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Soha Suhail
Soha Suhail
Pakturk International Schools And Colleges, Islamabad
The Terrible Tidy Bot
Published On Nov 17th 2012
Total Comments : 209
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November 2012

Rank 9 Out of 10
"Moiz, you are the laziest boy in the world!" cried Mrs.Adeel. His room was so untidy, she could hardly get in. "Look at all this mess!" sighed Moiz's mother as she crumbled over a pile of books, clothes and toys."All you do all day is play on that beeping computer," said Mrs. Adeel, crossly. Moiz wasn't listening. He was concentrating on his game.
"I've had just about enough, young man!" snapped Mrs. Adeel."You have one week to clean up this room or the computer goes!" she threatened. I mean it!" Moiz heard that loud and clear. He couldn't possibly live without his computer. But cleaning his room would take forever." "I need someone to help me clean up." he thought. He spent next two hours searching Internet for cleaning companies. They were all too expensive. Moiz had almost given up hope when an advertisement popped up on the screen. It also said that free 14 day home delievry. Send no money! "That's just what I needed," cried Moiz. It can clean my room, and then I'll send it back" Just under a week later, the Tidy bot arrived at Moiz's home."I want that room clean by the time I come home!" shouted Mrs. Adeel. The front door slammed behind her. Moiz had just two hours. He ran to his room and excitedly tore open the box. First, he read the instruction booklet. Then he aimed the remote control. The Tidy bot was ready for action. Moiz pressed red button twice and the robot jerked to life. In minutes, all Moiz's shirts, pants and socks were off the floor and neatly put away. Moiz was impressed. He pressed button after button. The robot whizzed around the room, obeying every command. In no time at all, the bedroom was cleaner than ever. He took a step back and heard a loud crack. The remote control was bent and broken. "How can I return it now?" he thought. But Moiz have more important things to worry about. Breaking the control unit made the Tidy bot go crazy. It hurtled around the room until it gets messier than ever. Before Moiz could stop it, the rampaging robot zoomed out of his bedroom and down the stairs. It went through every room in the house leaving a mess trial behind. Finally the robot's battery went flat and it ground to a halt. Moiz stared the house in horror.
He spent the next one hour sweeping and polishing. Then he repacked the robot and hid it in the shed. When he'd finished, he was so tired that he went to his bedroom to lie down. He was in for a shock. "Oh no, I completely forgot about my room!" He said. As he slumped onto his bed in despair, his mother returned. "Look at this room!" she cried. But Moiz was so exhausted, he didn't hear. Mrs. Adeel shook her head as she carried off the computer. "You really are the laziest boy in the world!" she said.
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Comments 209
Zainab Great..........!!!!!!! Zainab
Mar 6th 2018
yashfeen WOW!!!Fabulous story Soha and I think you are the friendliest person I have ever met on Vshine. Yashfeen
Apr 3rd 2017
Minahil Its a great story...Loved it <3 Minahil
Mar 11th 2016
Soha Thanks Mohammad :) Soha
Jul 20th 2015
Mohommad Congratulations soha it's a great story!!!!!!!!😀😃😀😀😃😀😀😃😃😃☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😉😉😉😉😉 Mohommad
May 15th 2015
Mohommad Congratulations soha it's a great story!!!!!!!!😀😃😀😀😃😀😀😃😃😃☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😉😉😉😉😉 Mohommad
May 15th 2015
Soha Well, thanks Fahad :) Sad to hear that.. Soha
Oct 9th 2014
Mohammad NYC and awesome. (i guess u r a fan of everyone soha) i am in need of a best friend. i had one one but now we r separated, he is in KS and i am in PK. Mohammad
Sep 27th 2014
Soha Your welcome dear :) Sorry for replying so late :( :/ And it's me in my dp ;) <3 How are you? Soha
Sep 15th 2014
Syeda Zuha Soha!!! Thankssss for being friend of mine..and it's your own pic or of someone else?? Syeda Zuha
Sep 5th 2014
Soha ;) :p Soha
Aug 26th 2014
Ifrah Yea!! ;) Ifrah
Aug 23rd 2014
Soha Thanx yaar ;) Gud 2 see some other "Pakturkian" here :D :P Soha
Aug 22nd 2014
Ifrah Waw Soha great!! Ifrah
Aug 22nd 2014
Soha I love every book I read so, literally I can't remember their names! :P Anyway, one of my favourites is Matilda by R.D :) OH yes, Roald Dahl is also my mostttttttt favourite writer :D Soha
Aug 18th 2014
abeera Can you tell me some names of books you like??? the way I also like Jackeline Wilson especially "Bed and Breakfast star"... Abeera
Aug 18th 2014
Soha My fav writers are E.Nesbith, JK rowling and Enid Blyton :D Soha
Aug 17th 2014
abeera Greeeeeaaaaaattttttt......... whose your favourite writer cause I like Enid Blyton ;) ..... Abeera
Aug 15th 2014
Soha Happy Independence Day! :) May Allah bless this country with heights of peace and prosperity! :D Soha
Aug 14th 2014
Soha Well, ok :) we can b friends :D I luv 2 b friends wid everyone :) Soha
Aug 14th 2014
Syeda Zuha I want to be your friend...Because I have read your comment$ and $torie$ you area nice girl...I think you will agree%u2665%u2665%u2665 Syeda Zuha
Aug 12th 2014
Soha Thank u Zahra Soha
Aug 7th 2014
Zahra Its an amazing story soha keeeeep it up :) Zahra
Jun 7th 2014
Soha Guys am back and would like 2 request u all to pray for the Pakistani team in the T20 WORLD CUP!!!!! Soha
Apr 1st 2014
Soha It's General Assesment Test my dear :) Soha
Feb 10th 2014
Amna Whats GAT? Amna
Feb 8th 2014
Soha Actually, GAT exam is just for our school's branches all over Pakistan. Soha
Jan 19th 2014
Mahnoor U are 12 and u have already passed GAT? Mahnoor
Jan 15th 2014
Amna Soooooooo sweet of you Soha.............really love you<3 my best friend:) Amna
Jan 11th 2014
Soha I didn't like it!!!!!!!! Infact I loved it <3 Soha
Jan 9th 2014
Soha I didn't like it!!!!!!!! Infact I loved it <3 Soha
Jan 9th 2014
Soha I didn't like it!!!!!!!! Infact I loved it <3 Soha
Jan 9th 2014
Amna Soha I had lost that story and the Vshine team is very slow they havent posted yet................................but I can tell u the summary of it it begins likes this.....There was a girl Soha every one loved her but her siblings do not her siblings name was Maz and Zoha they dislike her but one day both of her were talking and Soha heard it she explains them that her parents do love each of us equally but if u misbehave and do not offer your prayers then they will be angry her siblings obey what she says and in this manner Soha removed mis understanding..................Hope u like my story......<3 u Soha :) Amna
Jan 5th 2014
Munkashay That story I read in the magazine!! CONGRATZ! Munkashay
Dec 16th 2013
Amna Soha I had posted my story two,three days before I hope it will be publish soon... But from my side it is finished and i had posted it...........may it will be publish soon......well........may I tell u the story's name???? Amna
Nov 29th 2013
Soha Ohh! Amna dear, I am not dis-hearted at all! I was actually very curious about the surprise so after a long time, I asked you. And no problem, these exams are always waiting for us :P I can understand u. You can publish it whenever you're free :) Soha
Nov 23rd 2013
Khadija Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khadija
Nov 15th 2013
Amna Soha plz don't get dishearted..........plz I wanna be your friend but my exams were going on thats the problem but now I promise I am going to publish it soon......... I m sorry if u r dishearted i didnt intense to do so......plzzzzz forgive me Soha.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Amna
Nov 14th 2013
Amna Soha plz don't get dishearted..........plz I wanna be your friend but my exams were going on thats the problem but now I promise I am going to publish it soon......... I m sorry if u r dishearted i didnt intense to do so......plzzzzz forgive me Soha.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Amna
Nov 14th 2013
Soha Lolxxx! But Amna, remember, u once said me you'll give me a surprise......where's that surprise?? You know, I was very curious about it but then......nothing! I think u don't wanna be my friend anymore. Soha
Nov 12th 2013
Amna Eid Mubarak Soha and all my friends:) Wish u have a wonderful Eid with your family,friends and meat...........Lolx<3 Amna
Oct 15th 2013
Soha ;P ;D!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Soha
Sep 20th 2013
Rafia :D :D :D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rafia
Sep 15th 2013
Soha :D!!!!! Soha
Sep 14th 2013
Rafia :))))) Rafia
Sep 11th 2013
Nimra :))) Nimra
Sep 11th 2013
Nimra :))) Nimra
Sep 11th 2013
Soha :) :P :D!!!!!! Soha
Sep 10th 2013
Rafia Me toooo :):):):))))))) Rafia
Sep 8th 2013
Soha YES!!!! I am very happy :D Soha
Sep 4th 2013
Rafia Yup!! me too ....... actually it won t20 nd odi series (both) :D Rafia
Sep 3rd 2013
Soha Guys......!! Pakistan won the T-20 series against Zimbabwe! I am extremely happy :)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Soha
Aug 25th 2013
Soha Happy Independence Day! Soha
Aug 14th 2013
Soha Thanks and Bismah I got stationery stuff like pointers, geometry box, colors etc. Soha
Aug 14th 2013
saman Nice realy nice Saman
Aug 14th 2013
Rafia Ur welcome dear :) Rafia
Aug 13th 2013
Bismah Can i ask what was in the gift Bismah
Aug 13th 2013
Soha Ur welcome Ashir and thanks Rafia.. Soha
Aug 13th 2013
Rafia Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww................... that sooooooooo nyc................ i like ur writing skills :) Rafia
Aug 13th 2013
dfg Nice one...!!!!!! thnx for wht u said about my writing!! Dfg
Aug 13th 2013
Soha Eid Mubarak! Soha
Aug 11th 2013
Amna Khair mubarak:) Amna
Jul 29th 2013
Soha Thnks and Ramadan mubarak everyone! Soha
Jul 26th 2013
Arwa Ramadan Mubarak Arwa
Jul 14th 2013
Marwa A very nice one loved it Marwa
Jul 12th 2013
Nimra Khair mubarak and same 2 u both.. :) Nimra
Jul 11th 2013
afifah Ramadan mubarak Afifah
Jul 11th 2013
Jul 10th 2013
Soha Am back and I had a lot of fun there. And thnx hafsa... Really really thnkful to for posting a good comment ;) Soha
Jul 6th 2013
HAFSA Soha your story was veryyyyyyyyyyyyy niceee Hafsa
Jun 30th 2013
Irum Soha, are you back frm summer camp? did u have fun?? I wud have loved to do a night stayover wid frnds!! Irum
Jun 26th 2013
Soha U're always welcome and no Thnx as frnds! Soha
Jun 25th 2013
Amna Thanks Soha<3 Amna
Jun 15th 2013
Soha Thanks to u yaar for making me friend! Nice d.p :) Multicolored flowers..! Soha
Jun 9th 2013
Soha Yes it's summer camp organized by our school. And it's night stayover too! Soha
Jun 9th 2013
Amna Ok,Soha!May I ask you that which camp are you joining??I mean that is it a summer camp or .........What?? And great thanks yar,I was overjoyed<3 Amna
Jun 8th 2013
Soha Amna I've commented on all your pages and I told u that u're very nice and sweet frnd. We'll chat on ur page alright? Soha
Jun 7th 2013
Soha Ayesha i am not sure about the publishing process. You can report an error on feedback page or ask uncle shine. And Amna of course I am ur frnd and InshAllah we'll talk. Don't worry.. Actually exams!!!!! Are going on and InshAllah I'll be free on 14th but onwards is camp so I'll come back home on 18th and then we can talk OK? Soha
Jun 7th 2013
Amna Soha,just leave this stress!and cme to my pge.I have my holidays onwards till Eid,so we can talk to eachother<<<<3333 and 1 thing u r my friend or not just clear it.....cuz ur not talking to me,first u make me your friend n now u r leaving me plzzzzz talk to me::::::::::::::))))))))))))) Amna
Jun 6th 2013
Irum Ok sorryyyyyy... Anyway, do you know why VShine doesn't accept my stories? I tried sending Stories, poems, articles, but not one has been published!!!!! Can you tell me how they published yours?????? Irum
Jun 5th 2013
Soha Yeah maybe cuz I reported this error to Vshine. Anyhow plz don't comment such kinds of things. Soha
Jun 4th 2013
Irum I don't know where her comment is. Maybe VShine just cut it off coz it was kind of offensive.. Irum
Jun 3rd 2013
Soha Hehehehee..... JUST FOR FFUUN!!!!!!!! I can't believe it! I am really sorry :) So it's OKay! BTW the rest of comment????? Soha
May 31st 2013
Soha No Ayesha, I didn't like this at all! And where is her rest of comment??? Soha
May 31st 2013
Irum Guys, please don't be mad at Hafsa. Shes my cousin. She posted this comment When I was at her house and said that she did this just for fun. Okay? I know forgiving someone is really hard,, but as you're a good person, Soha, please forgive her.... Irum
May 31st 2013
May 29th 2013
Soha Ayesha Lakho is my frnd who thinks that I am beautiful cuz once I put my picture in my d.p so she said that I am very preety etc. SO what's the use of using the word WE!!!! Just say I. Don't be angry OK!!!!! I hope no one agrees u just like Areeqa. She's a really nice person! Soha
May 29th 2013
Soha Dear Hafsa, Wht do u mean? If I coment that's my problem as I am having my acount I have a right to comment and I am not posting NASTY comments. I am just admiring my frnds! Anyhow I never comented on ur page so what's the problem with u. It is up to me for what I am doing! PLZ Hafsa try to understand. AND NO NED TO FIGHT! Soha
May 29th 2013
areeqa Hafsa i dont think soha has ever commented bad thingson anyone's profile .......she always give compliments n admire others she is a very nice person! Areeqa
May 26th 2013
HAFSA Soha, what is the problem with you? You are always commenting on others' stories Hafsa
May 23rd 2013
Soha Ok! Soha
May 5th 2013
Irum Hi Soha. I just wanted your opinion about an article, it's called "A Real Child Star (malala Yosufzai)". I wanted to know which side you're on? On Malala's or on Taliban? You can reach this article by clicking on me, then click on my commented, the sixteenth or first commented article is "A Real Child Star (malala Yosufzai)". Read it and give me your feedback. Coz I wanna know which type of girl you are. Okay? Please don't mind it. Accept my little request of reading that article and giving the feedback. Okay? Please don't hesitate in going against the author's point of view. Irum
May 2nd 2013
Soha Well first thank u so much and then you asked me that from where I learnt to write.. You know what?? There is a hidden talent in everyone.. Maybe in u as well so why not utelise it?? And I accepted your request Soha
Apr 30th 2013
Laibah It is an AMAZING story.How old are you and where did you learn to write like that ??? Please write some more stories 'cause I just love them alot. I am 10 and I sent you a friend request PLEASE ACCEPT IT !!!!!! Laibah
Apr 27th 2013
Soha Thank u so much! Soha
Apr 26th 2013
khadija Wow what a wonderful story i reall like it Khadija
Apr 25th 2013
Soha Yeah I sometimes watch T.V. I like to watch some kind of informative programs you know.. Soha
Apr 11th 2013
aasiya Wat abouy u?do u watch t.v? Aasiya
Apr 10th 2013
Soha Awww! How sweet of u... Well I also wanna meet you!!! It's so kind of u! Soha
Apr 9th 2013
areeqa OMG! soha its such an amazing story.... as ive read ur comments i think ur a very goood person! i just wanna see u in real life! Areeqa
Apr 7th 2013
aasiya I got 87.24% and i dun watch t.v! Aasiya
Apr 7th 2013
Soha Aasiya!!!!! Where are u?? I asked u a question! Soha
Apr 7th 2013
Soha Thanks buddy! Soha
Apr 4th 2013
LyeBa Congratulation Soha:)))) Lyeba
Apr 3rd 2013
Soha What about your %?? And do u watch TV?? What is your favourite programe? Soha
Apr 3rd 2013
Soha Well, 98% and same here (hobbies). Reading books and using Internet! Soha
Apr 3rd 2013
aasiya Ohh congratx alot and wat about %????????my hobby is to read buks and using net!wat about urs?????? Aasiya
Apr 2nd 2013
Soha Yes.. I told u I got 1st position.. By the way what's your hobby?? Soha
Apr 1st 2013
aasiya Soha did u get the result of this yeAR? Aasiya
Mar 31st 2013
aasiya Uppx sorry soha!i was not getting tym 2 use the net! Aasiya
Mar 31st 2013
Soha Where r u Aasiya? Soha
Mar 27th 2013
Soha I have hotmail ID but I'm sorry I am not allowed to tell u the ID. Soha
Mar 26th 2013
manal Hi soha! do you have a g mail ID? Manal
Mar 25th 2013
aasiya Where are u soha? Aasiya
Mar 23rd 2013
Soha Happy Pakistan day to all of you! Soha
Mar 23rd 2013
Soha Thanks Aasiya. No it's not me. I took this picture from Internet. First picture, I put was me but I was fed up of it so I changed. Soha
Mar 23rd 2013
aasiya Soha is this u on ur d.p? Aasiya
Mar 22nd 2013
aasiya Yah u r rite!nd congratx soha for getting 1st position!(ma dear frnd) Aasiya
Mar 22nd 2013
rabia Nice story but soha now u r in grade 6 and r u having bio sub toooooo Rabia
Mar 21st 2013
Soha As I told u earlier that I got first position all over Pakistan this time so I got my cash prize.. I also got first position in my class in exams. Soha
Mar 20th 2013
Soha I agree u Aasiya but I prefer computers rather than bio.. NO matter to me is u like bio and yes i am free from exams.. Soha
Mar 20th 2013
Soha Thank u so much Areeqa!!! Soha
Mar 20th 2013
aasiya Welll!u cant say lyk that cox every1 has his/her own choice! i luv bio alott!khair r u free 4m exams????????? Aasiya
Mar 16th 2013
areeqa Soha ur a very nicee girl! i like u soo much! Areeqa
Mar 15th 2013
Soha Oh Aasiya!!! I don't like bio.. You know all those body parts etc. YUCK!!! Soha
Mar 14th 2013
aasiya M in bio!well i dun lyk comp at all! Aasiya
Mar 14th 2013
Soha Well, Aasiya I haven't decided yet. But I think I'd like to take computers.. What about u?? And yes Fatimah, I recieved my gift.. Thanks Soha
Mar 9th 2013
fatimah Did u recieve any gift? i rly liked this story and was rly impressed.amazing Fatimah
Mar 8th 2013
aasiya Soha which subject u wud take in class 9th?bio or computers? Aasiya
Mar 7th 2013
Soha What do u mean Fatima..?? Tell me seriously!!! Ofcourse, I've Soha
Mar 6th 2013
Soha Thank u so much moizy!!!!!!!! And Aasiya, today was my first paper.. It was Islamiat. I'll tell u my position later.. Soha
Mar 6th 2013
muhammad saad I also read it in the magazine,exellent story. Muhammad Saad
Mar 5th 2013
Tooba Awesome. Did u write it urself? Tooba
Mar 5th 2013
aasiya Hmm!myn hav got started 4m 1st march!nd congrats for sooooo many wins!i also get 1st position in my previous papers! Aasiya
Mar 4th 2013
Moiz Duaa.. There is no gramatical mistake.. OK! That is the standerd of my Soha appi Moiz
Mar 3rd 2013
Moiz Wow! Soha appi story on my name but saying me lazy! Not fair!!!!!!! Hahaha.. Moiz
Mar 3rd 2013
Moiz Congratulations!And I knew u would get a position!I mean you are really very intelligent and you're always getting first positions in class and now in Pakistan. Really in our whole family,you are the one who's that much intelligent Masha Allah!Keep it up:)) Moiz
Mar 3rd 2013
Soha What about u?? When are your papers gonna start?? Soha
Mar 3rd 2013
Eraj Congrats soha Eraj
Mar 3rd 2013
Soha From sixth of March.. Pray for me:)) Anyways guys.. Let me tell u that I got 1st position in G.A.T.. All over Pakistan.. As I told you earlier about it.. And I got second position all over Pakistan in Oxford Online Exam named KET.. I also got 1st position in my school and class.. I thank my Almighty Allah, then my teachers and my parents! Soha
Mar 2nd 2013
aasiya Hmmmmm same hr!well 4m which date ur paperx r going to start? Aasiya
Mar 2nd 2013
Soha Well, I like English the most.. Soha
Mar 1st 2013
aasiya I m 14 yearx old!u guy lyk which subject? Aasiya
Feb 28th 2013
aasiya Ok......!thnks i will! Aasiya
Feb 26th 2013
Soha Yes, Aasiya, why not?? I am 12 years old and I study in class 6. For more information open my screen and read "About Me" Soha
Feb 26th 2013
aasiya Ok....!will u b my frnd?how old r u? Aasiya
Feb 25th 2013
Soha Thanks afifa:) Soha
Feb 23rd 2013
afifah Nice story!! Afifah
Feb 22nd 2013
Soha Thanks hiba.. Soha
Feb 21st 2013
Hiba Hi soha thanx 4 ur comment and please do like my stories as u are my best u read my stories..ur favour will be always appreciated Hiba
Feb 19th 2013
Soha Hey Aasiya open Amna's screen and go on her stuff... See in the jokes category there is a riddle part.. Open it and read my comment.. You'll find your answer there!!! Soha
Feb 18th 2013
Soha Taimoor, Hanzala and me are friends now.. OK.. I have added him in my friends list. So better if u would also stop fighting and be friend... THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! Soha
Feb 18th 2013
Soha Guys, Our school has branches all over in Pakistan so every student is competing in a exam named General assesment test (G.A.T). It is just finished now and there are thousands of students and this year I got first position all over Pakistan.. Last year I got second.. Am very happy!!!!!! Soha
Feb 18th 2013
Soha Thanks alot Taimoor for your so much respect given to me and I know that Hanzala said to u to say me like this... I would like u to open my screen and read about me.. And one more thing Guys, Our school has branches all over in Pakistan so every student is competing in a exam named General assesment test (G.A.T). It is just finished now and there are thousands of students and this year I got first position all over Pakistan.. Last year I got second.. So Taimoor if you are not opening my screen so let me tell u that I always get first position in my class and school and I am headgirl of my school. All students like me alot and they chose me as headgirl!!! OK! And I win alot of prizes as well.... Soha
Feb 18th 2013
mathilda Hey taimoor wat's the use of writin it ere?? Mathilda
Feb 18th 2013
taimoor Soha you are the bigget looser I will write a story about it that you get 0 marks in every exam or oral test. Taimoor
Feb 17th 2013
aasiya U can read my article named "the curse of child labour"......guysss and soha what did u get in the gift? Aasiya
Feb 17th 2013
Soha Thank u!! Soha
Feb 14th 2013
hanzala Good story.soha. Hanzala
Feb 12th 2013
Soha Thank u so much:) Soha
Feb 11th 2013
Soha Thanks everyone! Soha
Feb 10th 2013
aasiya Heyyyyyy!ur story was realy awesome! Aasiya
Feb 8th 2013
tehmina Soha I appreciate you for your good stories Tehmina
Feb 8th 2013
hijab Nice!!!!! Hijab
Feb 7th 2013
Soha Yeah!! I know!! Thanks Vshine for publishing it in the magazine!! Soha
Feb 6th 2013
samayya Wooooow ! this story is also published in the magazine ? Samayya
Feb 6th 2013
Nimra Ur welcome soha :) Nimra
Feb 5th 2013
Soha Ok Mathilda. Soha
Feb 5th 2013
mathilda Ive read it u must read "the five children and it"by the same writer Mathilda
Feb 3rd 2013
Soha And I am fine Nimra. Soha
Jan 25th 2013
Soha Thanks Hira and Mathidla I do read novels. I just finished one now! Named "The railway children" I just loved it! Soha
Jan 25th 2013
Soha Oh! How sweet Nimra!!!!! Thanks AAAALLLLOOOOTTTT!!!!! Soha
Jan 25th 2013
Soha Thanks brother! Soha
Jan 25th 2013
mathilda Do u read novels?? Mathilda
Jan 24th 2013
Nimra Hey guys hey soha how r u? if anyone ere likes to be my friend so u can and congrats soha :) Nimra
Jan 23rd 2013
Soha Thanks Amna!! And Yes, It's me when I was 7 years old but now I'm 11 and I look child in my pic...)) Soha
Jan 22nd 2013
Abdullah Congrats sis. Abdullah
Jan 21st 2013
Amna Soha I read it and amazed when I read the stories name and your name................Gr8 work Soha::::::::::::))))))))))))))))) Is it u in your dp??? Amna
Jan 21st 2013
hira Congratulations 4 being the my page winner!!! Hira
Jan 21st 2013
Soha Hey guys!!! Do you know what?? My story is published in Vshine magazine "JANUARY EDITION"!!!!! It's on page 32. One more thing................... Vshine thanks aaaaaaa llllllooooooooooootttt!!! For publishing this story in the magazine!! Vshine you just ROCKS............!!! Thanks, and the gift.................... I JUST LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks once again.....................:) Soha
Jan 17th 2013
Amna Thnx Soha:))))) Amna
Jan 13th 2013
Soha Amna, I've posted your reply on your page "Riddle" in the joke catogary. Soha
Jan 11th 2013
Soha Thanks. Soha
Jan 11th 2013
Zainab Wow nice story :) Zainab
Jan 7th 2013
Amna Nice story buddy!!!Hey,Soha thanx for commenting on my page and do u got your gift,What was the gift??PPPPPPPPPlllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz reply me soon on my page:))) Amna
Jan 5th 2013
Soha Thanks a lot!! Soha
Jan 1st 2013
Zoya Nice story congrats! i think to my point there are no grammatical mistakes. WELL WRITTEN ....... Zoya
Dec 31st 2013
bareeka Gud :D Bareeka
Dec 30th 2012
Soha Ok............ Good friends....... Soha
Dec 14th 2012
Amna Yup!!!Why not???? Amna
Dec 13th 2012
Soha Thanks, Amna. Would u like to be my friend? Soha
Dec 12th 2012
Amna Congrats Soha:-) Amna
Dec 12th 2012
Soha Thanks...........!! Soha
Dec 7th 2012
Khadijah Yes,I agree with Urwa . By the way it is a marvellous story. Khadijah
Dec 6th 2012
Urwa Duaa I don't think Soha has made ANY grammatical mistakes. Urwa
Dec 5th 2012
Soha Thanks mohammad! Soha
Dec 4th 2012
Mohammad Nice Story Soha Suhail Congratulation to you Also to Win the Competition... Mohammad
Dec 3rd 2012
Soha Thanks everybody! Soha
Dec 2nd 2012
Nov 24th 2012
Momina I also love reading books and yeah, i clicked the like button! i started reading novels at the age of six. . . great story, by the way!! Momina
Nov 24th 2012
Tasneem Very good! i have clicked on the like button but please give a comment or click on like button on some of my stories or articles Tasneem
Nov 24th 2012
Soha No way! I haven't copied it. If you like it please click on the like button!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!! Soha
Nov 22nd 2012
Tooba Are u sure u havent copied it its marvellous! Tooba
Nov 22nd 2012
Tooba Awsome u should be the winner :) Tooba
Nov 22nd 2012
Soha How's the story? Please click on the like button, please please please........! Soha
Nov 21st 2012
Soha Thanks Khadija. Actually one of my hobbies is reading. I love reading books! Soha
Nov 20th 2012
Soha Thanks Duaa. Can you tell me my MANY grammatical mistakes. PLEASE!!! Soha
Nov 19th 2012
Khadija Nice story... Keep it up... it seems that you are fond of reading books i because you have used good vocabulary and it can only be improved by reading.... Keep it up Khadija
Nov 18th 2012
Duaa Good story but many gramatical mistakes. Nice vocabulary used Duaa
Nov 18th 2012

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