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Hajra Yousuf
Hajra Yousuf
The City School
Charming Catherine
Published On Nov 2nd 2012
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Once upon a time there was a girl, named as Catherine and she had an step mother named as Lucie and she had 4 step sisters named as Para, Jara, Sweety And Pretty. Her step mothers and her sisters tell her to work and she also work as a maid. She was uneducated .She really feel bad but she was unable to do something. One day, there was a beautiful invitation of a beautiful, charming prince. This invitation was for marriage purpose which means that prince want to get marry by someone so he called everyone but her step mother did not take her and at home she cried a lot. Suddenly, a fairy came and made her as beautiful as a nature. Then she went to the prince palace and then when prince saw her he was in fall in love with Catherine . Soon she was crowned in palace and her step mother and sisters were surprised. From that they feel very sorry and Catherine forgive them and they were living happily. O
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Comments 10
Tooba Nice story and taken ideas from Cinderella but it is ok it is nice Tooba
May 11th 2014
Maha Cindrella's Theme isn't it?! But You Could have Done Much Better! Maha
Jul 14th 2013
Uswah Hajra u have taken main idea from Cinderella and i don't like this thing at all. I believe u can do better u just have to be more creative. try writing a story on the same title and see what you can do! Uswah
Jul 13th 2013
Momina Good but many mistakes copied from cinderella, but i dont mind Momina
Dec 21st 2012
arifa Every1 knows that it's the stupid cinderella story that u hav changed a bit and wriiten it here... Arifa
Nov 6th 2012
HAJRA Thanks and fatimma idea was of cindrella bt nt copied and i hav written in 30 mins so there will be gramatical mistakes and sorry for that... Hajra
Nov 4th 2012
Tooba Copied from Cinderella and gramatical mistakes Tooba
Nov 3rd 2012
Khadijah A good story Khadijah
Nov 3rd 2012
HAJRA Thankx Hajra
Nov 2nd 2012
Aiman Gramatical mistakes but good story Aiman
Nov 2nd 2012

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