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Emaan  Farhan
Emaan Farhan
Westminster School And College
Cherished Moments
Published On Sep 24th 2012
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There was once a little city; right in the north of Mexico called Miracle City. Miracle City was old and new, turn to the left and you can see women making sombreros and selling fruit, and turn to the right and spot busy shopping malls and restaurants filled with the friendly people of Mexico.
Santosa Revera was walking along the busy road, observing the scenery of the Miracle Park from across the road. It was a cold autumn afternoon, with red, brown, yellow-scarlet leaves blowing about the air, and there was warmth in the air because Mr. Antonio had a cosy bonfire lit up for himself, and it was a rather big one, and it's warmth reached as far as little Santosa. "Buenas tardes senor Antonio!" Santosa greeted Sir Antonio with a smile. "What a cosy bonfire!" Sir Antonio looked up with a twinkle in his black eye. "Buenas Tardes mi querido,¿Cómo está mi niña hoy?" That means in "Good Afternoon my dear, how's my little girl today?" Santosa smiled and sat next to him, putting her backpack on a log nearby. "I'm fine Sir Antonio; I think I prefer English to speak nowadays." Antonio laughed at her remark. "Ah yes, the children of today don't prefer to speak Spanish anymore. Well would you like a baked potato?" He asked, holding a plate full of baked potatoes. Santosa smiled warmly and took one. "Gracias senor Antonio.Estos son muy buenos!"
After finishing the delicious potato, Santosa picked up her bag and waved goodbye to Sir Antonio. She wanted to get home to take off her ridiculously big-in-size coat. "Hola Mama,I'm back!"She said, wiping her feet. She stepped inside breathing in the sweet smell of home. Mama looked sad. She was usually cheery and happy, and the atmosphere of the house was happy too, but today, the expression on Mama's face was as melancholy as a dark attic room. "Hola mi bebe." she said, hugging Santosa tightly as if she had met her baby for the first time. "I have something to tell you. Come,let's go in my room and talk."Santosa quietly followed her mama to her room.
"Mama ,that can't happen! I want to stay HERE!"Mama had told Santosa that her papa had got a job somewhere in Australia and they had to leave in 7 weeks. "Santosa Miguel, No tenemos otra opción, papá ya ha firmado los papeles." Santosa sulked. She didn't like the idea ONE bit. She felt incomodo about it. (Uncomfortable)
"Hey Santosa!" Mariela said,smiling. "¿Cómo estás?"
"I'm good."
"Man,no one speaks Spanish these days."
Pierre ran up. "Hey les gars, désolé, je suis en retard, dormi trop tard ce soir-là" Pierre was French,which was exciting for Santosa,because she knew how to speak French.Mariela did too.
"It's Ok.We know you like watching movies late night." Santosa said brightly,even though she was sad after the news of leaving dear,spicy Miracle City. "Hey,did you guys see Barbara selling handmade bags and scarves and jewelrey near the marketplace?" Pierre asked,in his high French accent. "I didn't."
"Nope." So Pierre had one thing to do-take them to the marketplace and show us what Barbara the English girl had set up. Then Raniah came up. "Hello Friends! Guess what? My brother and I are taking you to the marketplace today!"
When we approached the marketplace, we said hello to Barbara. "Hello Friends. I'm selling some things I made myself to make moments. I'm going back to England after a few weeks!"
And at that very moment, Santosa had a Great idea.
To Be Continued.........
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Comments 33
Raniah Hey emaan , i didn't forget you im busy now a days that's why couldn't open vshineworld much . . . . :) Raniah
Mar 5th 2013
Emaan I'm so sleepy.... thank you thank you thank you and whatever that I say when I'm thankful.... oh my god my head is drooping...... Emaan
Dec 7th 2012
l Happy Birthday to you.....Happy Birthday to you.... Happy birthday Dear friend Emaan.....Happy birthday to you....... L
Dec 1st 2012
Momina Hahahaha i think emaan is getting more compliments on her personality than her stories. . . jokin your personality and stories are awesome and u r sweeter than a sweet!! Momina
Dec 1st 2012
Emaan Momina: You can't be serious, I l y s m!!!!!! Thank you SOOOOOO MUCH!!! Hugssssssssssssssssss :))))) Emaan
Nov 26th 2012
Momina Emaan u r the greatest person i know!!!!! I agree with Directioner Forever that, which crazy, stupid (and believe me, i can say more bad words but i dont think i should:D) freaks wouldnt take u for a friend?????? i know I would (take u for a friend)!!!! u r awesome!!!!! how old r u? i turned eleven on 2nd october . . . and directioner forever, do u LUV 1D? Cuz I definetiley do.............. i love their songs little things, more than this and live while were young. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . they are awesome. . . . . . . But Emaan is awesomer!!! Momina
Nov 24th 2012
Disenchanted. Me too...nobody probably knows my birthday! do u? Disenchanted.
Nov 23rd 2012
Emaan Amira , it's alright, it's alright :) Thanks for your wish, it was SO special :) Don't worry about timing when it comes to my birthdays, cause I've gotten used to it ;) Emaan
Nov 23rd 2012
Disenchanted. I am ssoooooooooooooooooooo super sorry emaan i didn't wish ya happy b day but still i know u r super nyc so u will accept my wishes even if i am late......Smile a 100 thousand miles! Disenchanted.
Nov 22nd 2012
Emaan Eid Mubarak to all my friends and Amira, my best friend on Vshine! Emaan
Oct 26th 2012
rija Plss add me eman Rija
Oct 24th 2012
Emaan We wen to the Regionals but lost :( That's OK, I proved that my school's not stupid :DDD Emaan
Oct 8th 2012
zainab I told you a thousand times that its the dha board one not the dawn spelling beee one i did not lie really if you dont understand then you know all the schools of dha like that one not the dawn spelling bee what happen abut your spelling beee Zainab
Oct 8th 2012
Directioner Forever Yeah i got Ur request and i accepted it ofcourse:):).... Directioner Forever
Oct 5th 2012
Emaan Oh Zainab I'm not mad at you. It's just that Vshine's not posting my comments and stories lately. You know,delay? Hey I don't wanna boast,but I've got all the books of Candy Apple. Oh and Zainab,I did NOT see you at the spelling bee neither heard the school's name being called out. You lied,didn't you? Emaan
Oct 5th 2012
zainab Emaan are you mad at me i'm sorry if you are plz be freinds again Zainab
Oct 4th 2012
zainab And wait i have how to be a girly girl in just ten days tooooooo Zainab
Sep 30th 2012
zainab You know i know a bit spanish and where did you learn these languages sooooooo welll and how many candy apple books do you have i have all the accidentallys fabulous,famous,fooled and friends and all the miss popularitys miss popularity goes camping,miss popularity and the bf disaster and i have 1 poison apple book its her evil twin which do you have Zainab
Sep 30th 2012
Emaan Aww Assawer.... Emaan
Sep 30th 2012
Emaan Directioner. U make me feel ecstatic! Thank you soo much! Will U be one of my best Vshine Pal? And your stuff is a work of art! I LOVVVVEEEEE it! I live in Clifton In Karachi. Oh and I didn't get your friend request,so I sent you one. Did you get it? Emaan
Sep 29th 2012
Directioner Forever Hi emaan.. omg u are such a good person.. just read your intro and it made me wonder what freaks wouldn't wanna be your friends ?? they must really be outta their minds... besides I can make a good friend so please feel free to check out my stuff... it might be boring though but still..and tell me which place are u from in karachi??? I am in K.S.A we live here but while in pakistan I am from karachi too that is from gulistan-e-johar... so yeah please accept my friend request... U really write good... Directioner Forever
Sep 28th 2012
Emaan Ohhhhh good luck Arifa! Emaan
Sep 28th 2012
arifa Yup! i am there too... but the prob is that I AM IN DA 12-14 AGE GROUP! its difficult! i am the leader of my team. last year i was in 9-11 and I ACED DA DISTRICT round but we lost cuz of a stupid word in the regionals! my team's name appeared in the saturday Dawn Metro and South paper... BUT THIS TIME ITS TOUGHER! i am 12 Arifa
Sep 27th 2012
Emaan Yep! The dawn spelling bee alright! I'm in 9-11 Age Group and looks like Westminster's going to the Regionals! Hoot Hoot! Hey Arifa,are you in it too? Emaan
Sep 27th 2012
arifa In the DAWN spelling bee? in which age group r u eman? :) Arifa
Sep 26th 2012
Emaan Aww Raniah you make me feel super special. I put your name in the story because I like you so much! You Are The Best! And thnxxxx my friend Khadija you are very positive towards me! AND GUESS WHAT? TODAY WAS THE SPELLING BEE AND I ACED IT!!!! YEAH! WESTMINSTER IS GOING TO THE REGIONALS BABY! Emaan
Sep 26th 2012
Raniah O_o my name . . wow emaan what can i say as usual ur stories r fantastic as u r . . . Raniah
Sep 25th 2012
Tooba Oh............. Tooba
Sep 25th 2012
l I translated the word into English and understood the story....Well I liked the story a lot... L
Sep 25th 2012
Emaan Oh thank you Arifa! YOU ROCK HARDER THAN ROCKS!Thank you Aimen my oh-so-sweet-as-a-cupcake friend for your lovely comment! And Gracias Mi Amigo Fatima! Si I know Spanish and French. Buenos tardes means Good Afternoon.(in Spanish) And the french line Pierre said meant: Sorry Guys I'm late, I was watching a movie late night. Here are the translations, voila! Emaan
Sep 25th 2012
Tooba Nice but some sentences you write in french or Spanish translate them 2 Tooba
Sep 25th 2012
Aiman Wow great story!!!you know spanish or french i know a little bit french language but not spanish Aiman
Sep 25th 2012
arifa Gr8 eman! how many parts r there? i like ur stuff....readmine too Arifa
Sep 24th 2012

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