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Yousuf Afroze
Yousuf Afroze
School
Time And Tide Waits For No Man
Published On Nov 1st 2010
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it was a sunny day birds were singing the water waves were flowing happily i was focusing on my studies my mom sudenly came to me and said son you had enough now it is time to rest go have a rest or a bath on a beach i just took a deep breath and lazily went to the beach i was shocked when i saw my friends having a ciggerate my friends laughed at me and gave me a offer to have just one ciggerate i remembered that having this can cause us a cancer so i ignored it thay started laughing at me again and started teasing me  that i was a coward and other rubbish so at that time i felt very embarassing so i said i am not a coward snatched that ciggerate and took a deep breath and after that i chocked like that chalk has gone in to my lungs next day i coundnt believe me that i was beggineg them to give me only one ciggerate and thay asked me a geat qauntity of money for a packet of ciggerate at that night i stole from my parents locker the money which they saved for my college expenses next day again i was begging them to have only one packet and again thay asked me a geat qauntity of money my parents money was finished so i went to my bes friend and begged him  for some money my friend was suspicious that some thing was wrong and took me to a hospital and having a report he came to know that i had started having a ciggerate and he gave all the expenses of my operation until and unless i was able to be alright and free from having ciggerate i apologized my parents and they for give hence those who i met in the beach was caught by the police and was given back the money to my parents
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Minahil Nice Minahil
Jul 29th 2013
 
 
Aleena Rida mind your language Aleena
Jan 5th 2011
 
 
Aamna I like your story Aamna
Dec 26th 2010
 
 
Maryam It's amazing personally i don't mind having punctuation or grammar mistakes.. as i make alot but it's "imagination" that matters. if you have it your the best writer on the planet.. Maryam
Dec 22nd 2010
 
 
Rida Good job! awesome story. However, you should improve spelling, punctuation and grammar, keep up the good work. Rida
Nov 21st 2010
 
 

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