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Nimra Baloch
Nimra Baloch
Daps O And A Levels Phase 8
The Mystery Of The Mountain Deer (part 1)
Published On Aug 18th 2012
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It was a lovely day, the Johnson family decided to have a picnic in the green hills of the South. It was a splendid place with many meadows and greenery. It was always wonderful in there. Over a million people had already visited that area.
Andrew suggested that this was a very good idea and he shouldn’t forget to take his binoculars and camera with him. Mrs Johnson packed up a picnic. Andrew's little sister Anica, took her doll and telescope with her.  Mr Johnson started the car and they drove off.  
Andrew exclaimed,’ there it is, stop Dad stop''!  Mr Johnson stopped the car. 
They found a beautiful meadow with sweet flowers with a magnificent scent and there were mountains in the distant horizon.  Mrs Johnson laid the picnic. ''Go and play, Andrew and Anica,'' she suggested.
Andrew immediately got up because he was very curios to explore the mountains. Anica followed him. Andrew started to take pictures of the horizon and   looked everywhere with his binoculars.
Anica stopped him. She pointed towards the highest mountain. ''There is something moving over there, kind of like a animal, Andrew'', she explained. Andrew looked through his binoculars.
''It's a mountain deer, come on let's have our picnic we’ll see about this later, I have never seen a deer here before , this is a very exciting mystery'', suggested  Andrew. They went to have their picnic.
(To be continued .......)
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Comments 4
Momina Great cant wait to read next part!!! Momina
Dec 17th 2012
Duaa Nice and the vocabulary id awessomeee Duaa
Dec 14th 2012
Aamna Good Story Aamna
Aug 24th 2012
Muhammad Hassam GOOD Muhammad Hassam
Aug 20th 2012

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