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Noor-ul- Huda
Noor-ul- Huda
Al-moattsem International School
Mountains
Published On Sep 16th 2012
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Mountains going up and down on each side
On the top is the happy snow
Under the mountains is the river
Never boring to see this scene
Tilted trees singing on the mountains
All expert climbers are climbing up to discover them
In the caves are the bats rolling around
Nights are scary but days are wonderful
Snowmen are happy on the top saying Hi and Bye to every body.
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Noor-ul- Well! THANKS Noor-ul-
Oct 15th 2012
 
 
Cuty Good effort Cuty
Sep 22nd 2012
 
 
Fizza NIce poem :) Fizza
Sep 19th 2012
 
 
Abdul Quddoos Ignoring the required minor corrections, overall it is an excellent effort at this age level. Good work! Keep it up! It reminds me the nature loving poetry of William Wordsworth. Abdul Quddoos
Sep 17th 2012
 
 

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