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Emaan  Farhan
Emaan Farhan
Westminster School And College
When I Was Young
Published On Sep 28th 2012
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When I was young
It was quite fun
Because everyone kept fussing about me
And they kept calling me "Darling or "Sweetie"
I got cuddles and pats on my head
My cheeks were pinched so hard that they almost went red
But now I'm a bit old
It's time for me to be bold
No more wasting time or extra cuddles
Just housework and math muddles
I miss those times so
Swinging between father's legs to and fro
But I know I am still loved very much so
My mum still cuddles me, so I know.
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Comments 12
Emaan Yes, of course they do :) Well, not all of them, I do :D Emaan
Nov 7th 2012
Amna Ohhh!!!!!!!!! Eman do friends say thank u?????????? U r simply awesome:-) Amna
Nov 3rd 2012
samayya Oh! I am also a scorpion and I also have interest in make up and such things :P but I am not an over craved person for make up, sehar said NOT BEING TOO OVER,....anyways excellent work emaan ! same is the thing with me ! Samayya
Oct 15th 2012
Sehar Well how did you know,....that I have interest in makeup? well I'm only 12 right now but on weekends I do makeup (not being too over)......,well are you a scorpion ? Sehar
Oct 10th 2012
Emaan Sehar: Awwwwwww Sehar! You'll be a good Make up expert or someone like that, You're AWESOME! Amna: Thank you so much dear Amna! Everyone on Vshine are SUCH sweethearts! Emaan
Oct 9th 2012
Amna Eman,awesome!!!!!!!! u and ur poem is always true:-) Amna
Oct 8th 2012
Sehar Ur thoughts are just same as my ! way of expressing feelings is really gud ! keep up the gud job be a gud poet :) Sehar
Oct 8th 2012
Emaan Thank you Khadija, and we still ARE in our youth and we should make the best of it,not try to grow up tooooooo early :D Thanks again,you're awesome :DDD Emaan
Oct 4th 2012
l Wonderfully nice poem this is....youngest days are the best days in our life because then there are no worries of the world and you are free....... L
Oct 3rd 2012
Emaan Raniah you are more wonderful :) Emaan
Oct 3rd 2012
Raniah Nice , really wonderful . . . =) Raniah
Oct 2nd 2012
Emaan So,what do you guys think? Rate it: *,**,***,**** OR ***** starrs?? Tell me! Emaan
Sep 29th 2012

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