There was once a little city; right in the north of Mexico called Miracle City. Miracle City was old and new, turn to the left and you can see women making sombreros and selling fruit, and turn to the right and spot busy shopping malls and restaurants filled with the friendly people of Mexico.
Santosa Revera was walking along the busy road, observing the scenery of the Miracle Park from across the road. It was a cold autumn afternoon, with red, brown, yellow-scarlet leaves blowing about the air, and there was warmth in the air because Mr. Antonio had a cosy bonfire lit up for himself, and it was a rather big one, and it's warmth reached as far as little Santosa. "Buenas tardes senor Antonio!" Santosa greeted Sir Antonio with a smile. "What a cosy bonfire!" Sir Antonio looked up with a twinkle in his black eye. "Buenas Tardes mi querido,¿Cómo está mi niña hoy?" That means in "Good Afternoon my dear, how's my little girl today?" Santosa smiled and sat next to him, putting her backpack on a log nearby. "I'm fine Sir Antonio; I think I prefer English to speak nowadays." Antonio laughed at her remark. "Ah yes, the children of today don't prefer to speak Spanish anymore. Well would you like a baked potato?" He asked, holding a plate full of baked potatoes. Santosa smiled warmly and took one. "Gracias senor Antonio.Estos son muy buenos!"
After finishing the delicious potato, Santosa picked up her bag and waved goodbye to Sir Antonio. She wanted to get home to take off her ridiculously big-in-size coat. "Hola Mama,I'm back!"She said, wiping her feet. She stepped inside breathing in the sweet smell of home. Mama looked sad. She was usually cheery and happy, and the atmosphere of the house was happy too, but today, the expression on Mama's face was as melancholy as a dark attic room. "Hola mi bebe." she said, hugging Santosa tightly as if she had met her baby for the first time. "I have something to tell you. Come,let's go in my room and talk."Santosa quietly followed her mama to her room.
"Mama ,that can't happen! I want to stay HERE!"Mama had told Santosa that her papa had got a job somewhere in Australia and they had to leave in 7 weeks. "Santosa Miguel, No tenemos otra opción, papá ya ha firmado los papeles." Santosa sulked. She didn't like the idea ONE bit. She felt incomodo about it. (Uncomfortable)
Pierre ran up. "Hey les gars, désolé, je suis en retard, dormi trop tard ce soir-là" Pierre was French,which was exciting for Santosa,because she knew how to speak French.Mariela did too.
"It's Ok.We know you like watching movies late night." Santosa said brightly,even though she was sad after the news of leaving dear,spicy Miracle City. "Hey,did you guys see Barbara selling handmade bags and scarves and jewelrey near the marketplace?" Pierre asked,in his high French accent. "I didn't."
"Nope." So Pierre had one thing to do-take them to the marketplace and show us what Barbara the English girl had set up. Then Raniah came up. "Hello Friends! Guess what? My brother and I are taking you to the marketplace today!"
When we approached the marketplace, we said hello to Barbara. "Hello Friends. I'm selling some things I made myself to make moments. I'm going back to England after a few weeks!"
And at that very moment, Santosa had a Great idea.
Momina: You can't be serious, I l y s m!!!!!! Thank you SOOOOOO MUCH!!! Hugssssssssssssssssss :)))))
Nov 26th 2012
Emaan u r the greatest person i know!!!!! I agree with Directioner Forever that, which crazy, stupid (and believe me, i can say more bad words but i dont think i should:D) freaks wouldnt take u for a friend?????? i know I would (take u for a friend)!!!! u r awesome!!!!! how old r u? i turned eleven on 2nd october . . . and directioner forever, do u LUV 1D? Cuz I definetiley do.............. i love their songs little things, more than this and live while were young. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . they are awesome. . . . . . . But Emaan is awesomer!!!
We wen to the Regionals but lost :( That's OK, I proved that my school's not stupid :DDD
Oct 8th 2012
I told you a thousand times that its the dha board one not the dawn spelling beee one i did not lie really if you dont understand then you know all the schools of dha like that one not the dawn spelling bee what happen abut your spelling beee
Oh Zainab I'm not mad at you. It's just that Vshine's not posting my comments and stories lately. You know,delay? Hey I don't wanna boast,but I've got all the books of Candy Apple. Oh and Zainab,I did NOT see you at the spelling bee neither heard the school's name being called out. You lied,didn't you?
Oct 5th 2012
Emaan are you mad at me i'm sorry if you are plz be freinds again
You know i know a bit spanish and where did you learn these languages sooooooo welll and how many candy apple books do you have i have all the accidentallys fabulous,famous,fooled and friends and all the miss popularitys miss popularity goes camping,miss popularity and the bf disaster and i have 1 poison apple book its her evil twin which do you have
Directioner. U make me feel ecstatic! Thank you soo much! Will U be one of my best Vshine Pal? And your stuff is a work of art! I LOVVVVEEEEE it! I live in Clifton In Karachi. Oh and I didn't get your friend request,so I sent you one. Did you get it?
Sep 29th 2012
Hi emaan.. omg u are such a good person.. just read your intro and it made me wonder what freaks wouldn't wanna be your friends ?? they must really be outta their minds...
besides I can make a good friend so please feel free to check out my stuff... it might be boring though but still..and tell me which place are u from in karachi??? I am in K.S.A we live here but while in pakistan I am from karachi too that is from gulistan-e-johar...
so yeah please accept my friend request...
U really write good...
Yup! i am there too... but the prob is that I AM IN DA 12-14 AGE GROUP! its difficult! i am the leader of my team.
last year i was in 9-11 and I ACED DA DISTRICT round but we lost cuz of a stupid word in the regionals! my team's name appeared in the saturday Dawn Metro and South paper...
BUT THIS TIME ITS TOUGHER! i am 12
Aww Raniah you make me feel super special. I put your name in the story because I like you so much! You Are The Best! And thnxxxx my friend Khadija you are very positive towards me! AND GUESS WHAT? TODAY WAS THE SPELLING BEE AND I ACED IT!!!! YEAH! WESTMINSTER IS GOING TO THE REGIONALS BABY!
Sep 26th 2012
O_o my name . . wow emaan what can i say as usual ur stories r fantastic as u r . . .
Oh thank you Arifa! YOU ROCK HARDER THAN ROCKS!Thank you Aimen my oh-so-sweet-as-a-cupcake friend for your lovely comment! And Gracias Mi Amigo Fatima! Si I know Spanish and French. Buenos tardes means Good Afternoon.(in Spanish) And the french line Pierre said meant: Sorry Guys I'm late, I was watching a movie late night. Here are the translations, voila!
Sep 25th 2012
Nice but some sentences you write in french or Spanish translate them 2