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Barirah Rehan
Barirah Rehan
Army Public School Hyderabad Cantt
Parents
Published On Oct 23rd 2012
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Once upon a time there was a family with one child and mother with his siblings. They lived in a street named gamster street. They were very poor, but her mother wanted his son to study in good school so she worked in the same school by cooking for teachers and doing side works to support family. She just had one eye. Child's mother came to his child in his class just to say hi! But his son ignored her because his friends asked him, is she your mother? yeew! And they all were afraid of her. When his child grew up so her mother sent him to study out of country to study in good university. He became mature and the was married and had two children, so her mother came to him to meet him and his children but when she arrived his son was not happy and said "Why you came here?"After saying this his children came and shouted aaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!.his son said "see made my children afraid and closed the door by great strength. Her mother left from there crying and asked her neighbours to give the letter to his son, not telling why she is not giving it to his son directly.Her mother left that country and settled in the house which she bought for his son and wanted to gift him. She died after two months and his son's neighbours got the news and remembered to give his son the letter which they had forgot to give. when he got that letter his neighbours told him about her mother death he was not sad at all when he read the letter in which was written my child I am sorry I came to your house and scared your children I wanted to tell you that when you were fouryiou had an accident by which you lost your one eye. People laughed at you and many of them were scared so I gave u mine. I was so proud that you could see the whole new world with your eyes at my place. Your mother with love.
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Comments 12
nazish I like your story.you have a good sense of writing. Nazish
May 16th 2013
 
 
Soha Sad! But I read it in another magazine and I know That Aliza and u, Both have copied it! Isn't it?????? Do tell me honestly!!!! Soha
Jan 25th 2013
 
 
Soha Sad! But I read it in another magazine and I know That Aliza and u, Both have copied it! Isn't it?????? Do tell me honestly!!!! Soha
Jan 25th 2013
 
 
Ali YOU COPYCAT! MY FRIEND ALIZA ZAFAR WROTE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ali
Nov 29th 2012
 
 
barirah Thnx for correcting that Barirah
Nov 8th 2012
 
 
Khadijah There Are mistakes.In place of " her " you should write "his". And in the place of "his" you should write "her". Khadijah
Nov 3rd 2012
 
 
Fatima I've read it 2 Fatima
Nov 3rd 2012
 
 
Momina I read this story somewhere on vshine good anyway Momina
Oct 26th 2012
 
 
Duaa Aawweeee!!!! Such a very heart touching storyyy...... Mothers are truely devoted to heir children. I <3 u mama Duaa
Oct 25th 2012
 
 
barirah No i did not copied one of my friend told me she donot uses vshine so i added her story here. and thanks for liking it Barirah
Oct 25th 2012
 
 
Emaan Aw. So touching. Emaan
Oct 24th 2012
 
 
Aimen Marvellous story but you,ve copied the idea i read it from the magazine taleem o tarbiat Aimen
Oct 24th 2012
 
 

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