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Disenchanted. Xx
Disenchanted. Xx
Millions Of Footsteps.
Published On Jul 13th 2012
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I was walking on the seaside and suddenly I saw so many footsteps they were of........... A strange creature that I didn't figure it out so I decided to follow them I followed and followed it took like ........forever but I still followed them. They took me to a really dark cave and when I entered it and there I saw a web and a spider on it! I screamed and closed my eyes and then when I opened my eyes and saw there was no spider. There was just a web! And then I heard a loud crack and when I turned... To my surprise the cave was blocked by a huge rock! And then I sat at a stone which was close to the web and slept for the night. In the morning I woke up by the dawn's early light. The rock which blocked the cave had gone... so I happily ran outside the cave and when I looked down there was water under my foot then I got nervous and I saw a very beautiful boat coming towards me! I sat in the boat and never knew how to row it and then I found a golden sack with a note attached with it was written

"Don't row me I'll take you to your destination and this sack is for you it is filled with gold coins and how much ever you take them out they will not end forever".
I smiled and took the sack! Then I heard my sister screaming "Get up! You nut! It’s half past seven! And then I realized that it was only just a dream!
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Comments 39
Disenchanted. Thank you nazish n amna...=) Disenchanted.
Jan 24th 2014
nazish Awesome n amazing yaar. Nazish
Jan 2nd 2014
Amna Nice and nicely writen Amna
Oct 6th 2013
Disenchanted. I am a die heart fan of them... I love one direction a lot .zayn is my favourite. Disenchanted.
Jul 25th 2013
RAFIA Nice like it is any one know of one direction Rafia
Jul 24th 2013
Noreen Brawo! loved it Noreen
Jan 6th 2013
Fatima Is it your real picture Fatima
Dec 25th 2012
hira Well,i wanted to ask you that is it ur D.P? Hira
Dec 21st 2012
hira Oh!!!!! thanks a lot i heard them they were really good!!!!!!!! and yup u can tell me some more of them Amira...thank you again...:-) Hira
Dec 17th 2012
Fatima Gooddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Fatima
Dec 17th 2012
Disenchanted. Some english songs are : forever by chris brown,thought of you by justin bieber,rule the wold by iyaz,tear drops on my guitar by taylor swift,remember when by avril lavign,payphone by maroon5,on my mind by cody simpsom,next to u by jutin bieber, AND tell me if u want more =) Disenchanted.
Dec 16th 2012
Disenchanted. I will and i am amira! right guess! =) Disenchanted.
Dec 13th 2012
hira Awesome! keep it up! well plz accept my frnd request nd i am also a girl!:-) and i read ur info u like the song Without you by Usher its a v. gooood song i like it... i love english songs... can u tell me more of them so i can hear them... i will be very happy if u do me this favour....well im also 4rm America...:-) hope u will accept my request... Hira
Dec 13th 2012
hira Who is Amira??? well i guess Sparkly... is my guess rite??? Hira
Dec 13th 2012
Disenchanted. Yes,Assawer? Disenchanted.
Oct 18th 2012
Directioner Forever Amiraaaa????? Directioner Forever
Oct 16th 2012
Directioner Forever Amira u have got great talent in you... its awesome... Directioner Forever
Aug 30th 2012
Disenchanted. Thanks Disenchanted.
Aug 29th 2012
M@HRUKH Mention not M@hrukh
Aug 26th 2012
Izma Brilliant =} !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Izma
Aug 25th 2012
Disenchanted. Thanks Disenchanted.
Aug 23rd 2012
M@HRUKH N!!!!!CEEEEE M@hrukh
Aug 16th 2012
Disenchanted. Thankx Disenchanted.
Aug 8th 2012
Neha Nice cracker!...:) Neha
Aug 6th 2012
Disenchanted. Zara .....U r America's Most wanted tonight.... Disenchanted.
Aug 4th 2012
Disenchanted. La la la Disenchanted.
Jul 30th 2012
xxAngelxx Amira fa la la......... Xxangelxx
Jul 30th 2012
Disenchanted. I know u r a girl and i also know that u r a GOOD girl,right? Disenchanted.
Jul 27th 2012
Emaan WOW this gal is AWESOME! Oh and please accept my friend request because, you can tell from my name,that I am a girl :) Emaan
Jul 27th 2012
Menahil NiCe Menahil
Jul 26th 2012
Zainab Wow a wonderful story!!!! please accept my friend request i am a girl Zainab
Jul 26th 2012
Disenchanted. Zara.....Luck is yours,wishes r mine......GOT IT???? Disenchanted.
Jul 22nd 2012
xxAngelxx Very nyc Amira.....I'll miss u!!!remember me in your prayers..... Xxangelxx
Jul 21st 2012
Disenchanted. Thanxx Disenchanted.
Jul 18th 2012
Ashna Nice story... Ashna
Jul 18th 2012
Disenchanted. Thanxx and Zara u wait...... Disenchanted.
Jul 17th 2012
Raniah Heheheh very nice story! i like it :) Raniah
Jul 15th 2012
xxAngelxx Amira..How was yesterday????You CUT your HAIR!they were till your legs and now they r till your shoulders!Did u enjoy in Mazyad Mall!Sorry I laughed when Fatima spilled the pepsi! I loved the x rider it was the shaking chairs !wE WASTED 60 DHS ON SPARKYS!!!! Xxangelxx
Jul 14th 2012
Aisha Nice..... Aisha
Jul 14th 2012

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