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Marhama Shams
Marhama Shams
Icg Islamabad
Best Friends
Published On Oct 14th 2012
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It is a story about 2 friends lived in a town they were very close to each other and share happiness and anger with each other they love being one at times one day when they were in their homes a call came to Saima she pick up the phone and said hello suddenly a terrible voice came and said your friendship is finish Sana realized that someone was threatening him and ignore the phone call on the third day at Sara home the phone start ringing she picked the phone and same voice came that came to Sara she was shocked and answered nothing. Next day she went to Saima and told about the phone call they both realized that the same persons was threatening at last they opened the phone record and an unknown no came they searched and searched until one day they realized that their own school friend was threatening him and wanted to finish the friendship so she sorry them and the both the friends added Sara in group and lived happily ever after.
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Comments 14
Aleesha Try harder,& and take care of grammar mistakes. Aleesha
Aug 21st 2016
 
 
Areeba GOOOOOD but needs improvement. Areeba
May 25th 2016
 
 
Eraj It's a really Good story!! Keep it up!! Eraj
Mar 24th 2016
 
 
Nuzhat Nice but mistakes Nuzhat
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Nuzhat Nice but mistakes Nuzhat
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Nuzhat Nice but mistakes Nuzhat
Nov 6th 2013
 
 
Soha Awesome!! Soha
Feb 7th 2013
 
 
marhama Thanks guys Marhama
Jan 30th 2013
 
 
marhama Oh ilkl try to make it better thank u guys Marhama
Jan 30th 2013
 
 
Momina Hey it is an AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 just a lot of mistakes don't mind :) Momina
Dec 22nd 2012
 
 
Itachi Don't understand sorry but try better next time. :) Itachi
Nov 13th 2012
 
 
Fatima :) Fatima
Nov 3rd 2012
 
 
FR NO.1 Yah fatima is right me too fatimah Fr No.1
Nov 2nd 2012
 
 
Fatima Nice but a lot of grammatical mistakes Fatima
Oct 15th 2012
 
 

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