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Tcsho Iti
The City School
Katie And The Mag
Published On Nov 16th 2012
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Katie was in her room and was playing her favourite computer game. It was the time of dinner, and her mum came into the room and called Katie. The sound was too thunderous that she can’t here. She was about to kill Mag. Then screen blinked once………then twice………. When Katie woke up she was in the prison of mag with her friends…………………
She found herself in the form of a combatant which she loved the character most. She had the weapons like gun knife and sticks. Her name in the game was Ghandals, with the help of her friends she easily fugitive ran away and went to the next final level. For the time being her mom came in pause the game. Everyone was hiatus in the game. Then Ghandals shrieked and stop her mom to turn of the game and gave the instructions about it. Then the game was begun. After she trounces the company of Mag with the help of her friends, it was the big mighty Mag time to be dominated. It was five on one.  Ghandals Mag and company were taking the lead. When they killed Mag, Katie (Ghandals) found an icon which could lead her back to home.
She finally reached her room while her whole the Family was waiting outside for her. She explained whole the incident to her family and then she eat her dinner and went to bed. While she went to the bed she was thinking whether she would play this game or not??? Should she on the computer or not???

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Tooba Nice and agree with sana Tooba
May 17th 2014
 
 
Momina Its an awesome story! Momina
Nov 24th 2012
 
 
Duaa I agree with Sana. The vocabulary is also very good Duaa
Nov 18th 2012
 
 
M.Ali Haider I Agree With Sana M.ali Haider
Nov 17th 2012
 
 
Sana I understand the idea thoroughly... it is gud bt there r a billion grammatical mistakes. Sana
Nov 16th 2012
 
 

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