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Pivak -e-safa
Pivak -e-safa
Chiniot Islamia School
Eid
Published On Aug 21st 2012
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Eid is fun and great.  
It's time to celebrate.                   
Come on everyone
Let's have lots of fun     
Everyone's going to mosque to pray
People are grateful it's a special day
"Mmmm..." the taste of yummy food
Really puts you in a good mood
Everybody's wearing their posh clothes
The boys are cruising in their cars on the road
Children are opening their gifts with smiles on their faces
And having fun going out to different places
All of the sudden the day comes to the end
Well what can I say...?
Thank you for a lovely day...
EID MUBARAK TO ALL OF YOU GUYXXxx... :)
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Comments 7
Omama Mazhar Mashallah and HAPPY EID day may Allah bless U with His blessings very nice attempt Try to improve it much What is your real name ? Omama Mazhar
Oct 26th 2012
 
 
Omama Mazhar Mashallah very nice attempt Try to improve it What is your real name ? Omama Mazhar
Oct 26th 2012
 
 
Pivak No xxangelxx my real name is pivak... :) Pivak
Aug 28th 2012
 
 
Neha Nice 1! Neha
Aug 23rd 2012
 
 
huma Nice poem..........happy eid mubarik all Huma
Aug 23rd 2012
 
 
Ahmed Happy eid 2 all of u Ahmed
Aug 22nd 2012
 
 
xxAngelxx Pivak your real name is Imaan,right? Xxangelxx
Aug 22nd 2012
 
 

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