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Aamna Zulfiqar
Aamna Zulfiqar
The Educators, Gulshan-e-iqbal, Karachi
My Visit To Haunted House Of Paf Museum, Karachi.
Published On Feb 2nd 2011
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On 9th November, 2010, I went to P.A.F. (Pakistan Air Force) museum with my family. We went there by our car. The car parking charge was 20Rs and ticket of each child below 12 years and above to enter the museum was respectively 20 and 30Rs .Fortunately when we reached at museum there were no long queues to purchase tickets. Taking advantage of it my father quickly approached to the ticket counter to purchase four tickets. I was so excited that I did no wait for my father to show tickets to the gatekeeper. I suddenly jumped in and found myself within the premises of museum. The gatekeeper was so kind that he did not mind it.    

In museum there were many rides. Among them there was a place for dogging cars that drew my attention and interest. We enthusiastically purchased a ticket for a car. My brother took a deriving seat. We had a lot of fun by dogging and hitting cars. When we finished I saw a monster house. It was dark black house on which there were monsters hiding and waiting for their prey. It frightened me and my brother also.       

My father,with smiling face, put a question to us: are you both, ready to go to the hunted house. I and my brother saw each other. We know that it would be so dark inside the house. But after sometime we were ready only on the condition that my father would go with us. After a long anxious discussion we entered the house in the name of Allah. There were frightened voices and crying people inside house. When we moved just three steps we saw a skeleton man with a knife in his right hand. He was pulling and pushing it toward us in the midst of darkness. I and my brother were holding the hand of our father. However, we moved three steps more we saw one more red-eyed skeleton with dark monkey. There were two more skeleton men holding axe in their hands. It was really dark and haunted. When we come out we become so relived. I was considering it the most frightened moment of my life. When I narrating it to my mother my father put another question is there anyone who can go alone in the haunted house. With courage and anxiety I replied that I would go alone. The gatekeeper informed the inside monsters to be ready to frighten eight years old baby. All these skeleton men were there. I decided to run fast as much as possible to reach the exist. I did not look around but just keep running. When I reached at the exist with no time the gate locked. The monkey man was holding the key. I kept shouting to open the door, open the door with fear and trembling. There I saw one human being was coming behind me. He opened it and I was finally out there. I saw my father who hanged and congratulate me.

 Aamna Zulfiqar

Class iv

The Educators, Gulsha-e-Iqbal Block I

Karachi, Pakistan
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Comments 5
Saadia WHAT THE WHAT Saadia
May 21st 2014
Tooba Keep up the hard work and its nice Tooba
May 3rd 2014
Nice, keep it up !!!
Dec 10th 2010
asif Nice Asif
Nov 26th 2010
zulfiqar Congratulate on writing a story. Zulfiqar
Nov 25th 2010

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