Once there was a girl name Holly she was a brilliant girl but her parents taught that she was nothing was a mistake but she was a very intelligent and love to ready books, her parents and her brother didn't like books they only watch TV. Her father was a crook and he sold stolen car parts to people. Her mother was very busy in her make-up and had no interest in her child, his brother was a big mean he always teases Holly. When she was 6 and a half her parents put her to a school near the village named "Crunchem Hall Elemantry School". The principle was a terror to the children she does so terrifying things, she lift a girl with her pigtails and threw her out of the school. When Holly was in her class she discovered that she has powers to move things in air. She thought that she will teach the principle a lesson. So she went to her house and terrified her and she left the town and the school. So Holly's parents decided to go to Spain for a permanent vacation she said that she wants to stay with her teacher miss honey her parents said that go and leave us live with you teacher. They went rushing to the airport and miss honey and Holly lived happily ever after.
Noor nice thing that u wanted to write a story but if u want to be a writer u must think of your own and also read books and ask your parents if u don't understand anything but still keep up the good work!
It's matilda but thanks for writing so that the one's who do not know about this story can read it hear.
good try but please try to avoid mistakes and practice to learn spellings as "PACTICE MAKES A MAN PERFECT"
Noor Fatima ur story may be a copy from the book matilda and i agree it is and ur grammar may be very weak but ur story iz not done without talent. U hv a talent to succeed. Very well done by the way!! Agree every body??