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Momina Bhatty
Momina Bhatty
Hurlingham And Chelsea Secondary School
My Brother
Published On Jul 26th 2012
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My brother's name is Salar,
He can ran very far,
He is six years old,
And acts very bold,
He has fat cheeks (Which I enjoy pulling!)
That makes look like a cute chipmunk,
He says he wants to pull an elephant’s trunk,
He was born in August
He hates it when his bikes' chain is covered in rust,
And I love him!!!
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Comments 12
Mushaim Huh maham ur just a kid and dont no slang ehh!!! one finger on meh four on yuh so suck it up!!! Mushaim
May 31st 2014
 
 
Mushaim Huh maham ur just a kid and dont no slang ehh!!! one finger on meh four on yuh so suck it up!!! Mushaim
May 31st 2014
 
 
Momina Mushaim, you can't even spell English, for God's sake. Stop giving me lectures. Momina
Oct 19th 2013
 
 
Mushaim Bad and worse eng Mushaim
Sep 15th 2013
 
 
Soha My pleasure :) Soha
May 12th 2013
 
 
Momina Thanks soha!!! Momina
May 4th 2013
 
 
Soha Momina, I visited yor blog! It was splendrific! Soha
Apr 26th 2013
 
 
Soha Nice! Soha
Mar 31st 2013
 
 
Eman Gr8 poem true descript of salar but 1 thing is left the part where he is a monster and we don't love him lol Eman
Jan 4th 2013
 
 
Momina Thanks :) Momina
Nov 23rd 2012
 
 
Saba :) nyc made me smile Saba
Aug 18th 2012
 
 
Ahmed Cute poem Ahmed
Jul 30th 2012
 
 

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