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Muhammad Owais
Muhammad Owais
The City School Jinnah Campus
The Curse
Published On Nov 16th 2012
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I was going home returning from my newly got job was very excited to tell my parents this good news. I reached at the bus stop and sat at a bench, next to a upset man upset not until he saw me and yelling” You, you’re him Now….. yeah you aren’t gonna catch me, he’s here, just growl once to tell me” and suddenly a growl which seemed horrible sounded and I kept my hands tightly at my ears saw every one and had a sudden realize that nobody seemed horrified whereas they were normally walking down the street. Just after a moment everything was normally going. The man who seemed lunatic to me was whispering to me about I don’t know ‘cause still in my mind was that sound and I could hardly hear a few words he spoke. After few moments, I took a cab instead of my bus and ordering him to my cruise to my home rapidly. I, at my house was being mad at what happened to me, was trying to think what the man there said to me, and I thought and it seemed he said something like “taking…my…place…bre..Chain-r…ddaai” or anything he said me creepy things. Or I just arrange it, estimate it to the correct it. Finally I decided to go to library and find out that to what that man was just talking about. I found a book named “Spiritual Elements” written by a personage named “William Walker Atkinson” who I think lived early in 19th century. In it were as same things as he was I think the same person saying about what he felt. I extracted some information to my notepad which read:
“The word ‘spirit’ refers to connotations, most of them relating to a non-corporeal substance contrasted with the material body. The word spirit is often used metaphysically to refer to the consciousness or personality. The notions of a person's "spirit" and "soul" often also overlap, as both contrast with body and both are understood as surviving the bodily death in religion and occultism, and "spirit" can also have the sense of "ghost", i.e. a manifestation of the spirit of a deceased person.”

I got something from this but not what that was about.  I had to learn black magic and I learnt it. Now I knew it so I called upon a spirit however I was unable. So my doubt turned into a scientific reason that I thought that this is my imagination and nothing has been done like this. But I am not going to end this and continue further. After going to a psychiatrist who advised me to do a spiritual act I just gave up and went home and relaxed. In my dream all truth revealed; a crazy man just like that came in my dream and was nervous but told me about that spirit it said “You are the next to die just after you are unable to find someone extremely happy and with a scar shaped a flipped heart on head just like one on yours, “to which I replied “how? It was never there on mine before.” He said “that’s luck son! It, the curse will continue until anyone sacrifices himself/herself”. I woke up and said in my heart “So be it” and went to Chinatown where all china’s citizens are happy so it might be a chance. I went there and was surprised that every one’s head there was a flipped heart. Sudden, a feeling came in my heart saying “What? I? I am doing this sin to kill innocent citizen?... No, I must sacrifice who knows this chain would not be broken so I must sacrifice here.” I went to an empty place and yelled loudly” I, Kevin Stewarts choose to sacrifice my life this spirit Kill me!!”Suddenly a thick, bold voice came asking “Are you sure you want to die?” to which I replied “YES!” A white flash came and I was teleported to an unbelievable place. A white flying personage appeared and lightly said “WELCOME TO HEAVEN, SON….”                                                     

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Comments 9
Tooba Nyc Tooba
May 9th 2014
KHAN Gr8 Khan
Dec 23rd 2013
Muhammad Kanza, Just because you are my Sister?, huh! :P Muhammad
Mar 27th 2013
Kanza Wow ... nice Mohammad Owais ,your vocabulary is really good and what i liked the most is that this story is new which i haven't heard at least !! Kanza
Mar 7th 2013
Soha Nice Soha
Mar 1st 2013
Muhammad @Rumaisa, this is a good way of presenting a mature or a 'fast-moving' stories, You should know that. Even though thank you for commenting. Muhammad
Feb 19th 2013
 яυмαιsα Hmm..................nice story, your vocabulary is good, but grammar is not that much good. яυмαιsα
Dec 23rd 2012
Muhammad Read it, you will find it interesting! Muhammad
Dec 15th 2012
Duaa Long story so i didnt read whole of it, plz publish it again in parts.... Duaa
Nov 17th 2012

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