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Raniah  Farooq
Raniah Farooq
Bright Future Pakistani International School
Haste Makes Waste
Published On Jul 14th 2012
Total Comments : 24
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Once there was a hunter. He had a beautiful hound. One day the hunter went for hunting. He had not taken the hound with him. It was left home with his son. When the hunter came back he found his son missing. The hound was standing at the gate. It was all blood stain; the hunter thought that the hound had killed his son. He became very angry; he at once killed the hound.
After this he saw bloodstain everywhere in the house. He was very sad and surprised. After sometime his son came out of his room, he told his father all about the happening. He told him that the hungry wolf had come into the house to eat him.
But the hound attacked it in time and killed it. Hearing this hunter began to cry at his haste in killing his faithful hound.
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Comments 24
Aiza This story is exactly same as in my grammar book.First you cheated and then lying.Shame of yourself. Aiza
Jun 30th 2017
Berha Thanks for SHARING i have read it bt u r not a cheater u r actually vry amazing u thought to share it and f u hav written it by urself more amazing! Berha
Jun 2nd 2017
mohammad aashir I...think you are the biggest cheater in the whole world Mohammad Aashir
Feb 7th 2014
afifah That story is in grammar books Afifah
Jul 27th 2013
Laibah Amazing story very well written ! Laibah
Jun 29th 2013
Izma Your welcome!=} Izma
Aug 25th 2012
Raniah Thanx"........ Raniah
Aug 21st 2012
Izma Nice one:) Izma
Aug 20th 2012
Saba Good Saba
Aug 17th 2012
Emaan Any time Raniah, Any time. Emaan
Jul 27th 2012
Raniah Thanks emaan :) . . . . Raniah
Jul 26th 2012
Emaan Wow, a very nice story with a lesson to learn for ALL of us! Gr8 thinkin'!!! Emaan
Jul 26th 2012
Raniah Oh that's nice . :) . . . . in pakistan i live in karachi . . . :) . . and thanx :) . . . . Raniah
Jul 22nd 2012
Raniah Ooh . . i live in qatar but im pakistani and in pakistan i live in karachi . . and thanks once again :) Raniah
Jul 21st 2012
Ali Really? 'cause I am also 12, and where do you live? Ali
Jul 21st 2012
Raniah Thanx a lot . . . my age is 12 :) . . . . Raniah
Jul 19th 2012
Ali Excellent story keep it up Raniah, and BTW, what's your age? Ali
Jul 18th 2012
Raniah No khadija its alright . . . no need to be sorry . . !!! Raniah
Jul 17th 2012
l Alright srry L
Jul 16th 2012
arifa She wrote n' emotional story>>>>>>>>>>>>..cooooooool Arifa
Jul 16th 2012
Raniah This was my frist story .. In vshineworld .. And aleena i havent wrote from english grammar anyway .. Raniah
Jul 16th 2012
Raniah I didnt copy from any where .... I wrote by my self aunty........ :) :) :) :) :)......¥¥¥¥¥¥£££££ €€€€€€€ *><*+*+*=*=*%*%*{*{*[*]******* Raniah
Jul 15th 2012
Aleena U have copied it from some english Grammar book....:( Aleena
Jul 15th 2012
l From where u coped..... L
Jul 14th 2012

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