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Fatima Raheel
Fatima Raheel
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Real Beauty Lies In The Heart
Published On Sep 14th 2012
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Once upon a time there was a girl named Maira. She was the most beautiful girl in her town, but she was also selfish and mean. Her parents were very, very rich. The town only had one school, it was: The Town School. She was not good at studies; she nearly failed in all classes. She was popular of being rich, and had a lot of friends, though she could only make friends if she gave them a lot of expensive gifts. There was another girl in the class whose name was Rimsha. She was poor but very intelligent, a position holder. She only had one friend. Both she and her friend hated Maira as she was a big show off. Maira’s father was the manager of a big company. Rimsha’s father was a peon in an office. One day Maira’s father was going for work, when he received a call. After answering it he had a heart attack. They took him to the hospital at once. The doctor said that it was really serious and if they didn’t do the operation at once he could die. As they had to do it at once they had to collect the money which was one million rupees. They collected the money and the operation was successful. They asked him “What happened? Why did you have a heart attack?” He replied half-weeping” The building is burned and everything in it. We are poor” At school Maira's friends left her as she could no longer afford gifts. Some days later Rimsha’s father got job in a office. To Maira’s surprise everyone wanted to be her friend even though she didn’t give them gifts. Maira asked her friend “Why do you want to be her friend? She is not even beautiful. No one wanted to be my friend unless I gave them gifts” She replied “Real beauty lies in the heart”
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Comments 17
Sajal AWESOME! INCERADIBLE! BBEST STORY EVER! Sajal
Oct 3rd 2015
 
 
Irza OMG!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST STORY AND AMAZING USE OF GRAMMER YET!!!! I WANNA BE UR FRND..PLZ EXCEPT MY FRND REQUEST. TNX!!! Irza
Sep 23rd 2015
 
 
dua Wow very good Dua
Mar 2nd 2015
 
 
Fatima Thank you everyone Fatima
Aug 20th 2013
 
 
Maarij Maqsood Owsm Maarij Maqsood
Jul 5th 2013
 
 
Soha Nice story!!! I totally agree u, "Real Beauty Lies In Heart!!" Soha
Feb 25th 2013
 
 
Elsa Please add me in your friends Elsa
Jan 18th 2013
 
 
Momina Totally with Emaan, this is a heart-warming story. . . love the moral!!! Momina
Dec 22nd 2012
 
 
hira Awesome!Keep it up! Hira
Sep 30th 2012
 
 
zainab Good Zainab
Sep 26th 2012
 
 
Fatima Thank you all Fatima
Sep 26th 2012
 
 
Wajeeha Nice =) Wajeeha
Sep 21st 2012
 
 
Aimen Good story Aimen
Sep 21st 2012
 
 
hira EXCELLENT!!! Hira
Sep 19th 2012
 
 
Fatima I am writing another story perhaps u will think its boring. Anyhow :) Fatima
Sep 16th 2012
 
 
Emaan Wow,I think this one'll win Vshine's heart and win :) It's so nice :)) Emaan
Sep 15th 2012
 
 
Sana Nice Sana
Sep 14th 2012
 
 

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