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Duaa Hassan
Duaa Hassan
Becon House School System
The Enchanted Tree Part 1
Published On Oct 29th 2012
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Here we are in our new house near the jungle. Wake up Shaggy and Susan!” Said there dad shaking the sleepy-heads Tongue out who were sleeping peacefully in the car, their heads on each other’s shoulder. “Oh Freddie! You could just lift them up one by one and lay them on the bags till we set the blankets and stuff to sleep on. They are not used to wake up this late at night.” “But Daphne....” “No buts. Just do what I said and it will be better.” So both of them walked away with Freddie both of the children in his arms Daphne laughed at the way he was carrying both of the children at once. “I told you to carry both of them one by one. You did not listen to me.” Both of them went in a room. The walls were........
 Next part coming sooonnnn........
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Comments 6
Soha Great!!!!!!! Soha
Feb 11th 2013
 
 
Momina Really awesome im on my way 2 the next prt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Momina
Dec 21st 2012
 
 
Duaa I have published the next part Khadija Duaa
Nov 7th 2012
 
 
Duaa What sort of mistakes???? Duaa
Nov 6th 2012
 
 
Khadijah There are some mistakes,still It is a good story ............ Waiting ... Khadijah
Nov 3rd 2012
 
 
Duaa SOMEONE COMMEEENNNTTT!!! Duaa
Nov 2nd 2012
 
 

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