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Menahil Idrees
Menahil Idrees
13 O' Clock (part 3)
Published On Aug 3rd 2012
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DING DONG!!! DING DONG!!! The clock kept ringing for a long time. Giselle looked at Robert with tears in her eyes. Would her elder brother protect her? Would he do just as he has promised on the entrance of this castle? And would her brother be safe as well? Or would she lose him? The thought crossed her mind and she shook her head. On the other hand, Robert was scared. Would something terrible really happen or was it just his fear? These thoughts finished when Robert heard some voices from down stairs. He went out of the room and peeped downstairs. He saw ghostly creatures standing there, with eyes full of blood and faces like hell. They seemed to be talking to each other. Making a plan or something. Robert wanted to hear more when he heard Giselle screaming "ROBERTTTTTT" "Giselle, no " Robert rushed to her. Ghosts were standing around the whole room. Robert couldn't get in. "Giselle grab something to hit them with". "Robert, idiot they are ghosts. You can't hit them". Robert focused on what else should Giselle do. Just as he was thinking Giselle made a run for it. She ran out of the room and passed through the ghosts. Robert was relieved to see her standing with him. "Now what?" Giselle questioned Robert. He thought for a moment. "Giselle, you passed through the ghosts right" "Yeah I did" Giselle answered. A thought suddenly lighted up Robert's mind. "What if we keep on hiding from ghosts, not that you can really hide but we will keep on passing through them if they come to us. Ghosts move in slow motion Giselle. Remember. By the time you came out of the room they were just beginning to raise their arms." Giselle agreed with Robert's idea. He was right. His brother was a genius and she knew it. If he had said this, it was right.
So, Robert and Giselle passed the rest of the one hour with fear. Well, I can't tell you the details because I wouldn't want my readers to be so scared that they don't read the next parts. In Short, they both kept hiding the whole night. Fortunately, just one ghost saw them hiding and by the time it reached them, just as they had planned they passed right through it. But still, every time that they saw the faces of the ghosts they almost succumbed at the spot.
Now just five minutes were left in 1 o clock. Giselle and Robert gave a sigh of relief. They had been behind a huge dressing table now. But then suddenly, their happiness again faded away. A ghost emerged out of nowhere behind the dressing table. Now there was no way for the two siblings to run because behind the table there was not much space to run. Giselle gulped, “This is the end”. Robert could not keep his mouth shut. It lay open staring at the ghost. As the ghosts came near to them, Giselle and Robert prepared to say good bye to each other as they were sure that this was the end of their lives. But just then, fate took a turn. Suddenly, the ghost started to burn and scream in just the most awful manner. Giselle held her ears. And then poof, there was nothing left.
Frightfully, Robert and Giselle climbed out from behind the dressing table their hearts beating very fast. They were weary from so much work. They walked to the clock and at once understood how the ghost had suddenly disappeared. It was 1 o clock. Finally, they could now rest a bit. "Oh Robert, man I was like so scared." These were the only words Giselle could get out of her mouth. Robert was just about to speak when suddenly; they saw some light coming towards them. It was a ball of pink, purple, green, yellow and thousands of colours. It was moving right towards them. Giselle backed away a bit. Another ghost, man would this ever stop? Robert also backed away. And then suddenly, the light spoke, "Don't back away. I am here to help you; there is nothing to be afraid of!"
WATCH OUT FOR PART 4........ Coming next month!!!
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Comments 18
Menahil I have just uploaded Part 4 (26th august 2012) Enjoy!! Menahil
Aug 26th 2012
Aug 19th 2012
Menahil Khadijah thank you so much for your wunnerful comments. But the thing is I won't be givin u my email bcuz I want my story to remain a suspense. As promised I shall upload part 4 on 29th August. W8 till then and + you are the best reader that I have ever had. Then the next thing is that yup, I waz in 8th BSS and as I chose Matric so my classes began 4rm March. So I am in 9th. Thank you so much for your comments and I would advise you to remain a bit more patient just w8 till the end of August. B.t.w my story has 6 parts and half of it ïž completed in part 3. And plz every1 continue reading the next 3 parts 2. Your comments have really given me tonnes and tonnes of support. HAPPY EID MUBARAK!!! Menahil
Aug 17th 2012
Khadijah And 1 more thing in forum (which was if secondary student should keep a cell phone(published on 2011) so you are in 8th class and you will go in 9th class after school holidays am i right ?????????? Khadijah
Aug 16th 2012
Khadijah I will not be afraid and i will read the next parts don't send it on vshine just give me your email and write the part you said in short plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz and also explain in short what happend after Robert saw the ghost in the hall after 13 o' clock's bell ???????????????????? Khadijah
Aug 16th 2012
Khadijah Hello!!!!!!! did you what I said (can you see it in front of your eyes (sorry). Khadijah
Aug 16th 2012
Zuhaa Cool and horrifying story Zuhaa
Aug 13th 2012
Muhammad I have started loving this cool but horrific story. Muhammad
Aug 11th 2012
Khadijah I have send you friendship ok if you don't want but just inform me. Khadijah
Aug 10th 2012
Ashna Wow....nice story! Ashna
Aug 9th 2012
Menahil Sure Khadija, I will send the 4 th part on 29th August. Menahil
Aug 9th 2012
Khadijah Menahil baji could you write it on 28th or 29th because after 1st september my schools would start plzzzzzzzzzz.......... Khadijah
Aug 7th 2012
Aimen Wow awesome stor\y Aimen
Aug 7th 2012
Aisha Wow the story is excellent...... Aisha
Aug 6th 2012
Menahil Thanxx 4 the wunnerful comments. Khadija, the total number of parts is ___________. U need to guess tht 1!!!! Menahil
Aug 6th 2012
Bushra COOOOOOOL STORY. I'm lovin it Bushra
Aug 4th 2012
l Wowww......The story is going great........I am waiting 4 the next part...How many part r there total........ L
Aug 4th 2012
Sidra Gr88 storyy.... Sidra
Aug 4th 2012

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