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Bushra Idrees
Bushra Idrees
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Moon
Published On Jun 19th 2012
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June 2012
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Rank 8 Out of 10
I went to the moon in a fine afternoon,
Flying on my magic broom, flying on my magic broom,
There I made a bedroom
And inside it was a toy room,
I polished the moon with my magic broom
I found some food and ate it with the spoon
In evening I came to earth, riding the same broom.
 
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Comments 14
qurratul Congrats! Qurratul
May 22nd 2016
 
 
dua Very nice.... Dua
Feb 7th 2015
 
 
wardah Congratzz bushra gr8 story keep it up Wardah
Aug 2nd 2013
 
 
Bushra Hafeez Oh cngrtx BUSHRA............ im really happy to see another girl named as BUSHRA nd ur poem's idea is extremely best........ :) Bushra Hafeez
Jul 27th 2013
 
 
Bushra Thanks for the coment and congrattz to Maryam Bushra
Jul 26th 2013
 
 
Maryam It's not a mistake....she didn't say that she saw the moon in the afternoon....she went there....ImaginatiOn. Maryam
Jul 23rd 2012
 
 
Abdur Rafay D moon doesn't show up in d afternoon 1st mistake of d poem and its a winner??!! Abdur Rafay
Jul 22nd 2012
 
 
Neha Is it ur own creation???? Neha
Jul 14th 2012
 
 
aleena Awesome congrtulation Aleena
Jul 11th 2012
 
 
Maryam Cngratx. :)) by the way i am also declared the winner of june 12 Maryam
Jul 9th 2012
 
 
Menahil Congratzz on winnin Bushra! You r a gr8 poetess, u noe. Menahil
Jul 1st 2012
 
 
Menahil V. nice poem, keep up the good work! Menahil
Jun 23rd 2012
 
 
Afshan A very nice one Afshan
Jun 23rd 2012
 
 
Malaika A very good poem. Excellent job done Malaika
Jun 23rd 2012
 
 

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