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Fatimah Latif
Fatimah Latif
Pakistan International School (pisj)
The Haunted Island (part 1)
Published On Oct 21st 2012
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‘Help me, help me’. I felt myself drowning in that deep blue sea. I felt something dragging me down .I could no longer breath, my lungs were about to burst when I finally forced myself up………..and saw something in a distance………an ISLAND. To survive, I tried to swim towards it, it was not far and I reached it soon. The touch of that sand felt good and I felt safe, for now. I tried to remember what had happened with me, my school plane crashed into the sea and I was the only survivor. I was scared and started to cry asking myself a dozens of questions, how did this happen? Why did this happen? Why is not anyone alive? Where am I? Where is everybody? Will I ever be rescued? Will my parents ever know that I am alive?  Oh God please help me. Suddenly someone called my name I looked up startled but dint saw anyone. I thought maybe I was not the only survivor maybe there was someone else maybe one of my friends. I started searching the island but did not found a single soul. Maybe it was a voice in my head or I may have imagined it. It was becoming dark and I thought of building a shelter as there was nothing else I could do. I made I out of palm tree leaves which had already fallen down because of I guess storms………huh……………storms, I really was afraid that it would rain and I would lose my only shelter which was very weak. I looked up in the sky and it was clear with shinning stars, thank God there were no chances of rain.
I could still hear the cries of my classmates screaming for help ………and soon fell asleep.
Something tingled around my legs, I woke up frighten, I checked my legs, no nothing perhaps it was a leaf blown away by wind so as I was going back to sleep I realized that someone was laying beside me. It was dark to see but I could make out that it was a human figure just my size. I thought that it must be one of the survivors I was really overjoyed to see someone alive but as I touched the figure it felt soggy and slimy. It moved and turned and now I could see its real face. I stared in shock and horror. It was a little girl with no eyes only empty eye sockets, wide open mouth with no teeth and blood covered her face. It tried to attack me ……..I fainted.
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Comments 20
Berha Perfect scary story very scary it's really really scaryyy did i mention it was scary Berha
Apr 11th 2016
Fatima Oh my god! I wanted to read this story and now I found it! I got really scared Fatima
Oct 1st 2015
amna Very,very scary....... Amna
Aug 6th 2015
Anam Very very scary Anam
May 21st 2014
Soha WOWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! Soha
Aug 12th 2013
Marwa Very nice Marwa
Jul 17th 2013
unaiza Wowwwwwwwwwwwww full of suspense. I say! that's an amazing job Unaiza
Jul 15th 2013
Irum Aweeeeeeeeeesoooooooooooome!!! Irum
Jul 3rd 2013
Irum Aweeeeeeeeeesoooooooooooome!!! Irum
Jul 3rd 2013
 яυмαιsα Beautiful яυмαιsα
Feb 21st 2013
Soha Aawweeeesssomeeee. Soha
Feb 15th 2013
Momina Woah scary, cant wait to read nxt part Momina
Dec 22nd 2012
Duaa Aawweeeesssomeeee Duaa
Dec 14th 2012
fatimah Awwwwwwwwwwwww thnx <3 :) Fatimah
Dec 11th 2012
Sana Really good! Sana
Dec 11th 2012
hira Oh!! well great effort Fatimah!!!!!!! Hira
Dec 11th 2012
tcsho What a story Tcsho
Nov 14th 2012
Fatima wAiTiNg! Fatima
Nov 3rd 2012
fatimah The next part is long thats why its talking me long...........sorry for that. Fatimah
Oct 25th 2012
Aimen Scary waiting for the next part Aimen
Oct 25th 2012

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