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Sana  Raheel
Sana Raheel
Mansoura International School
The Magic Pencil (2)
Published On Aug 27th 2012
Total Comments : 6
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6 People Like this!


Rank 7 Out of 10
Najaf looked forward to her day. It was her first day in her school. She tried to concentrate but could not because she missed her parents a lot. She was always alone in her thoughts. Her friend had told all of her teachers about what she had gone through. So her teachers did not scold her because they understood that she was passing through hard times. When she came home she cried a lot because at home time everyone’s parents came to pick their children and she went alone through a driver. She went to her parent’s room and looked through her parents stuff. She saw a big locker. Najaf opened it through a knife. And found a pencil. She wondered why it was given a lot of security. She didn’t use it at all because she thought it was a special thing because it was given a lot of security.  In the night she dreamed that her parents were drawing with the pencil. So after school the next day, she drew flowers with that pencil. She looked around and saw again on the page and the flower was real. She thought that the flower came through the wind. So she experimented with the pencil again. It happened again. She was very excited to tell the pencils magic to her friend. She told her friend about it but she said that she was dreaming.
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Comments 6
Momina Totally agree with all positive comments Momina
Dec 14th 2012
Emaan Sana,you're story's one of the best stories on Vshine!! Loooooooooooooooveeeeeeeeeeee itttttttttt! Emaan
Sep 9th 2012
Aisha I really like it...It's quite nice and interesting.... Aisha
Sep 5th 2012
Sana Tell me if u like it or not...plz do tell Sana
Aug 27th 2012
Sana It is quite boring, right? Sana
Aug 27th 2012
Fatima Best story ever red sissy. Fatima
Aug 27th 2012

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