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Tcsho Iti
Tcsho Iti
The City School
A Silent Death
Published On Nov 16th 2012
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Callan’s triple-great grandparents built the house on the edge of the water nearly one hundred and fifty years ago. The house was set between two small hills on a slope that led up to a higher hill and, eventually, a small mountain. When Callan’s triple-great grandparents built the house, they knew there was a glacier towards the top of the slope. It was hard not to notice the giant wall of ice that had settled, as they did, nicely on the downhill slope between the two hills. What they didn’t know (and, to be fair, no one at that time knew) was that the glacier was slowly, but steadily moving towards the house………..
Middle: But inside the house Callan’s family was having supper and the voice of their laughing and talking can be listened outside the house, but they won’t knew about the glacier was trying to reach their house but the distance was left but the glacier was covering it pretty rapidly. “Mom please! Can I go out to play” ask Ammie (daughter of Callan). “Yes” replied mom. You are so good mom, said Ammie. Now stop boasting me and go out to play said mom.
Ending: After an hour when Ammie went outside to play the glacier reached the house and destroyed the house and killed Callan and his whole home (accept Ammie). Oh my god what happened to my house mom dad where are you? Ammie shouted but there was no one to listen her. Ammie thought that there is nobody left in…. Ammie didn’t complete her sentence but the glacier also made Ammie her target.
Characters: Ammie, Mom and Callan.
Setting: A house at the edge of water and icy mountains.
Conflict: Ammie and her family died due to a glacier.
 
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Comments 5
KHAN Awesome and cool 8-) Khan
Feb 1st 2014
 
 
Rabbiya Didn't understand the story Rabbiya
Jan 29th 2013
 
 
M.Ali Haider Not The Best M.ali Haider
Nov 17th 2012
 
 
Duaa Man grammatical mistakes..... and the characters and setting is introduced at first, not at last..... Duaa
Nov 17th 2012
 
 
Abdullah Nice Abdullah
Nov 17th 2012
 
 

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