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Sana  Raheel
Sana Raheel
Mansoura International School
The Magic Pencil (4)
Published On Sep 12th 2012
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After Najaf was taken to prison, she cried a lot. In the night she thought that she had passed through so many tough times and now --- another one!? It was just too much.
She sobbed even more loudly as she remembered her trial which had happened before she entered prison. She remembered as the judge said: 'All evidence is proved against you. You shall now live in prison for thirty five years.' And she had felt dizzy and fainted. Then she was taken to the prison hospital and had gained consciousness in prison. She was sobbing and had fallen asleep.
In the morning, she woke up and had a strange feeling that something good will happen to her. But then she remembered that she was in prison and was in there for thirty five years. She felt like crying but as she was going to, a girl (who was also in prison) noticed the tears in her eyes. She, instead of comforting her, said to everyone: here she goes again! She’s gonna start her crying again! Najaf turned her face to a wall and started to cry.
In the night, she felt that something was under her blanket. She saw that it was. Her pencil! She was very happy and, as the guard was sleeping, she drew the key to her prison and opened the lock and left the key. (She could have changed time if she knew that anything that is written by the pencil will also come true. The sir had written by the pencil I wish that Najaf will go to jail. And so it had happened*)
She went to a forest. She wanted to know the time so she drew a watch and came to know that it was 7 in the evening. She was really hungry. She ate some food and wanted shelter. She saw a hut in the distance. It was looking very old and deserted. So Najaf decided to spend the night there. Najaf entered the hut and was surprised to see an old woman with a kind face. She told Najaf that she was a witch. Najaf was feeling scared when she said: don’t be scared I am a good witch.
She studied her and told her some things about the pencil and a thing about her birth. She came to know that the pencil was created by a very powerful wizard. And that if you break the pencil, everything made or written by it will disappear or will not happen. She was about to break the pencil when the police officers came to the hut. She drew a door and ran out. There were some police officers and a lot of people over there. She took the pencil and broke it. She disappeared.
All the people who witnessed this were surprised... WHAT HAPPENED???
Her friend, who had left the school, was back to the city to meet Najaf. She witnessed Najaf breaking the pencil and was totally puzzled. She thought that she might have left some letter or something explaining this. There she found a drawing. She saw the ghost of Najaf standing in front of her. She was puzzled. The ghost spoke: My parents had a daughter who died when she was three years old. They found this pencil and drew another baby--- that was me. When I broke the pencil, everything created by it disappeared. So, I am also gone forever.
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Comments 15
Anam Arifa,,just 2 tell u,i was in the 9th dawn spelling bee 2013 in 9-11 age group Anam
Jan 23rd 2014
Momina Kinda creepy. . . . . awesome though! Momina
Dec 14th 2012
arifa Same here! :) different and interesting hey eman! pal, u in the DAWN spellin bee?if yes, then in which age group? Arifa
Sep 26th 2012
fatimah Awesome rly great work :D Fatimah
Sep 23rd 2012
Aimen Love that story Aimen
Sep 21st 2012
Sana It is an happy ending. for ME! its my first story ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) Sana
Sep 17th 2012
Khadijah Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?????? Give an happy ending :E Khadijah
Sep 16th 2012
Sana I wrote another story. i think it is quite boring from the first part. but hopefully you will like it Sana
Sep 15th 2012
Sana Thanx every one Sana
Sep 14th 2012
Sana @khadijah what else should be the end? @ emaan & fatima thank you :) Sana
Sep 13th 2012
Fatima Nice even though i knew the whole story :P Fatima
Sep 13th 2012
Aisha Nice story... Aisha
Sep 13th 2012
Fatima Outstanding! Fatima
Sep 12th 2012
Khadijah End ?????????????? Khadijah
Sep 12th 2012
Emaan I'm awestruck. This is too good for words. Emaan
Sep 12th 2012

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