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Malaika Idrees
Malaika Idrees
Beaconhouse School System
The Treasure Box Of Luck
Published On Oct 25th 2012
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Brianna was a normal girl, she lived a simple life in the village side with her two brothers and one sister. She was the eldest one. Her parents worked very hard to earn a living. She did not go to school even its fee was very little. The girl also used to work hard to make life much easier for all of the villagers. Whenever she woke up early in the morning she continued her same routine. She picked up the bucket and started to go to the river to fill water for her family members to drink. While going, she always met her friends and told them that they should be provided with education. She was someone different and she knew that she could make difference in their lives now and then.
One day when she woke up in the morning and went to the riverside along with her friends she saw a piece of paper. She read it as she knew how to read and speak English. It was written:
“FIND THE GREATEST TREASURE OF THIS WHOLE WORLD AND TO FIND IT YOU WOULD HAVE TO FOLLOW THIS MAP AS IT WILL LEAD YOU TO YOUR DESTINY.”
Brianna went home fast and then told her mother all about what had happened. Brianna was very adventurous. She asked her mother that could she find the treasure but her mother did not allow her this as the map showed the path through the Grazel Forest which had got many wild animals that could harm her. So the mother refused. The girl argued until her mother at last agreed but on one condition she would have to come back before evening. The girl agreed to the condition. It was a tiring day for her she reached safely home with the treasure box. When she opened it there was no jewellery no expensive items but only a piece of paper, she read it and inside was written:-
“YOUR LUCK WILL WORK WHEN YOUR HEART IS PURE. TONIGHT YOU WILL SLEEP AND THIS LIFE WILL GO. SO CLOSE YOUR EYES AND MAKE IT WORK.”
Brianna’s mother started to scold her for bringing such a silly treasure box with no useful thing in it. Brianna knew what the paper meant, she knew it was the only way to change her family’s life forever and she slept. In the morning she woke up and saw that she was sleeping in a very big room which was very beautiful. She opened the cupboard and there, she saw many beautiful dresses and a small note on the dressing table which said:-
“YOU CHANGED YOUR LUCK BY YOUR OWN SELF SO THIS IS NOW YOUR NEW LIFE”
Brianna was very happy, now she and her family lived a great life and today she is a great business owner and lives a great life.
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Comments 10
samra Very good Samra
Jul 23rd 2015
 
 
qurratul WELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLDONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Qurratul
Mar 16th 2014
 
 
Anam Great story so good yes it is Anam
Nov 2nd 2013
 
 
Fatima Fantastic! Fatima
Nov 3rd 2012
 
 
Khadijah I liked it sooooooooo much Khadijah
Oct 31st 2012
 
 
Khadijah I liked it sooooooooo much Khadijah
Oct 31st 2012
 
 
Menahil Excellent attempt............keep it up up up up LOLxxx Menahil
Oct 29th 2012
 
 
Duaa Fine...... gud concept Duaa
Oct 27th 2012
 
 
Syed Maaz Very nice story...a fantasy..i like it.. :) Syed Maaz
Oct 26th 2012
 
 
Aimen Excellent Aimen
Oct 25th 2012
 
 

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