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Ali Aleem
Ali Aleem
St Anthony's High School
Dream
Published On May 25th 2012
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One day I was returning from a shop and I was entering the room when suddenly two cats jumped in (I was surprised because I didn’t see the cats while I was entering) and they ran for the two chicks we had opened (so they would have a little fun) the cats tried to eat them but I managed to save them and then I quickly put them in their cage and locked the door and as soon as I put them in their cage, suddenly an omnitrix appeared on my wrist just like people in Harry Potter disappear and appear, and I saw the two cats run for a bathroom I smiled because I thought I had them cornered and I quickly grabbed a pan and ran to the bathroom but as soon as I the cats saw me, one of them changed form into a little girl and click, I knew how they managed to come in without my seeing, it was because they had shape shifted into mice and I couldn’t see them, anyway the girl(cat) ran to the stairs and went up onto the roof and transformed into Ben with another omnitrix and transformed into Mega-Jaws(Megawhatt and Ripjaws combined) and I thought of Four-arms and I transformed into him and I fought bravely and grabbed the omnitrix on the Mega-Jaws’ chest and pulled it right off and squeezed it until it broke and then I threw the omnitrix away and I grabbed the tail of Mega-Jaws and thrashed her about wildly and finally killed her. What happens next, do I get to kill the other cat too or do I fail? Find out in the next part.
 
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Comments 34
Ashra Ali my brother also read in gulburg collage Ashra
May 2nd 2014
 
 
Ali Hey everyone now listen carefully to me i have something important to you know tell you that this story happens to be my MOST INTERESTING AND LOVING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ali
Nov 20th 2013
 
 
Marwa Nice story @Esha you should answer Ali Bhai's question Marwa
Jul 30th 2013
 
 
Muhammad Hassam Really Nice Muhammad Hassam
Aug 17th 2012
 
 
Aisha NICE STORY... Aisha
Aug 2nd 2012
 
 
Ali Everybody, the last part is here at last go and read it quickly Ali
Aug 1st 2012
 
 
Junaid Nice .......... Junaid
Jul 31st 2012
 
 
Ali Koi baat nahi. Ali
Jul 31st 2012
 
 
Raniah Dont mind :) . . . Raniah
Jul 30th 2012
 
 
Raniah Ali bhai . . . im really sorry 2 say i cant accept ur request :) . . . . . . . . ( no male frnds ) . . . . :) . . . . thats y :) . . . . . :) & nice story :) . . . . . . Raniah
Jul 24th 2012
 
 
Ali What do you mean "you are a loser?" Ali
Jul 13th 2012
 
 
eisha Yes i like beyblade too but yuo are a loser Eisha
Jul 11th 2012
 
 
Ali Thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx and thx everyone hahahahaahhahahahah!!!!!!!!!!!! Ali
Jun 30th 2012
 
 
Neha Nice ya Neha
Jun 30th 2012
 
 
Bushra COOL! I LOVE IT Bushra
Jun 25th 2012
 
 
Aliza Coooool Aliza
Jun 20th 2012
 
 
Malaika Good Malaika
Jun 18th 2012
 
 
momina HEY! I did not write that! My account was open and my sister came and wrote that! I did not know that! I promise! Momina
Jun 17th 2012
 
 
 яυмαιsα Killing cats,cant you name them dogs!!! яυмαιsα
Jun 15th 2012
 
 
Ashna This is a nice story Ali. Its a pity that some people can't comment nicely on other people's page.... Keep up the good work!!! Ashna
Jun 14th 2012
 
 
momina This story is lame,boring stupid.In fact I think all ben 10 fans are stupid and idiotic Momina
Jun 13th 2012
 
 
Ali I have uploaded it but vshine hasn't yet given me an approving or disapproving letter. Thx every one and I really am a huge fan of ben 10 and beyblade. Ali
Jun 11th 2012
 
 
Omama I am sorry I was thinking about another story! Omama
Jun 11th 2012
 
 
momina First you said that you have uploaded part2 and know you are saying that it is not published Momina
Jun 11th 2012
 
 
ayesha Hahaha, niice kid :) Ayesha
Jun 11th 2012
 
 
Noor Good story, looks like your a fan of ben 10 too. Noor
Jun 10th 2012
 
 
Ali What do you mean? How come have you read part 2? It's not even published yet, Omama. Ali
Jun 9th 2012
 
 
Omama Nice and part 2 was also good. Omama
Jun 9th 2012
 
 
Ali Yes I really do home school since I was 5 1/2 years old and Thx. Ali
Jun 3rd 2012
 
 
Menahil Really do you home school Ali. I have never commented on a story by a person home schooling. B.T.W nice try on the story. Menahil
Jun 1st 2012
 
 
Ali Thx and I have already uploaded it. Ali
May 31st 2012
 
 
Ali Very nice Ali
May 30th 2012
 
 
momina Can you please download part 2 of this story Momina
May 29th 2012
 
 
momina Nice suspence Momina
May 28th 2012
 
 

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