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Sana  Raheel
Sana Raheel
Mansoura International School
The Brave Girl
Published On Sep 16th 2012
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Tehreem felt like crying. Her father was going to America and she was gonna stay at home with her two sisters and two brothers. She was in tenth but she couldn’t study further because her father could not bear the expenses. She had two brothers but they were in grade 4 and one was in sixth.  Tehreem had another sister who was in going to start grade 1. Due to the expenses, Tehreem’s dad had to go to America in search of a job. Tehreem wanted to go with him but he refused. He said: firstly, it’s too dangerous. Secondly, I can’t afford two tickets.  So he was going that night. He had enough money to buy two tickets but he had to leave some money for his home and he needed some for his own expenses like food, shelter and taxi. He came to America safely but he did not notice the man who was just behind him. He said to him: Sir, do you know this place? Tehreem’s father: No. So the man said: allow me to show you around. Tehreem’s father agreed. The two men came to a construction company which was closed. The man showed Tehreem’s father a pistol and said: Keep your hands in the air and…….
To Be Continued…………
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Comments 13
Momina Mubushra nice pic i like da shoes... .... great story thank god wen i discovered it all the parts were out. . . Momina
Dec 14th 2012
Naaemah Nice i please write more it is v.interesting!!:) Naaemah
Nov 8th 2012
mubushra Waitin for da nexxt. good work!! when will u post next Mubushra
Oct 3rd 2012
Sana Tick tock tick tock when r u sending the next part??? Sana
Sep 28th 2012
arifa Waitin 4 da next part, sana :) Arifa
Sep 26th 2012
Fatima @SaNa RaHeEl when r u going to publish the next part??? answer now Fatima
Sep 24th 2012
Sana Aiman the next part iz cuming after ur stories next part :D Sana
Sep 23rd 2012
Aimen Waiting for next part Aimen
Sep 21st 2012
Waleed Good Mashallah Waleed
Sep 19th 2012
Sana When is ur birthday? Sana
Sep 18th 2012
Sana No i cant cuz i didnt think that what will cum next. i am still thinking Sana
Sep 17th 2012
Emaan Wow, I would die myself if my papi would be robbed at gunpoint.. YIKESS! Seriously,I want the second part for my birthdayyy!!! Emaan
Sep 17th 2012
Fatima :| coudnt you show me the story????????????????????????????? i am so angry with you Fatima
Sep 16th 2012

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