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Eman Ali Bhatty
Eman Ali Bhatty
The City School
A Fun And Great Day!!!
Published On Jul 14th 2012
Total Comments : 12
Total Views :  848
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Once there was a boy named Ali. His mother, Amna, took him to the mall for shopping. Ali got an ice-cream from his mother. Then his mother took him to the park. His mother got him a toy car that’s doors could open. Ali and his mom were walking towards their car. Then suddenly, they saw a cute dog. After a little while, they saw a balloon stand. Ali bought a light blue coloured balloon. Amna gave the man Rs.50. Then mum took Ali home. Ali and mom had a cold and icy mango milkshake. Ali told his mum that he had a fun and great day. "Thanks mum!" said Ali.
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Comments 12
Nimra Ohh so sweet :) so how r u?? :) in which school and class u r?? wtz going on these dayys?? :) r u enjoyingg ur summer vacations??? :) Nimra
Jul 18th 2014
Eman This is stupid Eman
Feb 21st 2014
Eman U can b ma friend Nima baji Eman
Feb 21st 2014
Eman Hey its me eman Eman
Jan 15th 2014
Eman Hey im back.long time no 11 years old now.i live in london now.central london.i miss pakistan alot. im also going to write more books now.maybe il right a fun and great day 2 but with a different name.bye hope we can talk soon!!!! Eman
Jan 12th 2014
Eman Sorry guys on checking your comments cause my unet connection broke after a powersurge. hope u understand thanks 4 the support :) eman ali bhatty your friend forever Eman
Feb 19th 2013
Nimra Good one eman :) i am 2 years older than u n like ur baji ;) so if u like me and wants to be my friend so u can add me eman :D Nimra
Jan 24th 2013
Eman Thankz guyz i appreciate it a lot!!!! Eman
Jan 4th 2013
Amna Nice... Amna
Dec 18th 2012
Maryam It's not a's quite a short part of a story :P anywayz awsome dude Maryam
Jul 22nd 2012
Momina Good one, SIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :) oh, and :P ;) Momina
Jul 19th 2012
Ali Short and nice story......... Ali
Jul 15th 2012

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