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Abdur Rafay Khan
Abdur Rafay Khan
Beaconhouse School System Pechs Campus,karachi
The Twin Brothers
Published On Jul 24th 2012
Total Comments : 18
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Once upon a time, there lived two twin brothers, named Nawaz and Harris. The brothers were so identical that it was difficult to make out who was Nawaz and who was Harris. Nawaz was a very shy and polite boy whereas Harris was a very harsh and reckless boy.
One night in the neighbourhood, Harris and his friends disturbed the people nearby by fireworks. Harris and his friends quickly ran home. The other day, a neighbour came to Harris and Nawaz's house to complain about Harris. When their father got to know about the news, he began to beat Nawaz (since Nawaz and Harris were identical twins). Poor Nawaz begged his father that he didn't do anything wrong but his father would not listen to him. Harris was hiding in his room and listening to the beating of Nawaz and while he was being beaten, Nawaz thought that the wrong deed was done by Harris and I get the punishment.
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Comments 18
Soha Good! Soha
Aug 22nd 2013
Arwa Nice story:) and i very very like detective stories Arwa
Jul 4th 2013
Momina You are a good detective try harder than you can become one!!!/ Momina
Oct 28th 2012
Raniah Nice . . Raniah
Sep 4th 2012
Anas One does not simply start the story with 'Once upon a time' and ends it in the middle of the air ;P.. jokin'.. interesting to see how people think of the conclusion (there can be many) Anas
Aug 28th 2012
Abdur Rafay Soory fatima i posted a wrong comment about u Abdur Rafay
Aug 3rd 2012
Abdur Rafay Fatima u r crazy i told u that only those people read this story who r interested in detective stories Abdur Rafay
Aug 2nd 2012
Ahmed Well old idea bud u wrote gud Ahmed
Jul 30th 2012
Fatima Strange ending Fatima
Jul 30th 2012
 яυмαιsα What a story,how can a father cant identify his children and the neighbours could identify who bursted the fireworks!! яυмαιsα
Jul 29th 2012
Emaan Regular story. Ive heard stories like this a million times before. Emaan
Jul 28th 2012
Maryam Ohk.. Maryam
Jul 27th 2012
l Nice story it could have been made more interesting if you ended it nicely... L
Jul 27th 2012
Sidra Does not * Sidra
Jul 27th 2012
Sidra The ending doesnoy make proper sense ?!?!?! Sidra
Jul 26th 2012
Syed Zohan No she is telling to take part from internet.Coz you searched it too.:P Syed Zohan
Jul 26th 2012
Abdur Rafay Maryam this story has no parts Abdur Rafay
Jul 25th 2012
Maryam Plz must post its second part...amazing story Maryam
Jul 25th 2012

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