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Abdur Rafay Khan
Abdur Rafay Khan
Beaconhouse School System Pechs Campus,karachi
The Shoe Prints (part 1)
Published On Jul 13th 2012
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Chris Stephen sat quietly in his sofa, reading a newspaper, when suddenly the room door flew open and in came a worried-looking gentleman. He quickly sat beside Stephen. Stephen asked him, "What’s the matter gentleman?"
The man answered, "Sorry to disturb you. My name is Dr. James Finn and I live in Kent. I want to tell you about an incident which occurred with my older brother John Finn."
"Please proceed." said Stephen.
James began:"We are fairly rich men. My uncle, Ezikiah Finn, made lots of money in Australia. He was unmarried, so when he died he left a fortune of 1 million pounds and his property belonged to my father. After a few years my father died in a car crash, so his property belonged to John. He used the money for many good purposes and got married and bought himself a new house. Last night I invited him at my house. He didn't bring his wife. We went upstairs to eat dinner. Between dinner, I had to go to the washroom. I left him eating his dinner. In the washroom, I heard some footsteps hurrying down quickly. I came out of the washroom and was shocked to see my brother dead. Immediately..........."
(End of part 1)
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Comments 7
Soha Great Soha
Aug 22nd 2013
Sidra Yeah agree on that @aisha Sidra
Jul 16th 2012
Aisha I don't mind sending in parts but at times it finishes the fun of the whole story so next better publish it once...... this continuation may be accepted if story is long.... Aisha
Jul 16th 2012
Eshah My brother has uploaded part 2 of this story he's w8ing 4 it 2 be published Eshah
Jul 16th 2012
Sidra Well, aisha i like it when people write in parts it creates suspense which is gr88...waiting for part 2!!! Sidra
Jul 15th 2012
Aisha What is this 2nd part all the time...cant you áll simply write the whole story once... Aisha
Jul 14th 2012
Sidra Part 2 part 2!!!! Sidra
Jul 14th 2012

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