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Tooba Raheel
Tooba Raheel
Divisional Public School, Lahore.
Abdullah, A Patient Boy (2/4)
Published On Sep 24th 2012
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They were taken to the hospital at once. The driver of the truck had broken his leg and there was a bruise in his hand.  Abdullah was hardly hurt; he only had a cut on his head. But his parents were hurt. His mother was so terrible that she was taken to the I.C.U. at once. When Abdullah asked about his father the doctor said “Oh your father he only has a vein broken near the left hand which can be joined, thanks to Allah because if the vein of the heart or near the lung had been broken than his life would have been in terrible danger. His father was discharged after three days. After a week when they were doing dinner the phone rang. Abdullah answered it “Assalam-u-alaikum yes patient forty-two is my mom. Is she alright? What? No this cannot be true. You are lying” Tears flowed down his cheeks. “What happened Abdullah? Abdullah?” Abdullah fainted. After he recovered his father said “What happened?” For a long time he said nothing then slowly he replied “Mom…………Mom is dead” He noticed that his father didn’t cry at all. First he thought that he was not crying because then he would be even sadder but when his mother’s body was being taken away he was not crying, not even a tear. His aunt was doing the same; in fact when his mother’s body was being taken away she had a pleased look in her face. When everyone was going for salat-ul-janazah he saw his father and aunt crying a lot. When hardly ten minutes had passed his father and aunt went to the living room and closed the door.  Abdullah followed them. He saw from the keyhole his father said something to his aunt “Will you……………” That was all Abdullah could hear. His aunt smiled shyly and said “of course why not it’s best for everyone even for you and me” Abdullah went to his room and slept. The next day he thought he had seen a nightmare that his mother had died but it was true. Then he remembered his father and aunt talking and laughing. He called his father and asked him “what were you and aunt talking about?” For a long time he said nothing then he said “Abdullah I know it will be hard for you but I am going to marry your aunt and…………..”
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Comments 16
Irza It sound good so far ☺ Irza
May 18th 2017
Tooba Yes Tooba
Feb 27th 2013
Naima Very good you written this story???????????????? Naima
Jan 22nd 2013
Duaa Awesomeeee Duaa
Dec 16th 2012
Momina Sad stupid aunt and dad.......... otherwise awesome! Momina
Dec 14th 2012
Sana @ Arifa how did u guess??? Sana
Oct 10th 2012
Tooba I have almost written the next part maybe the story will be at vshine on 29,30 or 31 september Tooba
Sep 28th 2012
Khadijah Waiting for the next part ! Khadijah
Sep 27th 2012
Tooba Yeah Tooba
Sep 27th 2012
zainab Amazing!!! Zainab
Sep 26th 2012
arifa Hmmm...let me put on my thinking cap... GOSH! its soooo gr8! FATIMA'S STORY:accomplished! :) hey fa'ma! u sana's sis??... Arifa
Sep 26th 2012
Tooba Thanx 4 ur comments it means a lot 2 me :) Tooba
Sep 26th 2012
Amna Sad+Interesting Amna
Sep 25th 2012
Tooba Or maybe more..........cuz i said 2 a friend 2 write stories she said she is busy so she told me every thing about the story and i m going 2 write it on her account(she told me the password) it's name is "Princess Momina's rescue" (by zainab tariq she is also my friend on vshine) Tooba
Sep 25th 2012
Tooba Next part coming after 3 to 4 weeks due to some problems Tooba
Sep 25th 2012
Aiman Interesting Aiman
Sep 25th 2012

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