and remembered what the dwarves had said and crept behind the king’s chair and took out the stone. It was quite easy.  Suddenly the king saw the children and yelled at them. The dwarves at the back shouted, “Take this stone out of the Candy Land!! Hurry!!!! ” Susan took out the leaf out of the pocket and they both kept their hands on it and said, “We wish to return to the tree.” And they disappeared. They reached the tree and said, “The first special thing of the first world would be handed over to you after fifteen minutes. It was 8:30 p.m. and at 8:45 they climbed on the branch and when they reached there they saw everyone happy as the ruler was dead. “All the powers of that cruel ruler were saved in the stone. We all thank you and here is the most special chocolate of this country.” Slink handed over a pink chocolate to them which was wrapped in red sheet. “Thanks and good bye.” After saying this sentence they wished to meet the tree and there they were in front of the tree. They gave the chocolate to the tree and said, “The second special thing would be handed over to you tomorrow. Keep this and we will return tomorrow. Good bye!” “Bye.” And with this sentence they went of to their home. When they reached, they saw that all the rooms were painted and carpeted and two of the rooms were even furnished. They; as usually ate their dinner but this time watched a movie. They woke up late in the morning and relaxed. They ate their breakfast and relaxed. Instead of evening, Susan and Shaggy left at afternoon. They begged their mother and left at 3:30 and were permitted till 9:30.they went rushing through the trees and reached to the tree. They, without wasting any time climbed up the second branch. The second world was a weird one. It had.........
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Comments 8
selina Try first steps, ask me any question, i can answer it, i am a stepian Selina
Jun 5th 2013
Omer That's a standard of beaconites Omer
Jan 27th 2013
Soha Getting better as Sana & Khadija said and one more thing that Duaa can u except my request? PLEASE!!!!!!!!! Soha
Jan 5th 2013
Momina Man oh man u keep the suspense going Duaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Momina
Dec 21st 2012
arifa AWSUM!!! KEEP IT UP!!! :) Arifa
Nov 25th 2012
Duaa Thnx alot Sana and Khadijahhhh Duaa
Nov 22nd 2012
Khadijah Even better Khadijah
Nov 20th 2012
Sana Getting better! Sana
Nov 20th 2012

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