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Mahnum Ahmed
Mahnum Ahmed
The Lost Dot Of 'i'
Published On Nov 7th 2012
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November 2012

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The letter 'i' was so sad. He had lost his dot.
He went to 'a' who was eating an apple. ‘a' said “Is it your dot ".'i'  replied "No! It’s an apple."
Then 'i' asked 'e' for his dot. He showed him an egg."Is it your dot"."No" 'i' said.
 'o' showed him an orange and said, “Don’t be sad, here is your dot". 'i' was still unhappy, “No!  It is not”.
‘u’  was standing under an umbrella.’ I’ thought that it is his dot.”No”, he sighed. Suddenly someone knocked his head. I’ looked up. It was his dot. The dot said, “I was gone to the park for a walk”.
Now ‘I’ was complete and happy.
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Comments 27
Nuzhat Nice Nuzhat
Nov 27th 2013
Mairah Gud story............ Mairah
Mar 1st 2013
Sehar Good !! Sehar
Jan 11th 2013
Ghumaisa Great story Ghumaisa
Dec 31st 2013
hijab Hello i am hijab mazhar please add me and are u really win gift hamper and please add me Hijab
Dec 28th 2012
hijab Plzz add me mahnum and nice story:) Hijab
Dec 28th 2012
Maria Its nyc..i love it Maria
Dec 27th 2012
nazra Such an excellent creation Nazra
Dec 23rd 2012
Momina Really awesome keep publishing stories like these!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Momina
Dec 21st 2012
Ayesha Wonderful Story Mahnum Ayesha
Dec 20th 2012
Mahoo It's really nice ^^ Mahoo
Dec 13th 2012
hira May God bless you! Keep it up! Hira
Dec 13th 2012
maryam Brilliant imagination.....KEEP IT UP!!!!!! Maryam
Dec 12th 2012
Mahnum Yayyyy. i m soooo happy. THank you all Mahnum
Dec 3rd 2012
Eesha I love it!!!! Eesha
Dec 1st 2012
rija It is ur pic in ur dp?.... mahnum.and what is ur age?.. waiting 4 ur answer Rija
Dec 1st 2012
Zerni Mahnum CONGRATULATIONS on being a my page winner!!! Excellent creativity Zerni
Dec 1st 2012
Soha Wow, cool story and nice creativity! Congratulations! Soha
Nov 30th 2012
Mahnum Thanks all of you.:) . Yes i wrote it all by myself in my creative writing exersice book.My teacher loved it too Mahnum
Nov 15th 2012
Wajeeha That is such a cute story!! Wajeeha
Nov 15th 2012
tcsho Good story...............:) Tcsho
Nov 14th 2012
Muhammad Very nice keep it up Muhammad
Nov 13th 2012
Duaa Such a creative and an aawweeessssoomeee story!! but tell me, did you write it urself????? Duaa
Nov 11th 2012
Samreen Soo nice... wow! good. i really loved it. Samreen
Nov 10th 2012
Mahnum JazakAllah Mahnum
Nov 8th 2012
Mahnum JazakAllah :) Mahnum
Nov 8th 2012
hiba marium Wow!! it was a good story... keep up ur creativity Hiba Marium
Nov 8th 2012

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