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Abdur Rafay Khan
Abdur Rafay Khan
Beaconhouse School System Pechs Campus,karachi
The Shoe Prints (part 4)
Published On Jul 20th 2012
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"..........Dr. James Finn!!"
"What!?" cried Morton.
"How can this be!?" cried James.
"Please explain it all Mr. Stephen." said Morton.
"Hah, what evidence do you have?" Said James.
"Oh, I've a lot of evidence," said Stephen, "you see inspector this man, James Finn, has murdered his brother John Finn. He wanted to kill his brother because he feared that John would use all which their uncle had left. He wanted the police to arrest Martin as he feared that after John's death, Martin would ask money from him, so he planned to arrest Martin. He told me that when John arrived at his house, there was no one in the house, so James may have found it a perfect chance to kill his brother without anyone noticing him. But there was the problem of Martin. You see, Martin is a poor fellow. He can hardly buy himself any pair of shoes. James tricked the police that it was Martin who murdered John. You may remember inspector, which I asked you to allow Martin to come out of his cell. All I wanted to do was to check how fast can he run down a stair case, but Martin had problem in running. So I deduced that Martin can't be the murderer. You may remember inspector, you said that the shoe prints matched............"

(End of part 4......last part coming soon!!)

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Comments 8
Soha NICE Soha
Aug 22nd 2013
Momina So sad that the series is ending dieing to read 5th part on my way now :D Momina
Oct 28th 2012
Abdur Rafay Hassam ,5th n final part is here u can read it...... Abdur Rafay
Jul 23rd 2012
Muhammad Hassam OH NICE RAFAY!!!!!!!When the fifth part will come. Muhammad Hassam
Jul 21st 2012
Sidra Its getting more and more thrilling!!!! Sidra
Jul 21st 2012
Ali I knew who the robber was already. Ali
Jul 21st 2012
Abdur Rafay 5th part will B the last part..... P.S: if u don't understand the story u can skim read it again(if u want 2) Abdur Rafay
Jul 21st 2012
Aisha Oh i love this whole story it getting more and more interesting....(waiting for fifth part) Aisha
Jul 20th 2012

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