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Maryam Tariq
Maryam Tariq
Crescent Bahria Cadet College
Noor Ul Ain (last Part)
Published On Aug 17th 2012
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Princess Noor ul Ain told her that she was her best friend and she wasn't married anywhere and she is wizard's daughter etc. then she told him: "it seems that as if she puts the fish after 12 am and put off after 4 am, i am worried too much". The prince said: "just wait for some days, after that, I’ll be here soon for you to come with me as my bride, everyone was unhappy to see the wizard's daughter, i hope they will watch my choice soon", he returned to his country after spending 3 days in the garden. When he came in his room, the wizard's daughter said, where have u gone, i was extremely waiting for u from 3 days!" The prince smiled at her, then he first time ate dinner with her. The wizard's daughter got very happy for his success in the planning. Then he go to sleep, wizard's daughter also pretended that she has slept but after 12 am she woke up and went in the garden where there was a fountain. The prince too woke up and when he saw her going, he became red of anger but controlled himself and slept, she came back and slept too. Then after 4am, she woke up again. The prince suddenly woke up too; she became horrified but didn't show and said:"u r coming from a long journey, your body needs rest, please sleep". He said "where are you going in early morning?" she said "this is my natural habit that i woke up early and go for a walk." he asked "do you go alone?" she said "no my servant go along with me." he said "don't go with your servant, today, I’ll go with you". She got puzzled but said "no no you must not go with me actually I have brought a special flower with me, I put it in water at night and after 4 hours, i drink its water, if someone's shadow will come on it, I’ll get harmed." he said: "I will stand afar from the water but right now i am coming with you, u can't stop me!" she got so much afraid but said "ok". When they went there, she opened the box and took that fish very fast from the fountain in the box and suddenly closed it. Then she came back. The prince asked "u didn't drink the water???" she said "u were standing here that's y it dried. The prince said "ok, give me that box "she said "no no if you will pick it up, I’ll die!" from one hand, he picked his hand and from other he took that box, she lied on the grass and said "Oh my God Oh my God, I am going to die, please give that to me!"But the prince angrily said: "stand-up, u cannot die easily, I’ll give you the worst punishment" he beats her so hard and then locked her in the room. in the morning, he told everyone about her, the King became so frustrated and said "bring that girl, I’ll cut her in pieces myself!” but he said "no no I want some army and i want to go to the wizard's daughter's country, I want to tell the wizard everything and then the king will decide what to do. "he gave the army and they went to the princess' country, he told everything about the wizard's daughter and his coming in garden etc. the king said "give me my sword, I’ll cut his head "but then everyone saw that the same old man came and said "no she must get the punishment in which she would not die" He put his hand over the wizard's daughter's head and she became a black monkey! Then he said "take her to your country, and give her two time's food, go enjoy!" Then they all went in the garden and the prince itself putted that fish in the pool. The princess woke up and everyone was happy. She dressed again for marriage and when she went in prince's palace, everyone became happy to see the most beautiful girl in the world!" the monkey was also taken and locked in a cage in the animal's garden!" They lived happily after....
NOW GUYS TELL ME ONE THING, should I post its Moral Or not? And Also GIVE YOUR points of view about this story, it was bit long and I am sorry for that, I cut it from some places, still sorry :P


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Comments 15
areeba Nice!!!!! Areeba
Apr 10th 2014
 
 
raveeha Love this story:) Raveeha
Jan 8th 2014
 
 
Maryam Hmm ok everyone :) Maryam
Aug 30th 2012
 
 
Mishal Its an amazing story....... I loved reading it and you should definitely post the moral :) Mishal
Aug 24th 2012
 
 
Sidra Excellent story :) Sidra
Aug 22nd 2012
 
 
Saba Me waiting for d moral :( Saba
Aug 21st 2012
 
 
Muhammad Hassam Good Muhammad Hassam
Aug 20th 2012
 
 
Aisha It's great...And the moral should definitely be posted..... Aisha
Aug 18th 2012
 
 
Saba Ok:) me waiting tic tic tic tic Saba
Aug 18th 2012
 
 
Maryam Thanks,i'll post the moral soon :) Maryam
Aug 18th 2012
 
 
Aimen Superb Aimen
Aug 18th 2012
 
 
zainab Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Zainab
Aug 17th 2012
 
 
Khadijah BEST STORY EVER READ. Khadijah
Aug 17th 2012
 
 
Saba It really superb story accrding2 me yes u should post its moral too no need of saying sooiry i jst luvd this soooooooooooo much that i cant even tell u its the best & the best story i hav e ver read 5 stars 4 this Saba
Aug 17th 2012
 
 
Fatima Excellent Fatima
Aug 17th 2012
 
 

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